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Corporate drone Serena Willis is living an existence that seems just fine, until she meets a celebrity on a flight to LA. Not just any celebrity, but one she's been dreaming about meeting for a long time. Trapped together as they fly to LA, they begin to talk and sparks fly. Serena takes a chance, and they hit it off. But will this be just a weekend fling, or is this more than they bargained for?



Categories: Completed Het Stories
Characters: JC Chasez
Awards: Season 5, Season 6, Season 8
Genres: Romance

Series: None
Chapters: 70
Wordcount: 557241 - Hits: 396361
Complete?: Yes - Published: Jan 29, 2009 - Last Updated: Feb 22, 2011 -
Reviewer: Vikki Signed
Date: Aug 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 31

fuck! *runs off to find tissues*

I keep saying it, I know, but DAMN IT! I fucking love this story so much. Him and those lyrics and holding her and talking about kids and a family and OMG that letter he wrote her and sending it so its the last piece of mail! STOP OK JUST STOP IT! *sobs*

I cant be single while reading this. I just cant. Its killing me! lol! I need a man, fuck... lets be honest, I need THIS JC! Make him come to life for me... lmao!

I'm not gonna even mention the first half of this chapter cause girl you knooow what you were doing when you wrote that like that and.... well... yes. Lets leave it at that. *melts*

loved the drive down to florida... a little sneak preview before the main show! yay! the road trip back to LA is gonna be awesome!!

seriously dying to see how you write up his parents. ah which reminds me of the last chapter and the whole patio scene with serena's parents. OMG loved it. they were just so spot on with what they were telling her. i just kept nodding my head going "yup thats right" lol!

and awww MELISSA! i totally shed a tear there... so sad. I love my friends and will die if they left me and flew across the country. I'm too selfish... ha!



Author's Response:

Lol, your reviews are always hilariously fun. Yes, I knew what I was doing. I was long overdue for some good old fashioned smut. LMAO. Ehhhhhhhhh. it is what it is and you KNOW it would be on if you did not see Fictional JC for 2 months. Dude, not sure I'd make it home...

Melissa breaks my heart, I cried writing it, then reading it. 

Seriously on a roll with this story! Can't wait to write his parents either, and then get on the road! 

Reviewer: Vikki Signed
Date: Sep 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 32- Part 2

boooo I wanted to be your 100th review! *pouts*

fiiiine... 101 will have to do. reminds me of the cute little dalmatian movie haha!

ok anyway, back to JC and Serena OMGOMGOMG!

I'm bathing in the overflowing cuteness seriously. the deli thing was just adorable. he had a "usual" and his fav table and then the sexy look with the green flecks which I'm gonna have to search for in EVERY picture now thankyouverymuch.

and then ooooooo the boat! sunset? SUNSET! come on! *dies* I would so rape him on a boat. yes rape... I said it! he's asking for it when he's all sexy and flirty like that *melts*.

and then Thanksgiving! Roy, Karen... DUDE HEATHER?! I totally forgot she existed there for a minute. and I would've been scared for Serena too. we know nothing about this chick, no clue what to expect! but omg she was so niiiice! awww! and ooo snap... the wine! and her going on about fake friends and high school. dude that sucks.

but the whole family were all so nice and JC-ish! *happy dance* I loved it! and ok... i may have gotten a little misty-eyed with the the whole anniversary/lilies scene. that was the freaking icing on the cake of awesome.

and then OH HELL part 2! the email! LMAO! that would be so me... actually that would be any girl, lets be honest. walk away, distract yourself, no no no no! dont look! okay fine... just a peak, yeah just that sentence. lol! then she LEAVES HER WINE GLASS AND THE DOOR OPEN!

I love her.

and okay fine she might not be curious but I AM ... who was he writing too damn it! lol!

the family time was... again... CUTENESS! Karen talking to her on the patio and then the parents sharing the adoption story! gawd that was just perfect!

