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Spoiled by LuLu (NC-17) starstarstarstarstar [Comments - 198]

And I would only be fooling myself if I tried to
Believe there's room for someone else in my heart
There ain't no way I'm getting over you
I don't know what I've been trying to prove
I'm hopeless, helpless when it comes to you
- Joss Stone



Categories: In Progress Het Stories
Characters: Justin Timberlake
Awards: None
Genres: Drama, Romance

Series: None
Chapters: 59
Wordcount: 336631 - Hits: 214585
Complete?: Yes - Published: Sep 05, 2007 - Last Updated: Jun 09, 2012 -
Reviewer: avalyne Signed
Date: Jan 10, 2012 Title: Chapter 53: Life in the Limelight

this is definitely one of my fav stories i like to re-read, so i'm glad you're back after that long hiatus :) love the music video concept. that song really deserved one!

Author's Response: I'm glad to be back. Thanks for hanging in there with me..... I know! I remember being so bummed when there wasn't a video for Summer Love. I think Justin and Kiki's video would have made it to the number one spot LoL. Thanx for leaving a review!

Everyone has that one person they go back to-the one person they cant seem to shake off even if they tried. Justin and Nicole's story is no different. Finding themselves lost in a cycle that neither one knows how to control, and neither one wants to end after so many years. An arrangement they both thought they could handle without either one getting hurt. Continuing a cycle that leads them back to another again.



Categories: In Progress Het Stories
Characters: Justin Timberlake
Awards: None
Genres: Romance

Series: None
Chapters: 40
Wordcount: 194730 - Hits: 141299
Complete?: No - Published: Jan 07, 2008 - Last Updated: Jun 17, 2014 -
Reviewer: avalyne Signed
Date: Jun 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Walk Away

this story is sooo addicting. you've really got a knack for angst girl. you captured nicole's emotions so perfectly towards the end. i felt like i was right along with her. i'm glad you didn't let this slump discourage you from writing more. you've got a lot of plot lines to play around with which gives me all the more reason to believe that your next installment will be just as great! :)

Reviewer: avalyne Signed
Date: Mar 27, 2011 Title: Chapter 35: Edge of Desire

out of all the stories i'm tracking, this is the one i look forward to the most. what can i say? amazing, as usual. :) whoever's not reading this is really missing out!

The last story in the "All or Nothing" trilogy of Natalia and Justin.

Some lies are inescapable...

 

*the original* 



Categories: In Progress Het Stories
Characters: JC Chasez, Justin Timberlake
Awards: None
Genres: Action/Adventure, Alternate Universe, Angst, Drama, Humor, Romance, Suspense

Series: All Or Nothing
Chapters: 16
Wordcount: 60791 - Hits: 40784
Complete?: No - Published: Mar 25, 2008 - Last Updated: Oct 31, 2012 -
Reviewer: avalyne Signed
Date: May 15, 2012 Title: Chapter 14: What I Need

I am so unbelievably happy that you're back! When I saw it was being continued by a different author, I got slightly excited and then I got completely disappointed because I felt like everyone was so out of character! This chapter was the perfect remedy :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much!! Yep, I'm back and let's hope 2012 will be the year I get to finish this series. :)

Justin Timberlake is such a nice, normal person.  He’s so sweet and laid back and really is the boy next door. The fame hasn’t gone to his head at all. Ah… sarcasm. What a wonderful thing. The truth is Justin is probably the most annoying, obnoxious, self-absorbed human being in the universe. He has the world fooled. I know this because I am his personal assistant, or as he looks at it: his slave.  



Categories: In Progress Het Stories
Characters: Justin Timberlake
Awards: None
Genres: Drama, General, Humor

Series: None
Chapters: 25
Wordcount: 64731 - Hits: 96347
Complete?: Yes - Published: Apr 11, 2008 - Last Updated: Feb 28, 2010 -
Reviewer: avalyne Signed
Date: Jan 23, 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

omgosh i was wondering if you forgot about this story! i was seriously left wondering where their last stop was going to be. and thanks to you, i no longer have to wonder :)

and my favorite part? "Would you shut up about Keith Urban? He's Australian, he doesn't even know what the fuck real country is." LMAO you have no idea how many of my country music friends say that. great chapter as always!



Author's Response: haha thanks for still reading, sorry to leave you wondering hopefully will update again soon. haha true about Keith Urban too :)

Set in New York City, Justin Timberlake and Amelia Domineck are the hottest couple in the Manhattan social scene, and their wedding is fast approaching Event of the Year status. Amelia, headstrong and domineering, is not just planning her wedding, she’s choreographing it and Justin seems to simply be along for the ride, as well as Amelia’s assistant Charlotte who after accepting the job wonders if slavery somehow became legal without her realizing it. A Lolita wedding planner, a flakey assistant, and one bridezilla converge together to bring Charlotte and Justin closer and Justin begins to wonder… is this really all that’s left for him? A ring and a promise of forever with Amelia, or does he dare to dream of something more?



Categories: Completed Het Stories
Characters: Justin Timberlake
Awards: Season 6
Genres: Angst, Drama, Romance

Series: None
Chapters: 45
Wordcount: 246846 - Hits: 232033
Complete?: Yes - Published: May 12, 2008 - Last Updated: Jan 30, 2011 -
Reviewer: avalyne Signed
Date: Jul 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 24

"He consoles himself in thinking that if he’d just been having sex on at least a semi-regular basis that he’d be able to stop himself."

