Comments For Spoiled
mzmillion (Signed) on Dec 03, 2008 02:57 pm (Family Matters)
that bracelet is hott....omg if kiki and justin dont get back together soon, im going to lose it.

Author's Response: All I can say is patience is a virtue. Justin and Kiki have some issues they have to get through before they can be together again. Thanks for the review!



BellaKK (Signed) on Dec 03, 2008 10:16 am (Characters)
This is one of my favorite stories! Cheyenne is just too adorable and your writing is so true-to-life. I am rooting for Team Kikstin or Team Juki or Team whatever as long as they end up together. Its obvious that they belong together and poor Cameron just needs to disappear. Again, love the story and thx for the update!

Author's Response: OMG I just realized I didn't respond to your review. I am so sorry about I'm usual adamant about responding. Sorry.

I'm honored to be one of your favs and being as realistic as I can is one of my main goal when writing. I'm glad you appreciate that.

Yeah the fact that Juki belong together makes it painfully obvious that Cameron really doesn't have a chance. She's up again the woman who not only had Justin's firstborn, but more importantly, has his heart. Her days are definitely numbered.

Thanx you for giving my story a chance and for the review. I promise the next ones will not go unanswered for so long.




SJane (Signed) on Dec 03, 2008 03:44 am (Family Matters)
I love all the little family nap times, sleep ovas they r having they just make me go awwwww

Author's Response: I know Justin, Kiki and Cheyenne are such a family, you know. The only thing that wrong is the freakin' parents don't see it. Justin and Kiki, more so Kiki, need to open their eyes. Thank you 4 the R&R!



lostinadreamx (Signed) on Oct 21, 2008 08:19 pm (Happy Birthday Pixie!)

That was so adorable. Cheyenne is a lucky kid. she had such an adorable little party! She's really the light in that family, especially for Justin and Kiki.

Now, let me say that Kiki going to JUSTIN to comfort her was a clear cut sign that she still cares. I loved how you described that her troubles just seemed meaningless after being close to him. That girl cares about him, is in love with him! She just needs to come clean with it nd embrace it. 

 

I love that little happy family. Theyre so sweet together. Kiki and Justin discplining Cheyenne was cute. Justin was so emotional. Haha, CHeyenne has him wrapped around his finger. 

 

And the name change! He got so teary eyed, it almost made me a little teary eyed. Cute chap!



Author's Response: You are so right - Kiki needs to be honest with not only Justin, but more importantly, herself. Like Justin, she still feels the exact same way she felt three years ago. Nothing has changed for either of them, the only difference is one is more willing to express it than the other. On Kiki's end, her denial is going to get her in trouble. She's starting to send some mixed signals, don't you think?

Despite all this, Cheyenne's party is like proof that Justin and Kiki can always look beyond themselves and give their daughter the support to make her safe, happy and well behaved.

So you like the name change huh? Good, but I bet there's a another name change you're looking forward to ;)

Thanx for the review girl!




mzmillion (Signed) on Oct 18, 2008 10:36 pm (Happy Birthday Pixie!)
Great Great Story, I read the whole thing over the past few days I can't wait for more.... I just want Kiki and Justin to get it on again...hhahahahaha... the sexual tension between them is coming off in steams...

Author's Response: Welcome new reader - I'm glad you're enjoying the story so far and I totally agree with you. Justin and Kiki need to stop ignoring and deny what they still feel for each other and get to makin' siblings for Cheyenne. LoL. But the more the sexually tension builds the hotter its going to be when they explode right? ;)

Thanx for the review. I hope you continue to enjoy what I have in store for this story.




kahnechick85 (Signed) on Oct 12, 2008 06:57 pm (Happy Birthday Pixie!)
Aww that was adorable. I'm glad that everything went so well. They are such a cute little family. Cameron needs to go away and they need to get back together. I can't wait to see what's gonna happen next. PMS

Author's Response: Justin, Cheyenne and Kiki definitely make the cutest family, but they still have to get to that point where they are an actual family. You could say Cameron's one of those obstacles in the way of that, but she's pretty much the last thought in Justin's mind now-a-days. But she is still there and if Justin and Kiki continue to gravitate towards each other like they have, its going to become a problem.

