Penname: Vikki [Contact] Real name: Vikki
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Bobbi gets ditched on her birthday and decides to head out and celebrate on her own



Categories: Completed Het Stories
Characters: JC Chasez
Awards: None
Genres: Romance

Series: None
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 2904 - Hits: 1626
Complete?: Yes - Published: Jan 22, 2009 - Last Updated: Jan 22, 2009 -
Reviewer: Vikki Signed
Date: Jan 23, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Happy Birthday To Me

damn... can i have him for my birthday too? lol! :)

 

 

speaking of Murphy's Law ... *pouts* update? soon? yes?

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They took her away from me. Nobody seems to get that. I finally found the love of my life; the girl I married and they stole her. They took her and my daughter and all anyone can do is tell me how sorry they are. 

Categories: In Progress Het Stories
Characters: Justin Timberlake
Awards: None
Genres: Angst, Drama, General, Romance

Series: None
Chapters: 17
Wordcount: 39274 - Hits: 37998
Complete?: No - Published: Jan 24, 2009 - Last Updated: Oct 06, 2010 -
Reviewer: Vikki Signed
Date: Feb 05, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: The Look of Sympathy

goddamn looks of sympathy.... i hate those too. i could never do the whole "I'm sorry" thing when people lose someone they loved. I'll give a hug and buy them a drink, or listen if they want to talk. but the last thing they need are "sorries" and sympathy sometimes.

and yeah this is depressing.... but its one of my favorite stories right now, just want you to know that.

its not always love and roses out there and this is such a refreshing change of pace. love it and you better post more soon.



Author's Response: Yes, it's always hard when you're in situations like that. Thanks for reading, I'm glad you like it. I thought I'd try something different lol 

Reviewer: Vikki Signed
Date: Jan 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Too Many I'm Sorrys

fuck sarah! that was a half ass warning! you need to reword it and put something like "Look! You're about to bawl your fucking eyes out so grab a box of tissues and close the door so no one walks by thinking you're dying!"

this is killing me but obviously I'm nuts and would like to be an emotional wreck some more so post the next chapter soon.

now excuse me while I go blow my damn nose.



Author's Response: SORRY! I thought that was warning enough but I guess not. You have to learn if I say it's sad you have to trust me and expect the worst haha. ANYWAY thanks for reading and reviewing, It's probably going to be sad for awhile.... but maybe it'll have a happy ending... maybe not lol I haven't decided yet. 

Reviewer: Vikki Signed
Date: Feb 01, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Keep Your Chin Up

my heart hurts. :(

oh justin... I just want to hug him so tightly and cry right along with him. omg.

and delia... damn. I dont think I'm that strong. To be preggers after losing my husband. no... i am not that strong. hugs to her too.

man... my heart still hurts. *grabs more tissues*

its 2:30am and my eyes are so gonna be puffy from lack of sleep and crying.... lol! luv you but you're killing me here!



Author's Response: i don't know how to respond to these haha I'm sorry it's sad. :( It will get less sad at some point lol thanks for sticking with me though :)

Reviewer: Vikki Signed
Date: Feb 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: The First Night

omg... i probably would've sufficated the roommate with my pillow.

wow ... 11 people? that seems small but probably big considering its small ass town in tennesse, lol! love how he ordered pizza btw... little celebrity show-off. but that was very nice of him to share it, and very nice of her to apologize... they might not think the best of each other but at least they know the other exist, i'll take it.

group session should be interesting... can't wait!



Author's Response: Yeah it's in the middle of nowhere, kinda small and intimate haha they do know eachother exist and maybe if they weren't so messed up they'd be nicer. They're just grumpy lol thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Vikki Signed
Date: Mar 30, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: The First Group Session

*sigh* I love this story. I really do.

I love her and I love him... they're both different but, the same. that makes sense right? well you know, you wrote them... lol!

more soon please :)



Author's Response: Thank you so much. I'm glad you're reading it :) They both are more similar than they've realized... but they're getting there lol thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Vikki Signed
Date: Apr 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Professional Phaser Outer

awww! I love this!

even the sad parts make me smile cause they're getting closer and they totally deserve to have someone "normal" in that place, and now they're roomies! yay!

more soon! :)



Author's Response: Thanks Vikki! I'm glad you like it. I'll try to update soon, real life is kinda stressing me out haha but I'll work on it. 

I'm tired of it, I'm tired of ALL of it...he's here one minute and gone the next, all I can think as that he doesn't love me anymore.

Categories: In Progress Het Stories
Characters: Justin Timberlake
Awards: None
Genres: Drama

Series: None
Chapters: 6
Wordcount: 4934 - Hits: 12512
Complete?: No - Published: Jan 25, 2009 - Last Updated: Sep 14, 2009 -
Reviewer: Vikki Signed
Date: Jan 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: I Hate You

omg! of course he told Trace! but he didnt have to tell her that Trace knows! *shakes head*... like ooooo that makes it all better? lol! i feel so bad! he's an ass but awwww he was crying! i want to give them both a hug. :(

and you're doing good! I mean... you could always leave it as a short if you're really stuck. but I'm greedy and would like more. :)

don't be too open to too many ideas from different people, it can take the story out of focus. just take the time you need to map it out... scribble down a little outline and just let your thoughts flow.

seriously you're doing good... don't force it and it'll come to you. :)



Author's Response: Thank you soo much for your feedback!! I have taken your advice and just been chipping away little by little, there are certain scenes that I want to put in the story so I am trying to figure out ways to include them, so how far I am fairly pleased with the outcome! Keep telling me what you think!