Well, DUH! That's because you're not just "having sex" idiot. You're freaking in love with this girl and you're too damn stubborn to admit it. And you just can't stop, nor can you help yourself (who can blame him? Charlotte is SUCH a great catch!) But he also loves (albeit a very different kind of love) Amelia. And despite how much he wants to just throw it all away sometimes, he still desperately holds on. For reasons unbeknownst to himself.

So all he needs is a damn good reason to leave Amelia. Just one. (And if cheating's not good enough I don't know what will be!!) But as much as I want Justin to dump Amelia's sorry ass, I can't help but want him to do the noble thing and stay true to his relationship. Aahh damn you morals!!! But seeing our Justin happy DEFINITELY outweighs morality. (Let's face it, morality was thrown out the window the second Justin set his eyes on Charlie).

I really hope that Justin figures this whole thing out before he's left standing at the altar about to make the biggest mistake of his life, leaving Charlie to debate with herself whether or not to stop the freaking wedding. (Although... that would make for some juicy drama, lol). And I agree with im. I can't wait to see Trace's reaction either! Lol, especially with his whole schpeel about him betting that Justin loves Charlie and not Amelia. Oh, he'll have a field day with this one...

Oh gosh, I'm so anxious as to what Justin's next move is going to be. I just hope that whatever it is, it's not going to totally destroy the progress him and Charlie just made in the last week. I don't want them to go back to the way they were. I want them to progress! (or at least keep on having naughty random sex, hehe)

Stole by Sox (R) [Comments - 63]
They took her away from me. Nobody seems to get that. I finally found the love of my life; the girl I married and they stole her. They took her and my daughter and all anyone can do is tell me how sorry they are. 

Categories: In Progress Het Stories
Characters: Justin Timberlake
Awards: None
Genres: Angst, Drama, General, Romance

Series: None
Chapters: 17
Wordcount: 39274 - Hits: 37998
Complete?: No - Published: Jan 24, 2009 - Last Updated: Oct 06, 2010 -
Reviewer: avalyne Signed
Date: Apr 28, 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Misshaped Head

aww gosh. protective justin always sends my heart all a flutter. lol and your chapter title is hilarious. but on a serious note, i really do hope nothing's wrong with the baby.

Author's Response: Yes, protective Justin is always nice lol thanks for reading, glad you liked the title lol

Send another long love letter
Just another long love letter
Send another long love letter straight to me

The butterflies are out from Charlottesville this morning
They were carryin' a letter addressed to me
As I tore the envelope open sunshine came pourin' out
All at once I set them best wishes free


You wrote "how's it been" in some crazy pen on paper
The red wine stain on the back had me green with envy
And the blues you sang on the b-side of that mixtape made me smile
Realized this love of ours might never be

You're upstate with Shakespeare 
I'm out west with Cassidy
As our long love letters pass like strangers in the night


Send another long love letter
Just another long love letter
Send another long love letter straight to me


You went on and on 'bout some new song and a change of seasons
Bout how Buckley's sketches kept you up all night
Though I did my best to lay to rest your fears about gettin' old
Truth be told it's been so long you just might be right


You're upstate with Shakespeare
I'm out west with Cassidy
As our long love letters pass like strangers in the night

Send another long love letter
Just another long love letter
Send another long love letter straight to me 

As I tore the envelope open sunshine came pourin' out
Realized this love of ours was so meant to be


Send another long love letter
Just another long love letter
Send another long love letter straight to me

 

"Long Love Letter"- Tony Lucca



Categories: Completed Het Stories
Characters: Justin Timberlake
Awards: None
Genres: General, Humor, Romance

Series: None
Chapters: 11
Wordcount: 12339 - Hits: 28314
Complete?: Yes - Published: Jul 28, 2010 - Last Updated: Nov 23, 2010 -
Reviewer: avalyne Signed
Date: Jul 29, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: 1996

"when you sing, you sound like a goat on helium"

best. line. ever. it definitely gave me the giggles. this story is really too cute for words!



Author's Response:

haha i am so very glad you all enjoy my craziness.

thank ya hun! i appreciate it!

Past Featured Story

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At twenty-two years old, Justin Timberlake was voted in as the youngest CEO in Goldman Sachs Brokerage company history.  Reaching billionaire status by the age of twenty four, he is considered untouchable by most, especially by his own family.  Greed has taken over his mind, and his lifestyle, his most famous motto being ‘business first.’  When tragedy suddenly strikes, Justin is faced with the responsibility of caring for two people he never thought he would have to.  Kids are easy though, right? Wrong.  Realizing he needs help, he begins to seek it, but what he finds is more than what he bargained for.



Categories: Completed Het Stories
Characters: Justin Timberlake
Awards: Season 7
Genres: Alternate Universe, Angst, Drama, Romance

Series: None
Chapters: 77
Wordcount: 337715 - Hits: 218030
Complete?: Yes - Published: May 10, 2011 - Last Updated: Dec 04, 2011 -
Reviewer: avalyne Signed
Date: May 18, 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Four

aww! i think my heart just melted.

Author's Response: haah thanks! i'm glad i made your heart melt lol.

Reviewer: avalyne Signed
Date: Oct 18, 2011 Title: Chapter 41: Forty One

GAH! you have me so torn! i'm starting to think you like fucking with our minds, lol. if only everyone could have a happy ending... make it happen dammit! lol please?

Author's Response:

I'm really not evil...

 

I swear...

I will try hard to accomodate your request, but no promises! Lol. thank you for reading! I appreciate your support :)

Reviewer: avalyne Signed
Date: Oct 29, 2011 Title: Chapter 50: Fifty

these last two chapters rocked my socks off. i'm so happy to see justin fighting for abbey!

Author's Response: aw thanks! I'm working on the next chapter now so...more soon!