Comments For Spoiled
SweetTeaPi16 (Signed) on Aug 10, 2008 09:01 pm (Changes)
It should be Juki and that's funny how she wont tell him what she did

Author's Response: With a 4 to 0 tally - I'm going with Juki - it's a done deal lol.

The fact that Justin's getting all bent out of shape over it, is even funnier.

Thanx 4 your review!




danie (Signed) on Aug 05, 2008 07:45 am (Changes)
after i read that thing about justing being in the gym, i was like picturing it and was like that sounds so hot. if she dating somebody she ain't gotta lie. its like everytime i read this story, justin is always the jealous one but it does make the story better. i just got the urge to read this after i saw this thing about nsync on the biography channel, i'm feeling kind of sentimental or something about how much i miss listening to them i guess.

Author's Response: Kiki's secrecy has to do with her own residual feelings for Justin that she's in denial about - she kind of feels guilty for moving on.

Justin's about to be hit with the fact that he threw away the best thing he had and now she's a free agent. Its going to turn those blue eyes of his green very quickly and its going to force his hand. Juki are apporoaching a crossroad in their relationship - its going to be decision time for them.

Thanx for your review!




lostinadreamx (Signed) on Aug 04, 2008 06:38 pm (Changes)

Lol I love Juki. That has to be the cutest name for them. I'm all for Juki. Cameron has got to go! Now, does Kiki have another man? I assume that she was on a date when Cheyenne was at Justin's. Hmm... that is definitely going to contemplate things. Justin's already not very happy that someone else is going to come in and disturb their happy little family.

I think (hopefully) this will be the wake up call for Justin. All he has to do is see Kiki with someone else and I think that will set him off. It will finally make him do what's right. It's obvious those two still want eachother and it seems like their flirting is getting more and more intense. BTW, that description of Justin working out at the gym... yeah SO HOT! lol

That whole Justin/Cheyenne day was adorable. He's such a good dad, its really cute. Loved the update!



Author's Response: 3 to 0 for Juki - I'd say that's a sweep. Juki it is! I'm team Juki too! LoL.

Justin's family isn't the only thing his worried about someone butting in on, but its his woman that he's most worried about competing for. The only problem is he has yet to admit - right now its really just generic male territorialism (is that a real word lol), but when he has a name and face to go with the person that's poaching on what he considers his, he's going to be pretty ticked off. Its definitely going to put a fire under his ass.

Oh yes a hot sweat Justin is very drool worthy. Daddy Justin is pretty hot too. He and Cheyenne are quite the father/daughter duo.

Thanx for another fantablous review!




kahnechick85 (Signed) on Aug 04, 2008 03:02 pm (Changes)

I wonder what Kiki is up to. Something tells me whatever it is Justin's not gonna like. I can't wait to see what's gonna happen next. PMS



Author's Response: No Justin is not going to like what Kiki was doing. Even she knew that, that's why she wouldn't tell him. The truth is going to come out soon and it going to seriously stir the pot. Thanx 4 R&R!!



LaLa (Signed) on Aug 04, 2008 11:42 am (Changes)
Aww, i love this story. I hope you update aoon.

Author's Response: Thanx 4 the review!!

PS. I just noticed our pennames are like faternal twins LoL




DaniD (Signed) on Aug 03, 2008 09:18 pm (Changes)

Juki or Kistin? I think Juki has a good ring to it..It's more quirky.

So..I love the interaction between the three (Justin, Kiki, and Cheyenne)..and Justin seems to do great with Chey all on his own. Hated the "date" with Cameron. But...what are ya going to do..she's his girlfriend. *sigh*

Kiki's mystery night out. PLEASE tell me that she's met somebody! It's about time...and boy would Justin be jealous..heheheh His noseyness is hilarious. I want him to really MISS what he had with her...and I want him to really feel REGRET for throwing away his chance to be with this amazing woman! I know he regrets hurting her..but I want him to want her..ya know? I'm sorry, but he deserves to pine for her! Sorry...I have a bit of a mean streak. lol

Great update!



Author's Response: Ok 2 to 0 - its's looking good for Juki LoL. Good - I perfer Juki too, its different, catchy, quirky like you said.

I must admit that writing the Cameron/Justin scene wasn't fun for me. Yes she is his girlfriend, but its really a meaningless title. That's going to start becoming rather obvious.

Ah yes Kiki's secret - Justin is NOT going to like it when he finds out. Jealousy is going to run amok within Mr. Timberlake and the longing, regret and desire is all going to bust out. And don't feel bad about wanting him to pine - I wanna see that too.

Thanx for reviewing Dani!




MissM69 (Signed) on Aug 03, 2008 04:12 pm (Changes)

adorably funny chapter :)

p.s. JUKI for the win :D 



Author's Response: YaY! One for Juki - I like Juki the best too. Thanx 4 your review!



alimera (Signed) on Aug 03, 2008 01:52 pm (Changes)
Um. Yeah. Justin and Kiki need to get together again, they're flirting so much now! Lol, update again soon.

Author's Response: Exactly! That flirtiness and attraction between them has returned and its just going to keep building till they can't deny it anymore. But that drawn out denial might cause some problems..... Thanx for reviewing!





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