I'm gonna reread this chapter like crazy until you update btw... favorite.story.ever!!!



Author's Response:

Well Gosh, Vikki. did you like it? I can't tell! HA!

Yeah, I liked this chapter and REALLY stressed about his family, especially his sister because we know so little about her. For some, that might make it easier to go all carte blanche, but I worry so much and try so hard to stay realistic. 

 

I don't know who he was emailing! LOL. It's not a focal point of the story! 

Yeah I would be curious, too, but.... I think she's running from something, because what girl wouldn't just DIE to be Mrs, you know? For some reason this character isn't letting me write her all excited and looking forward to being married. Have yet to figure out why. I guess there's more story left!! 

Thanks babe, your reviews make writing such a joy! 

Reviewer: Vikki Signed
Date: Oct 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 33: Road Trippin' with JC: Charleston

I was pretty sure that he kept things in his ‘Chasez Arsenal of Things That Drive Women Wild', and saved them up for the most unexpected, inopportune moments. Then he'd bust them out and act so humble and cute but on the inside was thinking ‘yeah, I got her with that one. She's totally hooked.' Well, I was. Totally hooked.

aaaaahhhhh! I LOVE! I LOVE I LOVE I LOVE!


JC was just barely holding onto the rod, his forehead creased with concentration, his mouth in a grimace, his arms flexed, his legs spread apart. Was it wrong to be really attracted to him, right then?

omg! you made fishing sexy... I LOVE!

"Because. I'm gonna take you to some places I haven't been in a long time. I've been thinking about it for awhile and... thinking always makes me remember things I kind of don't want to remember. I wanted to forget, for a little bit."

oooo my gosh. this means the next chapter is gonna be so gooooood! eeep!

MUST READ MORE! *click click*



Author's Response: Do you know how hard it is to make fishing seem sexy? :\\ Well, really not very hard at all when it's HIM fishing! :-D I love your reviews, thank you!

Reviewer: Vikki Signed
Date: Oct 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 34: Road Trippin W/ JC: Bowie, Baby!

"Counting on it," he said quietly. "I'm gonna need you."

*dies* ... I love these two. I do. SO very much!

I love your brain! Omg when she was describing the hotel room it felt like I was there and omg trust me I'd switch places with your fictional character in a heart beat! But wait... we're not talking about my delutionalness.

LOVED the whole Kacy scene!

and ooooooomg shefellasleepontopofhim. *guh*



Author's Response: Lol. Creating cute moments is my hobby. The lovey times in between the fighting are fun! THey definitely needed to connect this night, because of what happens the next day. I wanted to convey a solid bond, because he's going to need it. Anyway. LOL, thanks! I love your reviews!

Reviewer: Vikki Signed
Date: Oct 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 34: Road Trippin' it with JC: Bowie, Baby! (pt2)

Light bulbs were starting to go off, in my head, dinging all over the place. I mean, maybe they didn't explain a whole lot of his neurotic behaviors, but any child who had to live through that was sure to build up an irresistible preference toward certain things, and have an almost OCD-like reaction to the opposite.

my god! my heart was like... bleeding! omg!

stop doing this to meeee! *sobs*

i almost forgive you because i loooooove Michael Buble! lol! And this is MY SONG! I stop and sing everytime it pops up in my playlist lol!

Head. Over Heels. Completely in love with him. He sang, seriously, without me having to beg him to do it. It was beautiful music to my ears that traveled to my heart and around and around until I was submerged in it. I would never forget it, as long as I lived.

*squeel* OMGZ! and his whole "I love that you this, and I love that you that" speach was just... OMG!

and THEN you fucker! you made me start crying all over again! shit!

 

but I love you. and yes, this was awesome.



Author's Response: I have reached new heights! I've never been called a fucker before! HEEEEE! I LOVe that you loved it! Working on the next chapter but this one is pretty hard to follow.

