treasure (Signed) on Mar 25, 2009 02:16 am (Chapter 8)
Girl that chapater screamed sex all through it and it didn't have a bit in it. I love it! Justin is one sexy muthafucka!



Timberlake (Signed) on Aug 19, 2008 01:11 pm (Chapter 8)
OMGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG! he is so fuckin' sexyyyyyyyyy! i would've been done. up against the bathroom stall. all on the counter, lmfao... he's a bastard tho. leave jess you fuck face. you can't make La a homewrecker!



MissTasha (Signed) on Jul 04, 2008 03:13 pm (Chapter 8)

Oh, what the fuck? Who asked her to be a decent person who doesn't sleep with taken men? NOT ME! I wanted her to be a loose hussie. :( She let me down big time. Damn her and her morals. Can Nick die, please? He's messing everything up.

Idea #1: He falls off the stage to his death during a concet.

Idea #2: He falls off the stage to his death during a rehearsal for a concert.

Idea #3: He falls off the stage to his death during me pushing him off. 

Please update soon.  



Author's Response: *Is crying because I am laughing so hard* Girl, I have said it once and I will say it again: you are a MESS. OMG, I am dying right now...ok, now onto the important things. Although Justin has been going a good job of getting under her skin, she really does like Nick and is starting to care for him. I think she's starting to realize that with Justin, there's not much stability there besides the lust whereas with Nick, there's more stability and the prospect of something real happening, ya know? And girl, what would she look like just spreading her legs and being loose? That's not her style and her sister would beat her down (haha). And HELL NO Nick cannot be killed off...besides, this is just part I, you have a whole 'nother part to read and who knows, Selah might not let you down next time. ; ) Thanks for reading and reviewing, you always make my day with your reviews.



MochaB (Signed) on Jul 02, 2008 07:00 pm (Chapter 8)

giiiiirl...i'm freaking out over here! haha. how you write these insanely hot scenes that don't even involve the actual act of sex, i will never understand, but i hope you continue to do so. justin is fire and if i was her i'd want to get burned. haha. it seems that she was all for nick when she thought justin was unattainable, but now...yeah he may be with jess now, but if he broke up with her the next day he would be attainable you know? cause they both have a strong attraction to each other and have admitted it. nick has no claim over her so she shouldn't feel so restricted (if she does feel that way). and i think maybe she should take a step back and look at the nick situation because she said he was the first person in a long time to notice her, and well she could just feel a big attraction to him because of that, when they may be best as friends. kind of like it could be blinding her. of course, i could be totally wrong, but yeah. the ending kind of left me confused. i don't know if she's talking about justin or nick. i guess time will tell...haha. oh and i love your little phrases: dickmatize, caking with her, etc. they crack me up! keep up the amazing work! update soon! :o)



Author's Response: I always look forward to your reviews so first, let me thank you for taking time to read and leave one. As far as the sex scenes go, I don't know how I do it either (haha). I guess I see Justin as a sexy tease that like to tempt and see how far he can push Selah, ya know? They do share a very strong chemistry and attraction toward each other, but I think what makes them "unattainable" to each other is not the fact that he's seeing someone and she is possibly starting something with someone too, but the fact that they're letting their morals get in the way. Justin doesn't want to hurt Jessica and Selah doesn't want to hurt Nick and I think that's their major hurdle because you're right, if Justin broke up with Jessica then things would be all good. But what they don't realize is that although they don't want to hurt those two people but calling things off with them, they are hurting them by messing around. I feel what you're saying about Selah being blinded by the affection Nick is showing her, but she also can fall into the same trap by messing with Justin. That's why I left the ending so open because she has a decision to make and hopefully it will be the right one for her. Sorry for my long explanation (haha). But I'm so glad that you are enjoying the story and I appreciate all your feedback! ; )



