Comments For Right in Front of Me
Timberlake (Signed) on Aug 19, 2008 12:51 pm (Chapter 7)
oh.my.god. you, my dear, are a fuckin' master. if i ever wanted to be a character in a story, it was now. right here in this chapter. yes. that is all. haha
kkhbtb (Signed) on Jun 30, 2008 01:36 pm (Chapter 7)
Author's Response: Haha, hey I gotta leave you hanging so that I can come with even more craziness! I'm glad you're enjoying the story and I appreciate you reading and reviewing.
I freakin' love you and this story... Why you have to leave me hanging like that though??? HAHA! I love this...
Author's Response: Haha, hey I gotta leave you hanging so that I can come with even more craziness! I'm glad you're enjoying the story and I appreciate you reading and reviewing.
d_simplicity (Signed) on Jun 26, 2008 05:10 pm (Chapter 7)
Author's Response: LMAO. D, I *heart* you and your reviews girl. You know I had to put some J. Holiday in there because that's my shit (haha) and it set the mood right and whatnot. I'm glad you enjoyed it and yes, Selah and Justin have definitely made a connection whether they wanted to or not. Unfortunately, that DOES kind of suck for Nick and Jessica who have no idea what's going on, but don't count them out just yet because there's going to be plenty more where that came from. Thanks again for reading and reviewing girlie, I appreciate it!
Ahhhhhhhhhhhhh BRIIIIIIIIIIIIII OMFGAAAAAAAAHHH!!! BED!!! J HOLIDAY AND BED....ugh I just died of a pleasure overload.....that is the shit! Woop! I love you for doing that I swear hahahaha. That was soooo gooddamn hot and just...*tires to breath properly.* lol. It was sexy and sensual and just wow! They had some serious deep soulful or spiritual connection or something!
*Sigh* Ok, I think I'm good now. HAHAHA. This update was the best so far girl, I loved every bit of it. I could picture that shit too...amazing visual. hehe. Yeah, so it's safe to say that Mr. Lovestoned is becoming just that...lol. He's so into 'La. I kind of feel bad for Nick. He's a little hottie himself. hehehe. Anyway Can't wait to see how all of this is going to unfold with Justin, La, Ava, Nick and Jessica! Woop! Drama! lol. Love it, update soon. :D
Author's Response: LMAO. D, I *heart* you and your reviews girl. You know I had to put some J. Holiday in there because that's my shit (haha) and it set the mood right and whatnot. I'm glad you enjoyed it and yes, Selah and Justin have definitely made a connection whether they wanted to or not. Unfortunately, that DOES kind of suck for Nick and Jessica who have no idea what's going on, but don't count them out just yet because there's going to be plenty more where that came from. Thanks again for reading and reviewing girlie, I appreciate it!
a_nonymous (Signed) on Jun 26, 2008 03:52 pm (Chapter 7)
Yay! More, please!
Author's Response: Yay! I'm glad you're liking it. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Author's Response: Yay! I'm glad you're liking it. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
MochaB (Signed) on Jun 26, 2008 01:28 pm (Chapter 7)
ohmyfreakinggoshheckyes!! that was the hottest dance EVER. girl seriously...that was sexy. my body heat just rose way too high and i definitely don't mind. and great song choice. haha. things reeeally just got kicked into high gear and i'm loving it. justin is already bringing her confidence back everytime they speak. she gets all feisty and flirty and it's awesome. haha. jessica is still in the picture though, and i don't want ava to find out about this or nick. i think it should just stay between them because it was so private and there was some kind of connection made. i know that jess is still his gf, but i don't want selah and justin to distance themselves. i don't want them to backtrack. they don't have to go forward immediately (obviously), but i just don't want them to get weird on each othere. eh. i guess i have to wait and see what happens next. please update soon! awesome job on this one. :o)
Author's Response: Firstly, you know you are so right about Justin giving her a little bit of confidence back everytime that they speak or interact with each other and I never thought of it that way, so thanks for pointing that out to me. Secondly, yeah I had to find someway for these two to release the tension that they had between them (without them taking their clothes off), so I decided on dancing and I just made it as sexy as possible *teehee*. Not only do YOU not want Ava or Nick or even Jessica to find out, but neither do the two of them so we'll see how well they can keep this under wraps without being awkward toward each other or giving something away. And trust me, after that chapter there is no going back for Selah and Justin. I love your reviews and thank you so much for taking the time to read and write one. ; )
Author's Response: Firstly, you know you are so right about Justin giving her a little bit of confidence back everytime that they speak or interact with each other and I never thought of it that way, so thanks for pointing that out to me. Secondly, yeah I had to find someway for these two to release the tension that they had between them (without them taking their clothes off), so I decided on dancing and I just made it as sexy as possible *teehee*. Not only do YOU not want Ava or Nick or even Jessica to find out, but neither do the two of them so we'll see how well they can keep this under wraps without being awkward toward each other or giving something away. And trust me, after that chapter there is no going back for Selah and Justin. I love your reviews and thank you so much for taking the time to read and write one. ; )
Sassy Spacey (Signed) on Jun 26, 2008 02:06 am (Chapter 7)
Daaaammmnnn ;) LMAO. LOVE that song by J. Holiday one of my fave's :-D. Awesome job as usual Bri ... I can't wait to see what's gonna happen. I can only imagine Nick comin in about now and surprising the hell outta both of them. Thanks for not making us wait long from the last chapter ... do it again for this one too :) Hehe. Great job ... hope more is comin soon! -Traci
Author's Response: I LOVE that song too girl, like I was trying to find a slow and sexy song that came out around that time last year and J. Holiday was PERFECT for it (haha). On the surprise tip, I don't think it's Nick that you should be worried about right now, but there is definitely a surprise in store coming up real soon. ; ) Thanks so much for reading and reviewing girlie, I appreciate it!
