Author's Response: Hahahaha! D, you crack me up girl. Yeah the shit has definitely hit the fan between these two and I think that comment Justin made just sealed their fate for good...or did it? ; ) I can't wait to read your reaction to what happens next between them.
Author's Response: Yeah the shit has definitely hit the fan right now between these two, but I think the next chapter will definitely give them a chance to resolve their issues with each other and get to know each other BETTER, outside of the sexual stuff and whatnot. I'm glad you are enjoying it girlie and thank you SO much for reading and reviewing, I appreciate it!
Author's Response: Haha, oh damn is right girl. Thanks for reading and reviewing love, I appreciate it!
Wait....gotta review again cause I missed that part! lol
What the hell does Justin mean by how would that look blah blah blah only to be seen with you!!!!!! ummm excuse me?
I know for damn sure Jess can't be better then she could be virgin or not since she can't even handle him on the dance floor and he's bored already... not that should be the major point of consideration lol
Jess for damn sure isn't more attractive since Jussy wants to be breast feed and I'm pretty sure she isn't exceedingly more intelligent then Selah either so wants all the shame about?
Jussy *gasp* are you prejudice? Is is because Jess has more money and happens to be famous thereby fitting your status more abtly then that of a unemployed "hang on?"
Do you feel that my girl Selah is good enough to freak in the background rather then to bring to light on your arm? Get your jollies off her in a condo you bought her in the country then gon show up to Jessica's movie debut smiling for the camera's!!!!!!!!! You got the wrong one playa! Got ya'll kids wondering who their daddy is lololololololo
LMAOOOOOO sorry too much suga guys but I was still serious
Author's Response: *Dead from laughter, but gives you two snaps and some hand claps* Girl, you are preaching! While it was highly hilarious, again you brought up some great points. Even though it came out really wrong, I think what Justin meant by that comment was that it would look weird (particularly to the people who know them and are around them right now) if he dumped Jessica all of a sudden and then started dating Selah. But it also poses the question that if they were to start dating, could Selah handle Justin's lifestyle? Could she handle being in the spotlight, the paps, the constant traveling, etc.? It's obvious that Selah wasn't thinking about all of that when she blurted that out and was trying to do the right thing. But these two are going to get some time to try to resolve their issues and hopefully make things right between them. Girl you had me cracking up about the condo in the country! LMAO, that had me rollin'. But thank you so much for your awesome feedback, I really appreciate it and enjoy reading it!
Author's Response: HAHA, indeed they are but they're going to see the error of their ways and try to make things right. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Ummm Selah needs to slow the hell down! Those orgasms got her wayyyy too open and she shouldn't have stayed when she realized Justin was trying get in some "private" time with her. If it has to be private it ain't right...If he doesn't want all, just some... he deserves none girl *damn that was a good one! lol j/p*
Justin knows what he's doing and for him he doesn't care how hs has go about it to get it as long as he does....He should have more respect for Jessica and Nick...calling himself tasting her and then gon go kiss up on Jess when he sees her *that actually goes both ways tho...who knows what he's done with Jess! lol* Let me stop cause I'm taking this way too personal...
Selah calm your fast ass down and realize that Justin treats you like youallow him too...don't toss NIck away for a maybe shot! Justin ain't right with his sexy self and your not helping your cause by letting him play around with you like that.
Be strong girl...umm wasn't Brown waiting for her in the hallway? Her sister's gonna know something went up and that's gonna put her in a real uncomfortable place...her boss or her sister.
Justin needs to do some serious groveling ASAP and really mean it lol
Author's Response: Another awesome review that speaks truth, I love it! Haha. You have touched on a lot of great topics like some of the other readers and one of those is Selah being strong and standing her ground. You are so right about her needing to calm down and really take time to evaluate each situation with each guy. I told another reader that I think Selah has a hard time distinguishing lust from what's real because she's not used to having her feelings being reciprocated and since she doesn't want Nick or Justin to stop caring or liking her, she's going to do what has to do to keep it that way, even if it may be wrong. But Selah is going to see the error of her ways for real in this next chapter because the lying and sneaking around is going to start taking a toll on her. You're also right about Justin because he does know what he's doing and like I've said before, he's being a selfish person right now by trying to have a relationship and Selah on the side. But even he's going to see that the two of them need to slow down and reevaluate their situation because it is not working. As for her sister, well you're going to have to see what happens in the next chapter for that. ; ) Thank you SO much for reading and reviewing, I appreciate it!
Author's Response: Haha, I hear ya girlie because there is NOTHING like some JT. But like I've been saying to the other readers, Justin is being a selfish person right now by trying to have a relationship and mess around with Selah on the side. And you're right, if he doesn't cut it out he could lose out on something potentially great. I think the next chapter will give these two a chance to try to resolve their problems so things should start looking up. Thanks for reading and reviewing, I appreciate it!
Author's Response: Girl, if you only knew how much drama is to come...seriously, this is JUST the beginning. I hope you stick around to see all of it unfold and thanks for reading and reviewing!