Sassy Spacey (Signed) on Jul 02, 2008 01:11 am (Chapter 8)
WoW. Bri. That was incredibly HOT! OMG! LoL. I can't wait to see where this goes. Justin jus needs to end it with Jessica ... and be with Selah. He know's it and she's knows it. Although ... hurting Nick will not be a good thing :( Anyway, awesome job as usual gurlie! I can't wait to see what else you have in store :) ttyl -Traci

Author's Response: Traci!!! These two definitely have chemistry, but both belong to someone else so them just hooking up isn't going very easy. Selah is definitely hurting Nick by falling and not putting a stop to Justin's advances, but let's just say he won't be hurting for long. ; ) I'm so glad that you enjoyed it girlie and thanks for reading and reviewing!



SJane (Signed) on Jul 01, 2008 11:42 pm (Chapter 8)
my oh my are those two getting into it or what. That was majorly hot and there was barley any touching at all i can't wait for the next chapter

Author's Response: Indeed they are, but Selah has a important decision to make and hopefully she'll make the right one for her. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!



MissM69 (Signed) on Jul 01, 2008 10:49 pm (Chapter 8)

OMFG!!! 8O *faints*

Please oh please update soon :D 



Author's Response: Haha, well there's a reaction I was hoping for. I'm glad you enjoyed it and thanks for reading and reviewing!



LuLu (Signed) on Jul 01, 2008 10:45 pm (Chapter 8)
Ok nothing really happen yet that was pretty damn steamy too. Justin is seriously sexy in this story.

I get the feeling that Selah is about to start the avoidance game and I don't think Justin's going to like playing.

This is getting so juicy. More please. I'm hooked!

Author's Response: Justin is too damn sexy, period. But I had to amp it up in this story since he's trying to get underneath Selah's skin. She may try to avoid and ignore him all she wants, but what woman in their right might would turn down his sexy ass? I guess we'll have to wait for her decision. And if you thought this was juicy, it's only going to get juicier. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing, I appreciate it!



Shybeauty (Signed) on Jul 01, 2008 08:24 pm (Chapter 8)
oh my god.. I seriously would just die ♥ awesome update

Author's Response: Haha, if he touched me like that I would die too. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!



MissTasha (Signed) on Jul 01, 2008 06:55 pm (Chapter 8)
 "Honestly I was ready for him move my panties to the side and dickmatize me in the VIP lounge..." *slaps the taste out of Selah's mouth* “Apparently my dick was.” *licks* "“When I can see and feel how wet she gets every time that I’m around,” he says as he quickly cups my center from the outside of my jeans. “But she doesn’t have to worry, her secret is safe with me.”" *dies* I feel bad for Nick. :( But La has to pick the guy who's right for her, the one she likes the most and not the one who just likes her the most. Now, this one she knows she wants, is it Nick or Justin? Hmmmmm. And how about Mr.Timberlake not go around cupping any chick's goodies that aren't his girlfriend's? Whore. Please update soon.

Author's Response: *Dies of laughter* OMG, you are a mess. Like I am seriously dying right now. Selah is definitely playing with fire right now, but since she doesn't want to get completely burned she has a decision to make. Hopefully she'll make the right decision for her and won't regret it later. And I don't want to give TOO much away, but you won't have to worry about Nick for too long. ; ) Girl, I look forward to your reviews because they crack me the hell up so thank you for reading and taking time to leave one.



Gigi (Signed) on Jul 01, 2008 06:22 pm (Chapter 8)
Ugh I'm dead. You just killed, me are you happy now.

Author's Response: LMAO, well since I've been accused of murder, no I'm not happy (haha). But I'm glad you enjoyed it and thank you for reading and reviewing!



sarah1988 (Signed) on Jul 01, 2008 05:39 pm (Chapter 8)

damn that was pretty sexy :D

well....CONTINUE!!!!! you're a good writer!

can't wait to read the next one. 



Author's Response: Thank you so much for saying that, it means a lot since this is my first story. And if you think that was sexy...it's just the beginning, TRUST me. *teehee* Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!





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