Author's Response: I LOVE that song too girl, like I was trying to find a slow and sexy song that came out around that time last year and J. Holiday was PERFECT for it (haha). On the surprise tip, I don't think it's Nick that you should be worried about right now, but there is definitely a surprise in store coming up real soon. ; ) Thanks so much for reading and reviewing girlie, I appreciate it!
Marissa (Signed) on Jun 25, 2008 09:17 pm (Chapter 7)
holy.shit.woman. That was so freakin hot! *I* need a change of panties...can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: Girrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrl, I'm going to need Justin to take me shopping just so that I can buy some extra panties (if you know what I'm saying, haha). But I'm glad you enjoyed it love and thanks for reading and reviewing!
Author's Response: Girrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrl, I'm going to need Justin to take me shopping just so that I can buy some extra panties (if you know what I'm saying, haha). But I'm glad you enjoyed it love and thanks for reading and reviewing!
MissM69 (Signed) on Jun 25, 2008 09:01 pm (Chapter 7)
Author's Response: Haha, well I'm glad you enjoyed it. Now cool yourself down before you explode, haha. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
OMG!! 8O
That was just oh sooooooooooooooooooooooo hot *fans self* update soon love :D
Author's Response: Haha, well I'm glad you enjoyed it. Now cool yourself down before you explode, haha. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
SJane (Signed) on Jun 25, 2008 06:39 pm (Chapter 7)
i just *fans self* oh my, tho to are going to get into some delicious trouble i can see it now lol
Author's Response: Haha. Yeah, this is just the beginning for these two and yes, it's going to be very delicious. *teehee* Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Author's Response: Haha. Yeah, this is just the beginning for these two and yes, it's going to be very delicious. *teehee* Thank you for reading and reviewing!
MissTasha (Signed) on Jun 25, 2008 05:50 pm (Chapter 7)
Holy shit, that was good. That was so, so, so, so, so, so hot. I loved it. I knew this chapter would be good but DAMN. I didn't know they would be getting that close. He DOES have a girlfriend still. I don't want him to cheat but I DO want him with La. So, I'm not TOO mad at him. I knew he was feeling her a little but I didn't know he was THAT into her. I love it, love it. Love it. Holy repeats and caps, right? LOL. Please update soon.
Author's Response: Hahaha, you crack me the hell up girl. Yeah, I had to make the club scene real hot just to ease some of the tension that's been going between them so I figured dancing was the best way to go. I don't want him to cheat either and I don't think he will, but who knows what will ultimately happen as things change between the various people in this story. But I'm glad you enjoyed this update and thank you so much for reading and leaving me such awesome feedback.
Author's Response: Hahaha, you crack me the hell up girl. Yeah, I had to make the club scene real hot just to ease some of the tension that's been going between them so I figured dancing was the best way to go. I don't want him to cheat either and I don't think he will, but who knows what will ultimately happen as things change between the various people in this story. But I'm glad you enjoyed this update and thank you so much for reading and leaving me such awesome feedback.
Karlita (Signed) on Jun 25, 2008 05:44 pm (Chapter 7)
DAMN! That was hot! *fans self*
Author's Response: Haha, you and me both! *fans myself too* I'm glad you liked it and thanks for reading and reviewing!
Author's Response: Haha, you and me both! *fans myself too* I'm glad you liked it and thanks for reading and reviewing!
DaniD (Signed) on Jun 25, 2008 04:21 pm (Chapter 7)
Holy Lord that was hot.
Author's Response: Yeah, I was fanning myself when I was writing it (haha). Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Author's Response: Yeah, I was fanning myself when I was writing it (haha). Thanks for reading and reviewing!
sarah1988 (Signed) on Jun 25, 2008 04:14 pm (Chapter 7)
damn that's soo awesome, i love that chapter. but i hate that cliffhanger i seriously do,....you have to update....i wanna see what happens!!!
Author's Response: Aww, I'm sorry about the cliffhanger but I can't give everything away. I'll be updating soon and thank you for reading and reviewing!
Author's Response: Aww, I'm sorry about the cliffhanger but I can't give everything away. I'll be updating soon and thank you for reading and reviewing!
JoJo (Anonymous) on Jun 25, 2008 04:03 pm (Chapter 7)
WOW!! that makes me want to get down with justin in a club...and they were just dancing!! great update girl! keep 'em coming.
Author's Response: Shoot me too, haha! Thanks for reading and reviewing, I appreciate it!
Author's Response: Shoot me too, haha! Thanks for reading and reviewing, I appreciate it!
