Comments For Right in Front of Me
d_simplicity (Signed) on Dec 07, 2008 01:45 am (Chapter 1)
Bri, when are you going to update again? I have Justin and Selah Withdrawal...I miss those two. :(. I read chap. 16 again by the way...still hoteness. LOL
MochaB (Signed) on Aug 26, 2008 09:42 pm (Chapter 1)
dang it. i'm pissed. i caught up and read the chapter before this new one (which i have not yet read) and posted two reviews and they were long and so good and now they are gone since the archive moved! waaaaaah!! :o( haha. dang it. thought i'd share my pain with you. thanks for listening. ;o)
Timberlake (Signed) on Aug 21, 2008 12:44 am (Chapter 1)
girl, this is mad random, and don't kill me if you are and i've spoken to you, cuz lawd knows i got my granny days when i can't remember a damn thing, so... yeah. are you a member of the eden forum sugar shack? http://www.tasting-eden.com/forum
if you are, post something like 'here i am' and if you're not, join. we'd love to have you. you should even try out for the hostee challenge and try and get on the eden crew. you are a fresh talent and we'd love to have you =]
Tash2 (Signed) on Jul 25, 2008 08:00 am (Chapter 1)
Okay i have a lot to say cause this story means a lot to me. First off, You are so amazingly wonderful for this one i've never been more hooked on a story before it's just great and you ain't done yet. Secondly, I love Justin and Sel so much they got so much fire between them you almost have to check the wires on your computer after each chapter . Now i like nick he cool and right now he where he need to be but he need not forward his mail there cause he will be moving along soon it's no way of stopping it . When they first thought up this lwt's just be friends R.l and deborah cox started going off in my head."WE CAN't BE FRIENDS" but they trying which is cool it's cute . As far as chap 12 goes homey almost slipped up with the "if you passionate about something or someone don't let anything stop you." I caught that and that song does make you feel like he doign stuff to your body it just so seductive it's almost sinful. Well i'm done I just had to get that iout since i can finally review i had been ill could sit up long enough to type but since i can expect more from me. i'm done no wait GREAT FUCKING STORY!!!! now i'm through.
Author's Response: OMG, your review just made my day. First off thank you so very much for taking time to read and review my story. It means so much because I'm still new to this whole writing thing and I never expected people to like my story so much. Secondly, you had me cracking up on some of the points you brought up...some very important ones might I add. Justin and Selah do have some crazy chemistry and even though they're trying real hard to keep it in the friends zone, you can definitely tell that they're having trouble keeping it together, especially Justin. In fact I think you're the only person who mentioned his slip up, so good eye on that one. I think right now Selah thinks she's in the clear and wants to move forward with Nick since her and Justin are on the friendship tip, so hopefully she'll be able to do that without "other" feelings getting in the way if you know what I mean. ; ) And OMG, that song by Deborah Cox and R.L. used to be the cut back in the day! Haha. But I can see why you would think of that song, I feel you on that. Again, thank you so much for your review, I really appreciate it and I'll be updating soon!
Author's Response: OMG, your review just made my day. First off thank you so very much for taking time to read and review my story. It means so much because I'm still new to this whole writing thing and I never expected people to like my story so much. Secondly, you had me cracking up on some of the points you brought up...some very important ones might I add. Justin and Selah do have some crazy chemistry and even though they're trying real hard to keep it in the friends zone, you can definitely tell that they're having trouble keeping it together, especially Justin. In fact I think you're the only person who mentioned his slip up, so good eye on that one. I think right now Selah thinks she's in the clear and wants to move forward with Nick since her and Justin are on the friendship tip, so hopefully she'll be able to do that without "other" feelings getting in the way if you know what I mean. ; ) And OMG, that song by Deborah Cox and R.L. used to be the cut back in the day! Haha. But I can see why you would think of that song, I feel you on that. Again, thank you so much for your review, I really appreciate it and I'll be updating soon!
Jbear (Signed) on Jul 24, 2008 06:42 pm (Chapter 1)
I finally got 2 read this & ur story rocks! I so love it & can't wait 4 the update. Keep up the good work.
Author's Response: Aww, thank you so much! I really appreciate your words and I'm glad you're enjoying the story. I'm almost done with this next update-finally-(haha) so I'm hoping to get it up soon. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Author's Response: Aww, thank you so much! I really appreciate your words and I'm glad you're enjoying the story. I'm almost done with this next update-finally-(haha) so I'm hoping to get it up soon. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
MochaB (Signed) on Jul 11, 2008 11:16 pm (Chapter 1)
Author's Response: Hahahaha! I wouldn't have known if you hadn't of pointed it out to me. Thanks so much though for the love and your always awesome reviews, I really appreciate it!
and i must point out what i noticed today. you have 11s all over the place. 11th chapter (even though it's really 10 but whatever haha), began on june 11th, updated today july 11th. happy one month anniversary!! haha. i'm so cool. *heavy sarcasm* lol :o)
Author's Response: Hahahaha! I wouldn't have known if you hadn't of pointed it out to me. Thanks so much though for the love and your always awesome reviews, I really appreciate it!
d_simplicity (Signed) on Jul 07, 2008 05:08 pm (Chapter 1)
I'm like three updates behind. ugh. lol.I'm trying to catch up. Will let you know when I have. :)
Author's Response: Aww don't worry girlie, take your time because a lot happens in these last three updates so I hope you enjoy them and thanks for reading love!
