So... I've decided to re-write Start It Up (again). I haven't been happy with it, and can do much better, so here we are. I'm going to keep the other version up for now, but eventually I'll delete it. The thing is I don't want to lose all your lovely comments :)

Feedback would be great. I'm trying to improve my writing style, so any comments would be greatly appreciated. (Yes, even the negative ones.)