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lostinadreamx (Signed) on Mar 25, 2009 12:45 pm (Fallen Through)

Wow. I didn't see that coming. I really thought that after last chapter (hell and even the beginning of this chapter) that Justin would have learned his lesson. He's really out dicked (lol) himself this time. What he's doing to both Kiki and Cameron is wrong... *sighs*

 

And I totally didn't see the fight coming either. This looks really bad for them. I don't see a solution... so you'd better find one! lol. 

 

Is this going to go along with the real Cameron/Justin timeline? If so... damn. They won't break up till January! At this point, I think Justin needs some SERIOUS growing up and prioritizing.  That and he needs Lynn to slap the sense into him.

 

Kiki should totally call Elli back now. That would show Justin. :lol I'm clearly too involved when it comes to this story. Update soon... :D



Author's Response: I know its looking pretty hopeless for Juki, but don't worry its not the end for them. The truth is Justin still hasn't gotten past a lot of his less than favorable qualities. Its not as pronounced, but he's still got that selfish, stupid, cowardice, fly off the handle streak. Deep down Kiki knows that, a mix of denial and Justin's blinding charm made her look past it. Now that that streak of his has reared its ugly head again a part of her doesn't want anything to do with it, but a big part has always known its an ugly truth of his personality that will never completely go away. If Justin would just grow up, realize he needs to keep that part of himself in check when it come to the woman he loves, who loves him then I think Kiki would be willing to give their relationship one more shot. Its somewhat of a twisted relationship, the way they fuel the drama between them instead doing the blindingly obvious things to solve it, but they are learning that they need to stop being so stupid and just need to get over themselves.

Yes some events follow the real world timeline, but Justin and Cameron ain't one of them. You will not have to wait for January in my story. Kiki damn sure wouldn't wait for January LoL.

I know what you mean though, I find myself get in too deep with some of your stories. Maybe we should both be checking ourselves into FFA LoL. Thanx for the review girl!




mzmillion (Signed) on Mar 25, 2009 11:30 am (Fallen Through)
Justin is pissing me off....update soon, great chapter

Author's Response: Yeah Justin totally stuck his foot in his mouth and dug himself deeper on that one.

Thanx for the R&R!!




SJane (Signed) on Mar 24, 2009 05:28 pm (Fallen Through)
Oh oh I was getting so excited that they were finally gonna sort their shit out dammit lol
Mind u im still intrigued as to what justin had to tell her to begin with hmmm

Author's Response: I know, I know. Instead of sorting it out, Juki's shit hit the fan. They both just need to get over themselves so they can finally be together. They're only going to end up miserable if they don't.

Hmm indeed. Kiki certainly got a surprise waiting for her in her near future.

Thanx for reviewing!




kahnechick85 (Signed) on Mar 24, 2009 12:39 pm (Fallen Through)
Kiki needs to make up her mind what she wants. I wonder what Justin was there to tell her? Something tells me she just fucked everything up. I love this, PMS

Author's Response: See previous review for response LoL. ; )



kahnechick85 (Signed) on Mar 24, 2009 12:38 pm (Fallen Through)
Kiki needs to make up her mind what she wants. I wonder what Justin was there to tell her? Something tells me she just fucked everything up. I love this, PMS

Author's Response: Oooh a double review! I'll definitely take that!

That's right, this time it was Kiki's turn to be a little bit of a bonehead. But on the other hand, she does have a legit reason to fly off the handle like that. Justin track record at this point kind of puts him head to head with a gossip rag when it comes to dishonesty and empty promises. They both need to figure out what the hell they want from each other.

Hmm what did Justin rush over to her house to finally tell her? I guess you're just going to have to read the next chappie to find out! I'm going to try not to leave you in suspense. LoL

Thanx 4 reviewing!!




lostinadreamx (Signed) on Mar 05, 2009 04:24 pm (A Complete Mess)

How did I miss this update?! OMG... I really hate having to study so much... it keeps me away from Juki! <3

Anyway, I thought that Justin not being able to get it up was SUCH sweet revenge. Haha. He can't have his cake and eat it too. Now I want to see how Cameron is going to react to his breaking up with her. I can see her being mature about it... but hmm... something still tells me all won't be well yet. Kiki isn't ready to forgive and Mr.Timberlake will need to do lots more groveling!



Author's Response: It's okay. I understand how hectic classes can be. And my crazy behind is about to go back for more - *shaking my head*. Anywho....

*Giggling evilly* yeah Justin definitely deserved that blow to his ego. And poor Cameron was so clueless that she basically doesn't do it for him anymore. I feel for the girl especially knowing her time is up, but its inevitable because Juki are just meant to be. Still it won't be an easy reunion. Justin's dug his hole even deeper now. He's got do some serious work.

Thanx for reviewing! Good luck with the studying! : )




alimera (Signed) on Feb 21, 2009 01:12 pm (A Complete Mess)
Whoa, that was intense. I'm glad they got all their feelings out in the open but I hope to God Justin's going to fix this! Update again soon.

Author's Response: That release was long overdue for Justin and Kiki, especially Kiki. Justin was ready to apologize awhile back, but Kiki stopped him, she wasn't ready to rehash it. Now she's finally gotten it off her chest and a real apology from him. But at the same time Justin's definitely got his work cut out for him if he's serious about reuniting with her.