Thanx for the R&R!




alimera (Signed) on Oct 12, 2008 08:52 am (Happy Birthday Pixie!)
Aww, little Cheyenne had a birthday I'm sure she will never forget...and now she's an official Timberlake! So adorable. Update again soon!

Author's Response: You're right - even though this was her second birthday, it was probably more monumental than the first.

Yup there's one more Timberlake in the bunch. Hmmm maybe there'll be a third ;)

Thanx for reviewing!




SJane (Signed) on Oct 12, 2008 06:00 am (Happy Birthday Pixie!)
ph family fun time i just love it. I think after the name change it felt like everything is slowly comming back together now if only justin and Kiki somehow get back together hint hint lmao

great update Luv

Author's Response: Don't worry I got the hint ;) and let's just say I like happy endings so there will be another Timberlake in that trio one day. But its going to take a lengthy and bumpy road before they get there. Make sure you stay tuned ;)

Glad you enjoyed the happy fluffiness in this chapter. Thanx u 4 the review girl!




alimera (Signed) on Sep 15, 2008 02:19 pm (Painting the Town Red Part II: It's Not Over)
Um, those two need to get back together like yesterday fast. Update again soon!

Author's Response: Yeah, Juki definitely needs to figure out what's going on between them before they get any deeper. Thanx for the review! I'll try to get the next chappie up soon.



lostinadreamx (Signed) on Sep 15, 2008 11:57 am (Painting the Town Red Part II: It's Not Over)

AH!!! You have been SO evil to Justin. It was WELL deserved though. That asshole needs to suffer for all the shit he put Kiki AND Cheyenne through. I LOVED it when Kiki just pushed Justin away. Yeah, he should be smarter. A dance in a club and whispering a name isn't going to make things better again! That man had better work for what he wants. hehe.

I'm not feeling Shai though. But that's because I'm on team Juki. lol. I have a feeling we'll be seeing more of him though, and that will throughly upset justin. :D 

The flashbacks were adorable as well. Ah! There's such chemistry between Kiki and Justin. It's unquestionable and undeniable. It's a matter of time before the two of them are finding their way back into eachothers arms. But, I do feel bad for Cam. She seems sweet and the way Justin is treating her is pretty shitty. I hope she tells him off soon enough. He can't have his cake and eat it too! 

 

GREAT Update!



Author's Response: I know I'm a stinker to Justin, but like you said: he deserves it. And its not going to be easy for him to win Kiki's affections back. He still has to prove himself to her before she can trust him enough to give him a second chance.

Hmm I wouldn't worry too more about Shai he served his purpose - the threat he poses already lite a fire under Justin and spark the paranoia in the back of his mind. Now we get to see how Justin will continue to react.

As for Cameron I feel bad for her too, but she should be more aware of the red flags going on around her. She's been in a relationship for over 2 years and there's been no growth. Justin obviously has no emotional attachment to her, he doesn't even really communicate with him. Sure he shouldn't be using her, which is essentially what he's doing, but Cameron needs to wake up too.

Thanx for reviewing Jay!




alimera (Signed) on Aug 16, 2008 09:32 am (Painting the Town Red: A Reunion Show)
Hahahaha...he's hooked again! Can't wait for the moment when all that sexual tension explodes...update again soon!

Author's Response: Yup Kiki's got Justin right back in her web and she doesn't even know it. The UST is going to start boiling over and Justin going to seek right up on oblivious little Kiki. LoL.