Author's Response: Thanks Vessy, I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Yo yo yo what the hell happened woman?! I was all happy with my Selick ( :giggle) till you gave me some Juelah but I said nothing about cutting them off! Now I need to shank you lol. Seriously though hi-fuckin-larious with the guys coming in to strip, and my immature ass died every time I read "nut" lmao. The secks ( well fooling around) was soooo hot. Now update soon so I won't have to shank you and your beta k?
Author's Response: LMAO, Nole you are a mess girl...especially with your new nicknames. You know I had to switch it up girl, I mean did you really think that Justin was just going to sit in the cut the whole time and not do anything? But the shit has hit the fan between these two and now they have to find a way to fix things so that they can get back on track. I'm glad you enjoyed the stripping (if only that shit was real-haha) and what was your dirty mind thinking about every time you read "nut"? It better not have been my man Nick. Anyway, I'm glad you enjoyed it girlie and thanks for reviewing!
ok. that was hot. both scenes with nick and justin, but am i the only one that isn't happy that it happened? i don't know. i just think she went too fast. i feel like she's letting that ohmysomebodylikesme! feeling and hormones take over too much and make her "comfortable." i mean, good she doesn't regret it, but yeah. and i sure didn't like what just happened with her and justin. i mean...i did cause it was freakin' hot of course and i'm a perv, but you know. haha. justin just wants the best of both worlds, which is definitely not fair and him and selah both just hurt their significant others, even if those people don't find out. i just think that they just need to be miserable, or not fully happy, with their partners until they fess up to what they really want deep down AFTER they have ended the relationships. i don't want her to be a hussy either, but she just turned into one. haha. she did get two hot guys to please her though so on one hand i'm like, "go 'head girl!!" haha! i think her and j really need to talk more. serious talks and not ones filled with innuendos. one thing i don't understand: Ava was all about Nick being mischievous (in a way) at first, now she's all like, "how good a kisser is he?" and about head and all that...what happened? i don't know. i just think selah needs to be wary of both justin and nick, but for different reasons which i feel like if i explained my reasons would become a book instead of this essay. i don't know...just update soon woman! haha. please. :o)
Author's Response: Wow, you have really brought up some awesome and important points. First off I agree about Selah moving too fast and I think a lot of it has to do with her naiveté about relationships and people's feelings toward her in general. I mean she's had it pretty rough in that department so she doesn't know how distinguish what's real from what's lust and how to act on it in the right way without being afraid of that person not liking her or caring about her anymore. And that's obvious with what's happening between her and Justin right now, she thought he was really into her and he appears to only want to get his rocks off ya know? But the two of them are at fault because they are hurting the people that they claim to care about and it's starting to take its toll and get in the way of their feelings for each other. Like I said to another reader, actions speak louder than words and Selah needs to be strong and mean when she says that she needs to leave Justin alone because it's obvious that her judgment is a bit skewed when it comes to doing things with him despite her morals. I think Justin should know better because he's had more experience, but he's being selfish by trying to have the best of both worlds. You are absolutely right about these two getting to know each other without all the sexual undertones because in all actuality, they don't really know much about each other and I think the next chapter is going to give them a chance to see that and try to find a way to resolve their problems. As for Ava changing her mind about Nick, she's still the overly protective sister but she sees how much Nick really cares about Selah and how he's treating her. Plus overall, she knows that Nick isn't a bad guy, she just doesn't want her sister to rush things with him (but it looks like it's a little too late for that). Damn, this was a long response (haha), but I thank you SO much for your awesome feedback because it allows me as the author to think about things more intently when it comes to these characters. I'm glad you enjoyed it and thanks again!
Houston we have a problem of epic proportion their brains won't take that kind of pressure lol :p
awesome stuff girl keep it coming :D
Author's Response: Haha, you are a mess and you are right, we definitely have a problem. But hopefully the two of them will be able to clear things up in the next chapter. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Well..THAT was interesting...Yeah..Selah and Justin messing around isn't cool.Hot as hell, but not right. lol
Selah needs to stand strong against Justin, cause' it's not fair to Nick or herself..She DOES seems to understand that at least. Now Justin, he just needs to quit being a dog. He wants Jessica AND Selah both, and that just makes him a spoiled brat.
I hope you let Selah stand strong, and teach Justin a thing or two about life. It would serve him right to have to watch the girl he REALLY wants be happy with someone else. If he wants to be happy, he has to learn to quit being a bitch and make the hard choices. That's life!
I love this story!
Author's Response: *Gives you two snaps* Preach! Haha. You have raised two very important points so I'll start with Selah. Selah does need to learn about standing strong against Justin because even though she realizes what she's been doing is wrong, her judgment is a skewed and it causes her to do things that she shouldn't be doing. As they say, actions speak louder than words and Selah needs to start living by her words of leaving Justin alone and execute that. You are right about Justin too because he should know better and he needs to learn not be selfish and try to have everything for himself because he's going at it in the completely wrong way. I think the next chapter will definitely give these two a chance to evaluate their situation and try to make it better. Thank you for such a great review, I appreciate it and I'm glad you are enjoying the story!
