Comments For The End Song
crash coincidence (Signed) on May 18, 2007 08:30 pm (Chapter Twelve)
ahhhhh. you have got to be kidding me! i mean NOW she gives in. ugh . this is going to give me an ulcer, the best kind, if an ulcer is ever good :)

Author's Response: Hahaha, well, I'm not sure if they are necessarily good, but I will take it as a compliment anyway!  ;]  Thanks for reviewing!



rev0586 (Signed) on May 18, 2007 07:21 pm (Chapter Twelve)
wow they finnnaly kiss but she doesnt want 2 be w/ why, does it have to do w/ that girl... update soon although u did a lot 2 lol.. thnx

Author's Response: Haha, I'm trying!  I've got a lot of ideas for this story, hopefully most of them will pan out =]  I'm actually writing Justin's part as we speak =]



crash coincidence (Signed) on May 18, 2007 09:00 am (Chapter Eleven)
ugh. i thought things were on the right path, bit noooooo. geez. well i can only hope we can fix this. and why is going around sleeping with everyone? not so good. but this was great :)



LoveYou2 (Signed) on May 18, 2007 04:27 am (Chapter Eleven)
Well she can't be TOO mad, I mean she had her chance! Not that I condone what Justin did, pretty crappy, but if she likes him she needs to get it together. More soon :D

Author's Response: She's a very rollercoaster ride kind of girl with her emotions.  Yo-Yo'ing a bit, haha.  Thanks for the review!



LoveYou2 (Signed) on May 18, 2007 02:37 am (Chapter Ten)
Hehe! he's got a date! Oh, she's checking him out too. Mhmm, I can't wait to see where this goes! more soon :D



rev0586 (Signed) on May 16, 2007 06:26 pm (Chapter Nine)
omg is he gonna date another girl... wow i bet she'll be sorry she let him go... good work keep it up

Author's Response: Hahaha, you'll just have to wait and see what kind of curveball they throw each other =]  Thank you for reading! 



LoveYou2 (Signed) on May 16, 2007 04:07 am (Chapter Nine)
Hi! I'm just reading this story. I like it! :D I agree with Justin, he should move on. She'll come around I think and kick herself but hopefully it won't be too late. *slaps her upside the head* More soon!



rev0586 (Signed) on May 14, 2007 06:09 pm (Chapter Eight)
im glad that she got better... keep up the good work...

Author's Response: Thank you!  =]



crash coincidence (Signed) on May 14, 2007 08:16 am (Chapter Eight)
at least she didn't wake up and forget that he was on her good side. update was great....more please!

Author's Response: Thank you, thank you =]  Look for an update soon =]



Whtny (Anonymous) on May 14, 2007 02:45 am (Chapter Five)
what the truck? how she gon' be mad bc he said he loves her (albeit drunk..)



Vessy (Signed) on May 11, 2007 05:55 am (Chapter Seven)
awesome,can't wait for more!



rev0586 (Signed) on May 10, 2007 09:08 pm (Chapter Seven)
wow hes very persistant doesnt wanna give up... im loving this story



barrelracer90210 (Signed) on May 10, 2007 05:44 pm (Chapter Seven)
liking what I've read so far!!!



crash coincidence (Signed) on May 10, 2007 03:33 pm (Chapter Seven)
wow. wasn't really expecting that. i mean i'm glad she answered, but wow. thats a lot to deal with. i hope they make it

Author's Response: Only a little fork in the road.  =]  It has a lot of purpose in the story, trust me =]  I usually don't like writing stuff like accidents and stuff in stories unless they are a priority in a story to make it more in-your-face ... which this was for (mainly for Justin/Alisan).  Thanks for the review! 



crash coincidence (Signed) on May 10, 2007 10:17 am (Chapter Six)
once again, i really like this. i understand where she is coming from. her hesitancy is understandable. i just i don't know....what her to at least try? :) keep it coming

Author's Response: Thank you =]  Alisan didn't expect anyone, especially Justin to come out with feelings for her, so she was taken aback.  She's more angry at herself more than anything on how she handled it, and she's angry at him for changing how she saw her life turning out.  She was ready to live alone and not be with anyone (since it seemed that every relationship she had failed - especially with JC) and then he came along and told her things she only wished to hear.  Suddenly she did, so now she's angry.  She doesn't know what she wants anymore because of this and she hates not knowing.  =] 





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