Comments For Bar - tender Loving
Keediluv (Signed) on Mar 30, 2009 08:26 pm (Night Two, Three, Four, Five...)

AHHHHHHHHH! They kissed...yay! That was too damn cute...okay, on to chapter 3 for me!

Ki



Author's Response: Aw yeah that kiss *sigh* I miss those two...lol



MissTasha (Signed) on Jul 21, 2008 03:54 pm (Night Two, Three, Four, Five...)
Yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaayzzzzzz!!! I was hoping for sex but I'll settle for a hot kiss. A very, very hot kiss. And how cute is he? Calling to check on her and cooking soup and stuff. Great chapter. Love it. Please update soon.

Author's Response: *Clap happily* Woop! Happy you liked it girl. Ah, you all and the sex...pervs....haha, don't worry it's not over yet. *whistles* Almost...lol. Yeah Jay was cute and all caring and stuff, fussing over his Angel. Ah the perks of new, young love. *sigh* gotta get me a guy so man...damn. lol. Glad you're loving it! I'll have the last part up soon. thanks for the great feedback.



Schnessa (Signed) on Jul 21, 2008 03:12 pm (Night Two, Three, Four, Five...)
Oh...this was just good....so good...I love the kiss and he showed up to take care of her how sweet!

Author's Response: Aw yeh, I know. I love those two together. I don't even want to see them go yet but you know...at least I had a blast writing them. lol the kiss I thought of it you know...I figured, best way to express those hidden feelings for a start eh. *wink*. Happy you liked it girl. Thanks a mill for reviewing.



DaniD (Signed) on Jul 21, 2008 09:48 am (Night Two, Three, Four, Five...)
This is wonderful! I love the idea of Justin as a bartender :D Angela is pretty cool...and I don't blame her one bit for dragging her ass to the club every Friday night! lol

Author's Response: Me too! I love bartender!J! I might use him as my muse again for another short in the future. lol. Yeah, she's got it bad man, they both do. I'm almost done with the last part so I'll have it up soon. Glad you like this and thanks so much for letting me know. :)



alimera (Signed) on Jul 21, 2008 09:23 am (Night Two, Three, Four, Five...)
Aww, that was cute! Update again soon!

Author's Response: Thanks! Almost done fixing up the last chap. I should have it out soon for you guys. :)



SJane (Signed) on Jul 21, 2008 07:46 am (Night Two, Three, Four, Five...)
Oh I felt like melting into a puddle myself just from reading that kiss great job

Author's Response: Aww thanks so much. I know what you mean. hehehe. I'm really happy you all are enjoying.



SexualCoco (Signed) on Jul 21, 2008 04:05 am (Night Two, Three, Four, Five...)
Oooh, that was so cute and sexy! Especially that kiss at the end...damn, I wish I was Angela (*teehee*). But my heart melted at how he called to see if she was okay and then showed up to her place to cook and take care of her. Shoot, I want a boo like that (haha). Great job girlie and even though it's almost over, I'm loving this story girlie!

Author's Response: Gurl I wish I was her too...I want a boo like that too! hahaha. Dang man. LOL Yeah, when she was sick, Justin couldn't help it anymore. He had to let his true feelings show. And that kiss...*sigh* I envisioned it. But I didn't want them to get carried away yet you know. lol. hehe. The last part will be up soon. Thanks for the feedback Bri.



Vessy (Signed) on Jul 21, 2008 03:23 am (Night Two, Three, Four, Five...)
great chapter!

Author's Response: Yay! Thanks vessy! :)





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