Comments For Right in Front of Me
treasure (Signed) on Mar 25, 2009 12:54 am (Chapter 5)
This was a good chapter. I like the back story. Her story really touched me. My mother had MS, she's past now. All though MS is a diffrent disease i can see how having something like that can affect you. I can see now why La is the way she is. I still think she needs to be careful with Justin. I think he might try to play her ass.
Sassy Spacey (Signed) on Jun 23, 2008 11:18 pm (Chapter 5)
OoOoOo ;) Interesting. It's nice we got some back story on Selah ... interesting. I can't wait to see what's gonna happen ... whether it's between Justin or Nick ;) LoL. Awesome job as usual! TTYL -Traci
Author's Response: Traci!!! *hugs* Yeah girlie, I had to put some background info in there so that everyone can kind of see where she's coming from and what she keeps hidden away from everyone. It's about to get real interesting indeed now that these two men are involved as well. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing, I appreciate it!
Author's Response: Traci!!! *hugs* Yeah girlie, I had to put some background info in there so that everyone can kind of see where she's coming from and what she keeps hidden away from everyone. It's about to get real interesting indeed now that these two men are involved as well. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing, I appreciate it!
SweetTeaPi16 (Signed) on Jun 23, 2008 05:42 pm (Chapter 5)
oh what...get 'em girl!!!!
Author's Response: Haha, I know right? Selah can definitely play Justin's game...or can she? Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Author's Response: Haha, I know right? Selah can definitely play Justin's game...or can she? Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
classicbeauty (Signed) on Jun 22, 2008 04:26 am (Chapter 5)
Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying it, thanks for reading and reviewing!
ooooo i cant wait to see where this is going.
update asap
dani
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Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying it, thanks for reading and reviewing!
MochaB (Signed) on Jun 21, 2008 07:19 pm (Chapter 5)
Can it be the other F? haha! i'm kidding!!...maybe...ha! ;o) anyway, another great chapter. thanks for the insight. i think selah needs to better distinguish from love and lust. she mentioned she has that problem of thinking the slightest attraction means love, so admitting it is the first step. plus, i mean her sister told her how Nick is so it's like dang...she didn't have a warning with Dame, but now she does. she better listen. so with her problem, maybe Ava does need to stay on top of her. and nick's shallow story about the prom...red flag. the whole n.e.r.d. part was so funny. i've been listening to the new album constantly since tuesday. can't wait to read more. :o)
Author's Response: LMAO! Oooh, the story is just beginning and Justin is taken so it can't be the other F (just) yet (haha). I agree about Selah and how she needs to distinguish those two differences and since she's learned the hard way before with Dame, she's trying to be more cautious and you're going to see more of that as the story goes on. On the contrary, I don't think Nick's story should be a red flag, he was just being a stupid teenager at the time. But regardless, I personally think Selah should cautious just due to everything she's been through. I'm glad you liked the N.E.R.D. part, I LOVE them and I want their new CD SO BAD (haha). Thanks again SO much for reading and reviewing, I appreciate it! : )
Author's Response: LMAO! Oooh, the story is just beginning and Justin is taken so it can't be the other F (just) yet (haha). I agree about Selah and how she needs to distinguish those two differences and since she's learned the hard way before with Dame, she's trying to be more cautious and you're going to see more of that as the story goes on. On the contrary, I don't think Nick's story should be a red flag, he was just being a stupid teenager at the time. But regardless, I personally think Selah should cautious just due to everything she's been through. I'm glad you liked the N.E.R.D. part, I LOVE them and I want their new CD SO BAD (haha). Thanks again SO much for reading and reviewing, I appreciate it! : )
Marissa (Signed) on Jun 21, 2008 02:04 pm (Chapter 5)
LMAO Bri, that chapter was awesome. Keep it up woman!
Author's Response: Thanks love, I appreciate you reading and your review! *Muah*
Author's Response: Thanks love, I appreciate you reading and your review! *Muah*
MissTasha (Signed) on Jun 21, 2008 01:47 pm (Chapter 5)
Well, it seems Justin might just be interested in little Selah. I think those two are making a little bit of progress. Please update soon.
Author's Response: Hmmm...he might be. But yes, these two will definitely be making progress as the story goes along. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing, I love your reviews. : )
Author's Response: Hmmm...he might be. But yes, these two will definitely be making progress as the story goes along. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing, I love your reviews. : )