Reviewer: Vikki Signed
Date: Oct 04, 2009 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 35: Road Trippin' it: Balls & a Big Stick

Thank you! This was a very fun chapter... nice after breaking my heart and sobbing uncontrollably in the last one lol!

duuuuude the whole morning sex *guh* I hate her sometimes. Your fictional character is so damn lucky! lol!

the seedy dive joint was adorable! I wanna drink tap beer and play pool with JC! OMG THANK YOU FOR TWEEZING HIS EYEBROWS!

hhhmmm what else....

UGH the whole ass squeezing in the street... yes that would totally be me. and i love how they remembered their first date... awww!

Can't wait for NY :)



Author's Response: I will never forget being called a fucker. Love it!! ha! I totally never pay atteniton to his brows... i just needed a reason to use that line... but I'm so happy it worked! Yep she's pretty damn lucky... hope she realizes it!

Reviewer: Vikki Signed
Date: Oct 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 36 | In Old New York (Pt1)

aaaaaawwwwwwwwww! they napped!

god i love this story. you gave me a freakin heart attack with that highway accident though... geezus!



Author's Response: Good, I'm glad you had a reaction to the accident! Not to be mean, of course... I just spent a lot of time revising it so it sounded just right... scary and grippiing but JC is there to save the day and offer comfort, like always.

Reviewer: Vikki Signed
Date: Oct 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 36 | In Old New York (Pt2)

i have this huge cheesy smile on my face.... lol!

because i dont tell you EVERY damn time i interview... ehm... I LOVE THIS STORY!

srsly like... everything. just everything. awesome.

He was so deliciously evil, even when I was mad at him. Even when we were fighting, he was hot. I loved him and hated him, at the same time.

THIS! YES!


My arms slid around him, clinging to him as we stood on the sidewalk, in front of a brightly lit restaurant on a busy street in Brooklyn, enjoying a long, slow, romantic kiss like there was no one else on the planet.

ooooooomg! *sigh* I want him. mine. damn you!

and yeah... thank you for letting them... well you know... that was fucking hot lol!



Author's Response: My work here is done!  Lol. Well, thanks, I'm glad you like it! And yeah... sometimes a sex scene just plants itself in the story where I had no plans to put one. :|  It's like a bad child, sometimes. It really does whatever it wants and makes me write it.

Reviewer: Vikki Signed
Date: Oct 28, 2009 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 37: Prelude to a Rumble

ooooo tomorrow! tomorrow! I love ya! Tomorrow!

 *clicks next* 

 

oh wait! love the whole.... "go on tour MY way" idea. Someone needs to send the real JC that memo.



Author's Response: Lol. Oh, look I already have a review! Wonder who it could beeee???? Lol. Dood. Taking a memo. For serious.

Reviewer: Vikki Signed
Date: Oct 28, 2009 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 38 : Road Trippin' it with JC: A Rumble in Manhattan

uhhhhhh excuse me. this chapter seems to have cut off early. its missing the "back at the hotel room" scene where they have yummy time again. *chessy grin*

 

ok but srsly... aside from my tweets I need to talk about Mars! I never had any desire to go there but now that you've mentioned it... with JC... I might lol!

The whole place reminded me a little of Star Wars. Or more specifically, the weekend JC forced me to watch the entire series in one sitting.  I was never the same, after that.

I lol'd so hard at that! First, I'm a nerd and love Star Wars, the original much more than the new ones but I'd totally love having a lazy sunday with JC watching the whole series *sigh*.

 


"I just happened to notice you lookin' all good, over there," 

eeeeeeep! you know that "girl do you wanna ffffff...." popped in my head? lmao!

Loved this chapter SO much! His whole freak out then confession at PB&Co. was just all kinda of awesomely done! 

and he was so much fun! WICKED! srsly best boyfriend ever. I'm jealous. I want him lol!

