Comments For Yesterday
violet (Signed) on Jul 16, 2008 01:01 am (Learning the Truth)
Oh, oh, oh! Though I want to slap the bastard for cheating, I can feel his pain, because it's just as palpable as Janelle's is. And yay! I love when writers put pregnancy into a story, because it changes the dynamics of the couple involved. So beautifully written. I think what drew me in first was the fact you used 'Yesterday' (mytotalfaveBeatlessong!), and within two sentence I was hooked. ~ Jo
d_simplicity (Signed) on Jun 24, 2008 08:34 pm (Learning the Truth)
So, curious....does that mean he was 'druged' since he couldn't remember anything? Maybe a little spanish fly perhaps because her best friend is a wrench? hmmm...hehe. I like this, More soon. :)
Author's Response:
Author's Response:
It makes me happy that you like this story because I'm SUCH a big fan of your writing!
And we'll just have to see about what really happened...I don't want to give anything away!!
Thanks!
DaniD (Signed) on Jun 23, 2008 03:22 pm (Learning the Truth)
Author's Response: yayyyy a fellow JJBer! I totally agree with you about the quiet-hurt. Thank you for reading and I hope you enjoy the rest of it!
Ok..I read this over at jjb...and I wanted to support you here too. I love a good angsy story, and this fits the bill!
I love the way Janelle reacted..you wrote that perfectly. Definitly hurt, but not too over the top. To me...when someone is almost calmn on the outside it is more of a punch in the gut to the person that caused the hurt.
Please keep going!
Author's Response: yayyyy a fellow JJBer! I totally agree with you about the quiet-hurt. Thank you for reading and I hope you enjoy the rest of it!
Gigi (Signed) on Jun 22, 2008 10:37 pm (Learning the Truth)
Damn!
Author's Response: damn good? or damn bad? hahaha
Author's Response: damn good? or damn bad? hahaha
strwberifields (Signed) on Jun 22, 2008 01:20 pm (Learning the Truth)
Oh man! I can't wait to read the next chapter! And it looks like you might be a Beatles fan, too?
Author's Response: Um...I'm basically addicted to the Beatles. They were amazing musicians! Do I have more Beatles fans here?!
Author's Response: Um...I'm basically addicted to the Beatles. They were amazing musicians! Do I have more Beatles fans here?!
SJane (Signed) on Jun 22, 2008 07:34 am (Learning the Truth)
Oh my drama already what a way to start this lol and what a blow to leave him with
Author's Response: Ah I know! I just love surprises, don't you?
Author's Response: Ah I know! I just love surprises, don't you?
JoJo (Anonymous) on Jun 22, 2008 03:27 am (Learning the Truth)
WOW!! you just bring the drama from the beginning...i love it!! i'm lovin' this so far and i hope you update again soon.
Author's Response: Ahhhh I know...woe the drama. But thanks!!
Author's Response: Ahhhh I know...woe the drama. But thanks!!
MissTasha (Signed) on Jun 22, 2008 02:37 am (Learning the Truth)
Author's Response: Yes yes yes, in this story he's a dirty bastard...hahaha. I was in an "I hate men" mode when I started writing it! The second part is almost done, so I should have it up sometime tomorrow.
What a bastard. :( And with her best friend at that. He's got a lot to make up for and it'll be a long road. I really like it so far. Please update soon.
Author's Response: Yes yes yes, in this story he's a dirty bastard...hahaha. I was in an "I hate men" mode when I started writing it! The second part is almost done, so I should have it up sometime tomorrow.
