Comments For Spoiled
alimera (Signed) on Sep 15, 2008 02:19 pm (Painting the Town Red Part II: It's Not Over)
Um, those two need to get back together like yesterday fast. Update again soon!

Author's Response: Yeah, Juki definitely needs to figure out what's going on between them before they get any deeper. Thanx for the review! I'll try to get the next chappie up soon.



lostinadreamx (Signed) on Sep 15, 2008 11:57 am (Painting the Town Red Part II: It's Not Over)

AH!!! You have been SO evil to Justin. It was WELL deserved though. That asshole needs to suffer for all the shit he put Kiki AND Cheyenne through. I LOVED it when Kiki just pushed Justin away. Yeah, he should be smarter. A dance in a club and whispering a name isn't going to make things better again! That man had better work for what he wants. hehe.

I'm not feeling Shai though. But that's because I'm on team Juki. lol. I have a feeling we'll be seeing more of him though, and that will throughly upset justin. :D 

The flashbacks were adorable as well. Ah! There's such chemistry between Kiki and Justin. It's unquestionable and undeniable. It's a matter of time before the two of them are finding their way back into eachothers arms. But, I do feel bad for Cam. She seems sweet and the way Justin is treating her is pretty shitty. I hope she tells him off soon enough. He can't have his cake and eat it too! 

 

GREAT Update!



Author's Response: I know I'm a stinker to Justin, but like you said: he deserves it. And its not going to be easy for him to win Kiki's affections back. He still has to prove himself to her before she can trust him enough to give him a second chance.

Hmm I wouldn't worry too more about Shai he served his purpose - the threat he poses already lite a fire under Justin and spark the paranoia in the back of his mind. Now we get to see how Justin will continue to react.

As for Cameron I feel bad for her too, but she should be more aware of the red flags going on around her. She's been in a relationship for over 2 years and there's been no growth. Justin obviously has no emotional attachment to her, he doesn't even really communicate with him. Sure he shouldn't be using her, which is essentially what he's doing, but Cameron needs to wake up too.

Thanx for reviewing Jay!






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