 

 



Author's Response: Lol. Sounded like a fun day, to me! Your (and other) reviews always make me feel better. GAH the mental torture I give myself over fanfiction. *nono* Happy you enjoyed it. You can thank our friend for the Mars idea. That place is NERD.TASTIC! lol. He'd love it. There will be yummytime in the next chapter. They have to miss each other!

Reviewer: Vikki Signed
Date: Mar 03, 2010 Title: Chapter 44: Ch. 39: Road Trippin' it With JC: Learning a Lesson

ok this wont be long because I need to click next... lol!

But I LOVED this for the following reasons:

1. they are SO fucking cute! with the "i miss you"s and "i love you"s... ugh!

2. YES classic Serena with the whole, eight o'clock wtf moment. I love her so hard.

3. JC is full of awesome.... break stuff, go to the gym, wtvr just dont be mad when i get back. HAHAHAHA!

aaaaaand the rooftop! *sigh*

I love that she's all uber!girlfriend lets-rock-this-solo-tour-togetherness! she's loving and supportive and explained to him WHY and that's just... GAH! LOVE THIS!


Author's Response: I just realized I never responded to your reviews! so sorry. I think they're cute, too. She's such a twit. 

Reviewer: Vikki Signed
Date: Mar 03, 2010 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 40: Road Trippin' it with JC: Simple

umm.... yeah. i need that.

 

ehm....

 

ok right. story. um... what was this chapter about again? lol! *scrolls up past the hot sex* oh yeah, christmas and stuff.

I totally agree with JC about taking it slow with Regina, and I LOVE that she got all defensive and Serena-like at first, but then chilled and saw the wisdom in JC lol! She's growing... me like.



Author's Response: hehehe, well you're welcome! 

Is your figure less than Greek? Is your mouth a little weak? When you open it speak? Are you smart? What defines us as artists maybe something we aren't ready for. Then again, we're old enough to know better. My teacher told me that in class one day. It sucks when we long for things we can't have.

Categories: In Progress Het Stories
Characters: JC Chasez
Awards: None
Genres: Alternate Universe, General

Series: None
Chapters: 3
Wordcount: 2712 - Hits: 4640
Complete?: No - Published: Mar 15, 2009 - Last Updated: Mar 18, 2009 -
Reviewer: Vikki Signed
Date: Mar 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: I'll Be There

my interest was peaked. I'm assuming its your female lead here, not JC... am I right?

let's see where you take this. :)



Author's Response: im glad i peaked your interest. yes, the first chapter is the female lead of the story.

I See You by Hollie (PG-13) [Comments - 15]
Sometimes it takes a rude awakening to look beyond your preconceptions

Categories: Completed Het Stories
Characters: Justin Timberlake
Awards: None
Genres: Alternate Universe, General

Series: None
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 3426 - Hits: 1409
Complete?: Yes - Published: Apr 02, 2009 - Last Updated: Apr 02, 2009 -
Reviewer: Vikki Signed
Date: Apr 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: I See You

i fucking love your writing... srsly. i hate that this is a short though... i want more.

where do you come up with this stuff? i mean... the blind thing has been done i think, though I've never sat and read any but this was more than that, and I love how you did it.

sequel? yes? great! *sits and waits patiently*

The space between

What's wrong and right

Is where you'll find me hiding, waiting for you

The space between

Your heart and mine

Is the sapce we'll fill with time

The space between...

-Dave Matthews Band

 

Can three couples survive "The Space Between"?

 



Categories: In Progress Het Stories
Characters: JC Chasez, Justin Timberlake
Awards: None
Genres: Drama, Romance

Series: Crazy Love
Chapters: 21
Wordcount: 111263 - Hits: 76927
Complete?: Yes - Published: Jul 14, 2009 - Last Updated: Nov 21, 2009 -
Reviewer: Vikki Signed
Date: Aug 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

OH MY GOD!!! THIS IS SOOO GOOD!!!

I just read all 6 chapters and yeah... that's all I got! lol!

OH MY GOD!!! *dies*