Reviewer: Vikki Signed
Date: Jan 25, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Two Little Words

ooooo i like! really interested in seeing where you take this.

more soon? :)



Author's Response: Thank you!!! I have posted mmmmmmooooooooorrrrrrrreeeeeeeee, and I hope you like it!

Past Featured Story

Corporate drone Serena Willis is living an existence that seems just fine, until she meets a celebrity on a flight to LA. Not just any celebrity, but one she's been dreaming about meeting for a long time. Trapped together as they fly to LA, they begin to talk and sparks fly. Serena takes a chance, and they hit it off. But will this be just a weekend fling, or is this more than they bargained for?



Categories: Completed Het Stories
Characters: JC Chasez
Awards: Season 5, Season 6, Season 8
Genres: Romance

Series: None
Chapters: 70
Wordcount: 557241 - Hits: 396361
Complete?: Yes - Published: Jan 29, 2009 - Last Updated: Feb 22, 2011 -
Reviewer: Vikki Signed
Date: Jan 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Something In The Air (pt1)

*squeal* omg!! I love this!

He laughed, a nice chesty laugh, one that I had been known to rewind several times during interviews.

Seriously! LOL!

I dont hate flying but I know I could definitely embarass myself enough on a plane were I'd be right there with her, *bows head in shame* ... I am way to clumsy for my own good, lol!

Love this! Must continue to procrastinate and read the next chapter! :)



Author's Response: Haha! Thanks! Don't be late for anything! It'll be here! For serious, I won't delete this one.

Reviewer: Vikki Signed
Date: Jan 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Something In The Air (pt2)

ew Marcus! lol!

omg that was such a great first date... *sigh*. I might have pecked him on the lips though but thats just the latina girl in me... lol!

he seems to really like her and i love that! next!



Author's Response: Oh, she's totally gonn make up for that.  ;)

Reviewer: Vikki Signed
Date: Jan 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Secrets (Pt2)

so i tried to eat a late lunch and read this chapter at the same time.... not one of my best ideas!

I choked about twice, but most of the time my mouth was just getting dry as my food got cold... lol!

FUCK that man is hot.

and I need to mention how i love the story, I love how she's got this life, this history, and how he can relate and is just so sympathetic about it... that just pulled my heart strings. :)

can't wait for more!



Author's Response: My bestie said she wanted to go to LA, if that's what happens when you go there. Lol. Yeah I am going to hell, for this story.

Reviewer: Vikki Signed
Date: Jan 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: The Day After Next (Pt1)

HELL YES!

 

ooo ... wait.... he wasn't actually asking me now was he. *blushes*

sorry... I'm just gonna go back to reading now, ok thanks.



Author's Response: *giggle* I had to try to remember what you were talking about.

Reviewer: Vikki Signed
Date: Jan 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: The Day After Next (Pt 2)

stupid life and stupid distractions.... it took me way too long to get through this chapter! lol! 

The thought of JC wielding a hot glue gun and some rhinestones, bedazzling the hell out of something had me laughing hysterically.

OMG! that was too funny... seriously I needed a minute after reading that, lol!

loved this chapter! they're just so *swoon*! chillin' at his crib, on his bed, then the kick-back bbq and Wii Playing!  and omgsocute when JC gave her a teddy bear... awww!

so since this isnt "the end" (thank god!) ... I can't wait to see what happens! if she comes back to LA or he goes out to ATL? hmmmm...



Author's Response:

No, not the end. I think this is going to be a longish one. I don't want to rush through this.. they both have some issues they need to help each other work out.

I have another update coming. I'm obsessively editing. 

Reviewer: Vikki Signed
Date: Jan 30, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Mum's The Word (Pt2)

girl you can't update this late! lol! i'm gonna have bags under my eyes tomorrow and its gonna be all your fault! :)

ok first... so happy she started therpy, she needs to fix her before she starts "us" you know?

and OMG at the old fan photo... I probably would've waited until our one year anniversary to wip out the fandom stuff... lol! but he took it better than i expected, lol!

and whoa to the umm... yes! now thats some hot lets-make-up-for-lost-time sex right there! very crispy! lol!

but umm no....

When I came back down, JC, naked ass and all, was perched on the couch in my living room, flipping through one of the photo albums that I had stacked under the mounted television.

I love naked!JC but his ass better have some boxers on before he sits on anything other than my bed, toliet, or bath tub... lol!

aside from that... loved it, like always! :)



Author's Response:

haa! I will edit that out, likely. It's a minor change. As for the fan photo, you should see what I had there before. O_o. 

I totally agree she needs to fix her before there's an 'us'. Good, the stuff I am thinking about while writing is coming out! \\o/