d_simplicity (Signed) on Aug 26, 2008 01:59 am (Chapter 16)

OH MY GAHH!!!!! *Gasps!!!* BRI! OH MY GAHD. hahaha. I wanted to scream and strangle Justin and be like you dumb fuck! what are you doing? Why are you making things more complicated for poor selah and then bitch slap him for dumping that weight on her but then...*sigh* .... then  she responded and that bedroom scene. *gushes* I died. It  was just....*sigh* OH man, they killed me again. I'm dead now...nothing can revive me now. that was beyond hot and delish. Damn damn damn, so good. lol

You made it tie with her dream so well. So damn good. I so love the way you write Bri. But now I feel for Nick. Poor, poor nick. I sense some trouble on the Australia leg of the tour yes? A little love triangle maybe. Oh man and I love that chris brown song. good choice haha. Good luck with school girl. and update again when you can. btw, loved loved loved this update. Justin and his emotional crazed self was too cute and adorable. :) Damn, even Selah couldn't resist the boy. She did a good job though. Can't wait to see what happens next.



Author's Response: D!!! I know, I know...WTF was he thinking by doing that to her when she's trying to do the right thing? And on top of that, she's kind of "taken" too? But like Selah said, as much as she cares about Nick, she cares and needs Justin that much more and giving herself to him was the nail in the coffin on that one (haha). I'm so glad that you enjoyed this chapter love and thank you so much for all the awesome reviews and love that you leave me. I'm just glad that I could put that dream from chapter 13 to use (haha). And as for Nick? Well...*sigh* yeah, you can't just sleep with someone while you're seeing someone else. So yeah, be prepared for some type of shit to hit the fan once they're in Australia. Again girlie, thanks for reading and reviewing! *Hugs*



dfort (Signed) on Aug 26, 2008 01:22 am (Chapter 16)
Girllllll you friggin aced it. I can't wait to see what happens with the Selah/Nick/Justin love triangle, haha. Keep it up girl and good luck with moving!!

Author's Response: *Bows* Thank you, thank you...*teehee* Seriously though girlie, I know I already told you this but thank you so much for your awesome reviews and support. It really means a lot to me and I'm glad that you enjoyed it!





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