megzor (Signed) on Jul 17, 2010 11:00 am (Chapter 4)
this is a good story so far but i'm just now sure how i feel about her or any of them thinking that they even have a chance with him yet. i'm all about justin being a cocky bastard but not these girls thinking they have game enough to get with him.



treasure (Signed) on Mar 25, 2009 12:37 am (Chapter 4)

I like how you but in that "Shut up!"  I have the Future/Sex/Love/Show on DVD so that part was too funny. 

I really hope La doesn't fall in love with Justin and get hurt. That would be fucke up because I like the chick.




Timberlake (Signed) on Aug 18, 2008 09:00 pm (Chapter 4)
amen, sister. justin's the type of dream that you never want to wake up from. dream on, La, dream!



d_simplicity (Signed) on Jun 19, 2008 09:18 pm (Chapter 4)
Was the TV show Jessica referred to called Seventh Heaven? I think that's where I first remember seeing her act. HAHA. random thought. lol. HAHAH OMG Bri I love you! That meeting was cute and unconventional hahaha. And Justin was chearking her out! And uh, Ava is really overprotective, my thinks that might be a problem. And ooohhh Nick! And...what guy is Selah over 99.9%? Hmmm interesting. lol Loved it gurl, update soon.

Author's Response: Haha yes D, Jessica used to be on "7th Heaven." I just thought I'd throw that random tidbit about her life in there. I'm glad you liked them meeting, I mean I know it wasn't all glamorous and exciting, but it will definitely get that way in these next few chapters as they start to get to know each other better. I agree, Ava is a bit overbearing. But like I've said before, she just wants to prevent her sister from getting hurt and getting in over her head ya know? And that mystery guy? Well you're going to find out about him very soon and it's going to clear up a lot of things about Selah.rnrnI love your reviews girlie and I appreciate you reading and leaving them. Thanks girlie, I'll update soon! : )



Sassy Spacey (Signed) on Jun 19, 2008 07:57 pm (Chapter 4)
Epp! It jus keeps getting better and better. I can't wait to see what's gonna happen awesome job as usual Bri ;) Hope more is comin soon :-D -Traci

Author's Response: Thanks girlie, I'm glad you're enjoying it and I appreciate your reviews. There is definitely more to come, so stay tuned! : )



MissM69 (Signed) on Jun 19, 2008 08:09 am (Chapter 4)

omg omg omg !! :o

love this chapter read it 3 times already :p

keep it coming :D 



Author's Response: Wow, three times? Aww, thank you so much! And no worries, I have an update coming really soon for you.



Marissa (Signed) on Jun 19, 2008 12:15 am (Chapter 4)
Looks good, girl! Can't wait to read more.

Author's Response: Thanks love, I'm glad you're enjoying it!



MochaB (Signed) on Jun 18, 2008 06:45 pm (Chapter 4)
I understand Ava having big sister syndrome, but dang can she ease up?!? haha. gosh. any time Selah and a boy are mentioned in the same sentence she gets an attitude and acts like her sister isn't supposed to date until she's 30! haha. I really feel for Selah though. Hopefully during this process she'll be able to open up, gain confidence, and go for what she wants. It would be awesome if she got the help and push to do so from Mr. SexyBack himself. Just saying...haha. ;o) update soon!

Author's Response: Haha, yeah Ava definitely is trying to make sure that her sister doesn't get too attached or involved with these two men in particular. But I think it's because she doesn't want to see her get used and then hurt and you'll understand why she feels that way very soon. Selah on the other hand is definitely going to have her time to shine and come out of her shell as the story evolves and Mr. SexyBack may have something to do with that. ; ) I love your reviews so thank you so much for reading and reviewing.



SweetTeaPi16 (Signed) on Jun 18, 2008 04:05 pm (Chapter 4)

Awwww...Selah!!

Oh and who hurt her....I wanna meet this dude...



Author's Response: Well, we'll find out about this mystery dude very soon. It will explain a lot about Selah and why she feels the way she does about certain issues. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!



MissTasha (Signed) on Jun 18, 2008 04:00 pm (Chapter 4)
Somebody should remind La that the man does have a girlfriend. We don't her being a homewrecking hussie. LOL. Even though she's not being aggressive or forward, she needs to fall back just a little until the dude is available. Please update soon.

Author's Response: LMAO!!! I am dying right now. But you're right and I think that's why she's keeping all of that buried deep down because she knows that can't have him right now and that it wouldn't be smart to even pursue him. But whose to say that Justin doesn't have a hand in this thanks to his wandering eye? But thanks so much for reading and reviewing girl, I appreciate it.





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