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The Kiss by Sox (R) [Comments - 10]

Written for the Drama Queen Challenge (I hope I'm doing this right)

 

Option A: The One I Gave My Heart To – Aaliyah

Relationships end and majority of the time it’s not a mutual thing. It’s heart-wrenching. Your leading lady has loved her man and loved him to the best of her ability for a long length of time. At a time they were engaged but now it’s over. The reason the relationship is ending is up to you. Maybe it’s him or maybe it’s her but either way you need to really examine the different emotions that they are going through during the process. They now have to learn to live separately when they have co-existed seemingly forever.

Includes: U-Haul truck, boxes and tape, scent of his cologne, engagement ring, a nosey neighbor.

 



Categories: Completed Het Stories
Characters: Justin Timberlake
Awards: None
Genres: Angst, Drama, General

Series: None
Chapters: 4
Wordcount: 10610 - Hits: 10144
Complete?: Yes - Published: Sep 24, 2008 - Last Updated: Oct 26, 2008 -
Reviewer: Lily Signed
Date: Sep 24, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Well damn, you're killing me. I was literally crying along with them haha And the whole dog thing... I was like "NO NOT THE DOGS!" Good God. haha

Very good, very sad. but I felt everything they were feeling. Good job! Good luck! :) 



Author's Response: haha good, that's what I was going for. Sorry I made you cry, but thanks for reading! :)

Fallen by Sox (R) [Comments - 13]

 

            She sat at the foot of the bed, biting her bottom lip and looking up at me.  She offered a sweet smile but it was killing me. I haven’t been home in six months and it’s awkward, it’s not supposed to be awkward. “I’m really proud of you.”

            “I know,” I answered quickly; she’s said it a hundred times. I know she means well, but I don’t think the fact that I just finished a six-month detox and rehab program is anything to be proud of.  It’s something that I should be ashamed of, or at least the fact that I was taking heroine in the first place.

 

I really suck at summaries haha I have no idea what to write for this one ;) I wrote it for a challenge so I figured I'd post it on up.  



Categories: In Progress Het Stories
Characters: Justin Timberlake
Awards: None
Genres: Angst, Drama, Romance, Suspense

Series: None
Chapters: 4
Wordcount: 10911 - Hits: 9249
Complete?: Yes - Published: Nov 16, 2008 - Last Updated: Dec 03, 2008 -
Reviewer: Lily Signed
Date: Nov 19, 2008 Title: Chapter 2: Part II

Well at least he's really cooperative. I feel like it'll all work out because he's not trying to hide anything. He seems to love his wife and kid so much. At least I hope he does haha I hope its' not just an act. i have trust issues haha. Update soon!

Author's Response: haha you do have trust issues. I don't want to give anything away but I'll update soon. That will help at least a  little ;) Thanks for the review!