Thanx for the R&R




juno (Signed) on Feb 16, 2009 10:04 am (A Complete Mess)

JUSTIN IS STARTING TO PISS ME OFF. I LAUGHT WHEN HE COULDN'T GET IT UP WITH CAM. I WOULD LIKE TO THINK IT’S HIS SELF CONCONCIOUSNESS BEATING HIM OVER THE HEAD. HE NEEDS TO STOP PLAYING GAMES.



Author's Response: You are absolutely right. Justin is playing games now and its already biting him in the ass or better yet in his..... ; ) LoL. He needs to get his bum in gear, get rid of Cameron and fix his relationship with Kiki.

Thanx 4 the R&R!




kahnechick85 (Signed) on Feb 16, 2009 02:36 am (A Complete Mess)
I love this and I hope that Kiki opens her heart and gives him another shot. If she doesn't they are just going to be miserable. I can't wait to see what's gonna happen next. PMS

Author's Response: You're right they are both miserable and are only going to continue feeling like that if they don't get back together. But right about now I can't blame Kiki for being so guarded with Justin. He's totally playing both sides and until he cuts Cameron loose and commits to her alone, Kiki doesn't want to be with him. She doesn't want to be the other woman. The ball is in Justin's court now.

Thanx 4 the review!!




BellaKK (Signed) on Feb 08, 2009 02:08 am (And Sink Her)
This is one of my favorite stories. I can't wait for more Kikstin! They are meant for each other. Justin needs to end things with Cam, and then Kiki needs to accept that they're supposed to be together. Bad timing on the sex, but maybe that was the push Justin needed to finalize things with Cam.

Author's Response: Yeah Justin does need to call it quits with Cameron, he probably should have ended it awhile again. Its too bad that he had to cheat on a girlfriend, for the second time, to see the light, but then again, has Justin really seen the light yet? ; )

Thanx for the review!




juno (Signed) on Feb 07, 2009 05:55 pm (And Sink Her)
Justin and Kiki are a hot mess. They tore the sheets up and left if burning.

Author's Response: HAHA yes they are! And yes they did have that bedroom rockin'. Neither one of them are going to forget that night for a good while.

Thanx for the review!!




alimera (Signed) on Feb 07, 2009 11:14 am (And Sink Her)
Omg, that would be AWESOME if she was carrying their baby again--screw Cameron! I'm such a bitch, lol. Update again soon!

Author's Response: Whether its a smart idea or not, a baby is now a very real possibility for Justin and Kiki. You would think after the way Cheyenne was conceived they would know better. *Sigh* silly, silly Juki.

And baby or not, Cameron's clock has been ticking for awhile, its just ticking really fast now so I guess that makes me a bitch too LoL

Thanx for the R&R!!




SJane (Signed) on Feb 06, 2009 02:27 am (And Sink Her)
First the body shots then the sex god damn that was some hot fucking shit lol
These two just have so much sexual chemistry with each other its great...woo gotta go get a bottle of cold water now lol

Author's Response: Hahaha Justin sure did put it on Kiki didn't he? Gave her the one-two KO LoL. The chemistry, sexual and emotional, is very strong between Kiki and Justin, it always has been. Even when they didn't get along, put them together and something's going to bust. In this case I guess they both did LoL ; )

Thanx for the review Stacey!




kahnechick85 (Signed) on Feb 06, 2009 01:11 am (And Sink Her)
Justin needs to dump Cameron and beg Kiki for another chance. I can't wait to see what's gonna happen next. PMS

Author's Response: Justin needs to do something because right now he's playing both Kiki and Cameron and its not cool. He needs to get his act together aka. dump Cameron and give Kiki a reason to give him another chance.

Thanx 4 reviewing!! : )




lostinadreamx (Signed) on Feb 05, 2009 11:06 pm (And Sink Her)

Damn girl! You really are popping out these chapters like crazy! I love it!

 

Now, Maya really had the right idea. As much as I love the idea of Justin and Kiki, this probably was the worst timing for them. Justin SHOULD have dumped Cameron and then tried to win Kiki back... but he's a man so we can't say he's all that bright. lmao. But, I have to put some of the blame on Kiki too, she knew what she was doing, she wasn't intoxicated (well, maybe intoxicated by Justin but that's another story) she should have listened to her sisters warning, but I guess she was caught in the fire. 

 

Man, Cameron is going to have a fit because I have a feeling not many people that were at that party are going to stay quiet. Bring on the drama! Loved the update! Keep em coming!



Author's Response: I know! I've totally been a roll lately. I just hope the motivation sticks around for awhile.

Maya was seriously trying to be the voice of reason and Kiki already knows that she should have left with her sister when she had the chance.

You are absolutely right about both Justin and Kiki being at fault here. Kiki's well aware of her guilt too and its going to eat at her conscience.

As far as Cameron - there is a big chance that she'll find about about Justin and Kiki through the grapevine, but there's also a chance that she won't. Either way she will find out and its not going to be pretty.

Alright girl I gotta go now, just put Edison Force on so... :P LoL . Thanx for reviewing!

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