Comments For Spoiled
alimera (Signed) on Aug 16, 2008 09:32 am (Painting the Town Red: A Reunion Show)
Hahahaha...he's hooked again! Can't wait for the moment when all that sexual tension explodes...update again soon!

Author's Response: Yup Kiki's got Justin right back in her web and she doesn't even know it. The UST is going to start boiling over and Justin going to seek right up on oblivious little Kiki. LoL.

Thanx 4 reviewing and sorry it took me so long to respond.




kahnechick85 (Signed) on Aug 14, 2008 02:12 pm (Painting the Town Red: A Reunion Show)
I love this!!! I was wondering when Justin's feelings were gonna come back to get him. I kinda hope he tells Kiki how he feels I love them together. I can't wait to see what's gonna happen next. PMS

Author's Response: Oh yes this is just the beginning of Justin's awakening. Kiki's next line, but she's not going to be as willing to accept the truth as Justin is. You'll see ;)

Thanx for the review and sorry it took me so long to response :D




lostinadreamx (Signed) on Aug 14, 2008 12:21 pm (Painting the Town Red: A Reunion Show)

That was a great chapter, as usual. Shocking as well.

I never would have thought that Kiki dancing on stage would make Justin realize the obvious. Clearly he's a man in every aspect. He thinks with the wrong part. lol. I honestly don't know if it'll be that easy for Kiki to go back to him, even if he were to put all the cards on the table. They're both in really different places, and while I want them together, I could see Kiki being weary. I mean, the man destroyed her by leaving her when she was pregnant.

By the way, the show was hot. Haha, I loved how Kiki was unintentionally torturing Justin. The man deserved it! LOL. I just don't understand how Cameron is so oblivious! Does she really not see what's going on right in front of her? Hm... something is definitely up there.

Great update! Now go make another! lol 



Author's Response: This chapter was the beginning of Justin's awakening. Right now its in the physical sense - like you said he's a man and he's thinking with his other head LoL. But his heart isn't far behind and soon he's going to start realizing that his emotional attachment to Kiki is very much alive and kicking. Things are about to get really complicated especially since you were right - Kiki's got her own awakening ahead of her when it comes to Justin and her take on it isn't going to be so accepting. Juki's been living in denial for awhile now and its all going to start falling apart. One will be willing to face the truth, the other won't.

Yes the torture was just dessert for Justin, Kiki still has an effect on him and poor oblivious Cameron does not see it. But is it really obliviousness or a case of denial for her too? Either way Cameron probably should wake up before it too late ;)

Sorry it took me so long to respond, I was hit with a serious motivation block (I unforunately haven't gone beyond the next chapter's outline either EEK!), but I feel the juices flowing again so hopefully it won't be too long before I update again. Until then, thanx 4 your review!




DaniD (Signed) on Aug 14, 2008 10:53 am (Painting the Town Red: A Reunion Show)

THat was a cool update! I actually forgot that Kiki had been a pussycat doll!  *chuckle* I KNEW that Justin was going to be in trouble when he saw that side of her. I swear I could just smack him! Idiot threw it all away because he was scared, now look at him. Now he won't take the steps to get her back because he's afraid of being rejected. As he should be. I don't see Kiki easily putting herself out there with him again.

Meanwhile Cameron's tired ass is sitting there..and it's kinda sad. Justin cares about her..but she's a filler for that part of his life..that's it.

I'm going to keep saying this...Why can't Kiki have someone!? Everyone has someone..even Alex..but there sits Kiki..still single. I want to see Justin's reaction to her dating! LOL

Thanks for yet another fantastic update hon..Can't wait till next time :D



Author's Response: A smack upside the head would be perfect for Justin. He had it all with Kiki and just stomped on it. He knew that when he first blew it and that hasn't changed. Its just that he's been cutting himself off from those painful regrets. Now that its in his face again, he can't ignore it anymore and he's going to be looking to make some corrections. ;)

On the other hand, Kiki is in no way ready to go there with Justin again, but she may have a fight on her hands when it comes to resisting him.

You are right on point about Cameron's place in Justin's life. And its hard not to feel sorry for her because she's got tunnel vision. Whether that's intentional or naivete is the question.

Now as far as Kiki and dating and Justin's reaction to it....All I can say is that you're gonna love the next chapter. Hehehehe :D

Sorry it took so long for me to respond. Thanx for reviewing and I'm hoping to get the next chapter out soon.






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