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alimera (Signed) on Mar 27, 2009 09:00 am (Fallen Through)
Ouch, butcherin my Spanish language!! Lol, don't worry, I've seen worse. Anyway...not happy with Kiki assuming things! Doesn't she know never to believe those tabloid magazines? Ugh. I'm sure she'll be regretting throwing him out of her house VERY soon...update again soon!

Author's Response: Ugh. I know! I'm totally aware that I get a big ol' F in Spanish. Especially when it comes to the slang and considering my sources are Yahoo's and Google's "translators" - yeah, fail. LoL. Sorry about that. I should hire you as my Spanish tutor LoL.

Anywhoo....Kiki soo jumped the gun on this one, but after all of Justin's staling, she's kind of expecting the worse out from him.Its easier for her to believe the gossip than his empty promises. You're right though, she is eventually going to want to kick herself for that assumption.

Thanx for the review! : )




lostinadreamx (Signed) on Mar 25, 2009 12:45 pm (Fallen Through)

Wow. I didn't see that coming. I really thought that after last chapter (hell and even the beginning of this chapter) that Justin would have learned his lesson. He's really out dicked (lol) himself this time. What he's doing to both Kiki and Cameron is wrong... *sighs*

 

And I totally didn't see the fight coming either. This looks really bad for them. I don't see a solution... so you'd better find one! lol. 

 

Is this going to go along with the real Cameron/Justin timeline? If so... damn. They won't break up till January! At this point, I think Justin needs some SERIOUS growing up and prioritizing.  That and he needs Lynn to slap the sense into him.

 

Kiki should totally call Elli back now. That would show Justin. :lol I'm clearly too involved when it comes to this story. Update soon... :D



Author's Response: I know its looking pretty hopeless for Juki, but don't worry its not the end for them. The truth is Justin still hasn't gotten past a lot of his less than favorable qualities. Its not as pronounced, but he's still got that selfish, stupid, cowardice, fly off the handle streak. Deep down Kiki knows that, a mix of denial and Justin's blinding charm made her look past it. Now that that streak of his has reared its ugly head again a part of her doesn't want anything to do with it, but a big part has always known its an ugly truth of his personality that will never completely go away. If Justin would just grow up, realize he needs to keep that part of himself in check when it come to the woman he loves, who loves him then I think Kiki would be willing to give their relationship one more shot. Its somewhat of a twisted relationship, the way they fuel the drama between them instead doing the blindingly obvious things to solve it, but they are learning that they need to stop being so stupid and just need to get over themselves.

Yes some events follow the real world timeline, but Justin and Cameron ain't one of them. You will not have to wait for January in my story. Kiki damn sure wouldn't wait for January LoL.

I know what you mean though, I find myself get in too deep with some of your stories. Maybe we should both be checking ourselves into FFA LoL. Thanx for the review girl!




mzmillion (Signed) on Mar 25, 2009 11:30 am (Fallen Through)
Justin is pissing me off....update soon, great chapter

Author's Response: Yeah Justin totally stuck his foot in his mouth and dug himself deeper on that one.

Thanx for the R&R!!




SJane (Signed) on Mar 24, 2009 05:28 pm (Fallen Through)
Oh oh I was getting so excited that they were finally gonna sort their shit out dammit lol
Mind u im still intrigued as to what justin had to tell her to begin with hmmm

Author's Response: I know, I know. Instead of sorting it out, Juki's shit hit the fan. They both just need to get over themselves so they can finally be together. They're only going to end up miserable if they don't.

Hmm indeed. Kiki certainly got a surprise waiting for her in her near future.

Thanx for reviewing!




kahnechick85 (Signed) on Mar 24, 2009 12:39 pm (Fallen Through)
Kiki needs to make up her mind what she wants. I wonder what Justin was there to tell her? Something tells me she just fucked everything up. I love this, PMS

Author's Response: See previous review for response LoL. ; )



kahnechick85 (Signed) on Mar 24, 2009 12:38 pm (Fallen Through)
Kiki needs to make up her mind what she wants. I wonder what Justin was there to tell her? Something tells me she just fucked everything up. I love this, PMS

Author's Response: Oooh a double review! I'll definitely take that!

That's right, this time it was Kiki's turn to be a little bit of a bonehead. But on the other hand, she does have a legit reason to fly off the handle like that. Justin track record at this point kind of puts him head to head with a gossip rag when it comes to dishonesty and empty promises. They both need to figure out what the hell they want from each other.

Hmm what did Justin rush over to her house to finally tell her? I guess you're just going to have to read the next chappie to find out! I'm going to try not to leave you in suspense. LoL

Thanx 4 reviewing!!






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