Author's Response: Aww don't worry girlie, take your time because a lot happens in these last three updates so I hope you enjoy them and thanks for reading love!
dfort (Signed) on Jul 01, 2008 08:44 pm (Chapter 1)
Author's Response: OMG, everyone is dying after reading this chapter; this can't be good (haha). Besides, you can't die just yet because there's plenty of more juiciness to come. And girrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrl, I wish I could make his dick hard in a whole variety of ways, but that's just me. ; ) Glad you liked it girlie and thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
*panting, sighing, breathing heavy*
jesus woman, are you TRYING to kill me over here? really, he just had to go and grab her crotch talking all cocky and confident. UGH
i wish I could make his dick hard in the club, if that's the kind of response i'd get from him. *drools* realllly?!?!
ok, so i'm gonna need an update here soon. yup, that'd be great, thanks! lo
Author's Response: OMG, everyone is dying after reading this chapter; this can't be good (haha). Besides, you can't die just yet because there's plenty of more juiciness to come. And girrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrl, I wish I could make his dick hard in a whole variety of ways, but that's just me. ; ) Glad you liked it girlie and thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
Nana26 (Signed) on Jul 01, 2008 05:30 pm (Chapter 1)
Bri you own me woman, I'll give you Nick you keep this updated. This is soooooo hot, I love their interaction and Selah is my girl lol.
Author's Response: You damn right I own you woman...and that man you're trying to pass off as your own (haha). I'm glad you liked it girlie and thanks for reading and reviewing!
Author's Response: You damn right I own you woman...and that man you're trying to pass off as your own (haha). I'm glad you liked it girlie and thanks for reading and reviewing!
DeterminedNot2Fall (Anonymous) on Jun 26, 2008 12:56 pm (Chapter 1)
Lord have mercy...Praise you Father! LMAO Justin is whoooo....ummm yesh! LMAO Get it girl, shoo damned if we can get it in real life!
Author's Response: LMAO! Well I'm glad that you liked this chapter enough to be praising God (haha). Ooooh, and I don't think I could handle all of that if I got it in real life either. Thanks for reading and reviewing, I appreciate it!
Author's Response: LMAO! Well I'm glad that you liked this chapter enough to be praising God (haha). Ooooh, and I don't think I could handle all of that if I got it in real life either. Thanks for reading and reviewing, I appreciate it!
Nana26 (Signed) on Jun 25, 2008 04:56 pm (Chapter 1)
Author's Response: Nole!!! I'm glad you're liking it girlie and yeah, I had to make it hot in the VIP, it was only a matter of time before something like that happened (haha). Thanks so much for reading and reviewing, I appreciate it! Oh and Nick and I are going to need you to stay 500 feet away from us at all times; we just filed a restraining order. Thanks!
Bri I swear my mouth is hanging wide open. I caught up and I love love LOVE this story, simply amazing my dear. That last chapter was scorching eep!
Oh and Nick is still mine! Now update soon!
Author's Response: Nole!!! I'm glad you're liking it girlie and yeah, I had to make it hot in the VIP, it was only a matter of time before something like that happened (haha). Thanks so much for reading and reviewing, I appreciate it! Oh and Nick and I are going to need you to stay 500 feet away from us at all times; we just filed a restraining order. Thanks!
Schnessa (Signed) on Jun 13, 2008 05:22 pm (Chapter 1)
I'm SO ready to read more of this! I need an update soon or I just might die. Yeah I'm being dramatic but you know what I mean girl!
Author's Response: Haha! But there's so much more to come so I can't have you die just yet! Don't worry I'm going to update soon so make sure you stay alive for it ok? Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
Author's Response: Haha! But there's so much more to come so I can't have you die just yet! Don't worry I'm going to update soon so make sure you stay alive for it ok? Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
Marissa (Signed) on Jun 12, 2008 06:05 pm (Chapter 1)
Bri!! I'm so proud of you girl...this seems like its gonna be a great story! Can't wait to read more...
Author's Response: RISS!!! I've missed you SO much girlie! I'm so glad that you like it so far and thank you for reading and reviewing.
Author's Response: RISS!!! I've missed you SO much girlie! I'm so glad that you like it so far and thank you for reading and reviewing.
