Aww that was so sad. I loved it though.

Author's Response: Aw yeah it was really, sad but it had a sweet ending. :D I'm really glad you liked it and thanks for telling me what you thought. :)

P.S. Hold up! moving where? are u for real? congrats?! i knew ud take the cake! *HUGE HUGS*

Author's Response: Yeah, a few of us from the hostee challenge is moving over there so I'm excited... :) Thanks.

Gu-guess whos baaack! Now thats what im talkin about, can we say amazing? i dont know where to began but loved it, absolutely loved how real this was and how u let the song do the talking-l o v e i t- dani

Author's Response: OMG so glad you're back girl. I emailed you did you get it? No matter, welcome back to the archives. hehe. Thanks a million for the positive words dani, I always like your animated reviews hehe. Happy you enjoyed it.

OMG! that was soooo sad and heart breaking. :( you made me cry donna. How could you put your readers through this? No I'm playing. I loved it. I loved it alot but goddamn, it was sad. My condolences to Justin and poor sweet Chloe. I felt like I was right there with Justin through the whole thing. You're gifted girl, keep up the awesomeness. good luck in the challenge.

Author's Response: I'm sorry if i tugged at those emotions, but I really wanted you all to connect to what Justin and Jaz were feeling. Glad it worked. :) Thanks a lot for the compliment and feedback.

Can I just say "I hate you" sikkkeeee!!! LOL. It was great, I loved it, you definitely have a good one for the entry......not that I'm happy about it....lol.

Author's Response: OMG! Hahaha....it's cool. The feedback is much appreciated. I checked out your own, it's great too! :).

I'm glad the baby was his.

Author's Response: I know, I was contemplating on that decision, but since it was a short, I decided to make at least some of it good news. hehe. Thanks for the feedback gigi.

Oh wow that was really sad Donna. If I wasn't already crying from watching something sad on the television, I'm sure I would have been weeping by the end of this short. It's sad that Jaz didn't even get to hold her own daughter or that Justin didn't get to voice his forgiveness directly. But that's okay because somewhere in those stars Jaz is looking down upon them. Great short.

Author's Response: :(. I know it was really depressing, but I agree it had a sweet ending and I believe Jaz is looking down on them too. :D. So happy you liked it. Thanks a bunch for commenting.

omg, that was sad.. i cried. :-( i love it tho.. keep up the great work.

Author's Response: I'm sorry for making you cry but at least that means I got the emotions I wanted to portray accross. Thanks for the feedback :)

What is with the sad stories/chapter updates today? (haha). That made my heart hurt it was so sad. But it was a great little story. Good job girl!

Author's Response: Oh I'm sorry Bri, I know it had a lot of angst but that's what I was going for. :). Still glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for the support girl. I appreciate it.