Thanx 4 reviewing and sorry it took me so long to respond.




kahnechick85 (Signed) on Aug 14, 2008 02:12 pm (Painting the Town Red: A Reunion Show)
I love this!!! I was wondering when Justin's feelings were gonna come back to get him. I kinda hope he tells Kiki how he feels I love them together. I can't wait to see what's gonna happen next. PMS

Author's Response: Oh yes this is just the beginning of Justin's awakening. Kiki's next line, but she's not going to be as willing to accept the truth as Justin is. You'll see ;)

Thanx for the review and sorry it took me so long to response :D




lostinadreamx (Signed) on Aug 14, 2008 12:21 pm (Painting the Town Red: A Reunion Show)

That was a great chapter, as usual. Shocking as well.

I never would have thought that Kiki dancing on stage would make Justin realize the obvious. Clearly he's a man in every aspect. He thinks with the wrong part. lol. I honestly don't know if it'll be that easy for Kiki to go back to him, even if he were to put all the cards on the table. They're both in really different places, and while I want them together, I could see Kiki being weary. I mean, the man destroyed her by leaving her when she was pregnant.

By the way, the show was hot. Haha, I loved how Kiki was unintentionally torturing Justin. The man deserved it! LOL. I just don't understand how Cameron is so oblivious! Does she really not see what's going on right in front of her? Hm... something is definitely up there.

Great update! Now go make another! lol 



Author's Response: This chapter was the beginning of Justin's awakening. Right now its in the physical sense - like you said he's a man and he's thinking with his other head LoL. But his heart isn't far behind and soon he's going to start realizing that his emotional attachment to Kiki is very much alive and kicking. Things are about to get really complicated especially since you were right - Kiki's got her own awakening ahead of her when it comes to Justin and her take on it isn't going to be so accepting. Juki's been living in denial for awhile now and its all going to start falling apart. One will be willing to face the truth, the other won't.

Yes the torture was just dessert for Justin, Kiki still has an effect on him and poor oblivious Cameron does not see it. But is it really obliviousness or a case of denial for her too? Either way Cameron probably should wake up before it too late ;)

Sorry it took me so long to respond, I was hit with a serious motivation block (I unforunately haven't gone beyond the next chapter's outline either EEK!), but I feel the juices flowing again so hopefully it won't be too long before I update again. Until then, thanx 4 your review!




DaniD (Signed) on Aug 14, 2008 10:53 am (Painting the Town Red: A Reunion Show)

THat was a cool update! I actually forgot that Kiki had been a pussycat doll!  *chuckle* I KNEW that Justin was going to be in trouble when he saw that side of her. I swear I could just smack him! Idiot threw it all away because he was scared, now look at him. Now he won't take the steps to get her back because he's afraid of being rejected. As he should be. I don't see Kiki easily putting herself out there with him again.

Meanwhile Cameron's tired ass is sitting there..and it's kinda sad. Justin cares about her..but she's a filler for that part of his life..that's it.

I'm going to keep saying this...Why can't Kiki have someone!? Everyone has someone..even Alex..but there sits Kiki..still single. I want to see Justin's reaction to her dating! LOL

Thanks for yet another fantastic update hon..Can't wait till next time :D



Author's Response: A smack upside the head would be perfect for Justin. He had it all with Kiki and just stomped on it. He knew that when he first blew it and that hasn't changed. Its just that he's been cutting himself off from those painful regrets. Now that its in his face again, he can't ignore it anymore and he's going to be looking to make some corrections. ;)

On the other hand, Kiki is in no way ready to go there with Justin again, but she may have a fight on her hands when it comes to resisting him.

You are right on point about Cameron's place in Justin's life. And its hard not to feel sorry for her because she's got tunnel vision. Whether that's intentional or naivete is the question.

Now as far as Kiki and dating and Justin's reaction to it....All I can say is that you're gonna love the next chapter. Hehehehe :D

Sorry it took so long for me to respond. Thanx for reviewing and I'm hoping to get the next chapter out soon.




SweetTeaPi16 (Signed) on Aug 10, 2008 09:01 pm (Changes)
It should be Juki and that's funny how she wont tell him what she did

Author's Response: With a 4 to 0 tally - I'm going with Juki - it's a done deal lol.

The fact that Justin's getting all bent out of shape over it, is even funnier.

Thanx 4 your review!






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