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The Perfect Night by Sox (NC-17) [Comments - 8]

       You stand in the corner of a crowded club, sipping your gin martini: stirred, up, one olive; and slightly rocking to the music. You fix your hair and sneak a peak down your body making sure everything is in place. When you look up you see a tall man with dirty blonde curls and eyes as blue as the water in Paradise.

       “What’s your name?” he asks, holding a glass of coke and some kind of alcohol.

       You laugh and play with the olive in your martini, “Really? That’s your pick up line?”

       He gives you a half smile and looks down at the ground before answering, “Who says I’m trying to pick you up?”

       “OK then, keep walking,” 

Categories: Completed Het Stories, Challenges
Characters: Justin Timberlake
Awards: None
Genres: None
Challenges: Role Play

Series: None
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 2990 - Hits: 2353
Complete?: Yes - Published: Nov 09, 2009 - Last Updated: Nov 09, 2009 -
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Reviewer: Vikki Signed
Date: Nov 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

mmmmmm this was HOT and all kinds of adorable lol! but reeeeally HOT too! 

you should totally add it to the Role Play challenge, I think it'll fit just fine. :)



Author's Response: haha well thanks dear. I did add it, I think I did it right... oh well. Thanks for the review! <3

Same Time Next Week (CLOSED) by MissM (NC-17) [Comments - 110]

I've taken this story in a different direction and some chapters were changed a lot, so this story has been reposted in a REDUx version, so I didn't lose reviews, etc on the old one. This story has been marked complete because it will no longer be updated.

Please view the new version here: http://www.nsync-fiction.com/viewstory.php?sid=1813&chapter=14&textsize=1 

 



Categories: In Progress Het Stories
Characters: JC Chasez
Awards: None
Genres: Drama, Romance
Challenges: National Novel Writing Month (NaNoWriMo)

Series: None
Chapters: 17
Wordcount: 111900 - Hits: 46772
Complete?: Yes - Published: Nov 14, 2009 - Last Updated: Aug 26, 2012 -
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Reviewer: Vikki Signed
Date: Nov 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

UGH!

you've gone and done it again... now I must continue reading and get no work done for the rest of the day.

whatever. its friday anyway lol!



Author's Response: HAHAHAHA! At least I didn't squeeze every last drop out of the chapter and have to scrimp my words to fit it on the archive, Lol.

Reviewer: Vikki Signed
Date: Nov 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

SO MUCH LOVE FOR THIS RIGHT NOW!

 

The radio alarm clock busted into pieces on impact, moments after it was yanked from the wall and hurled across the room, sending sharp plastic chunks in a spray across the carpet. He stared at the mess for a few seconds, finding it hard to believe he’d actually done that. Especially since that wasn’t his alarm clock.

I laughed, out loud, at my job. Thank you.

 

“Aruba, Jamaica, ooh, I wanna take ya…$4.59 for Cheerios? That’s highway robbery right there, man…

but seriously... you KNOW he does this right? there's gotta be some security footage that can back us up here.

 

Praying she hadn’t seen him leering at her like a creepy old man. But afraid that she had.

Ooooo my god! I just love her! I would totally be kicking myself in the ass too bc I shop really early on the weekend and ALWAYS look like I just rolled out of bed, because I did. And fuck-me if I ever bump into any hot guy, celeb or not.

‘Down boy,’ he muttered to himself. ‘Not today. Not right now, anyway. But good to see you’re still alive.’

lmao... omgIlovehim!



Author's Response: Just adding to my love for the way vikki reviews a story. *eep* LMAO. Thank you. I was pretty sure you would like it!

Reviewer: Vikki Signed
Date: Nov 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

OMGZ! He called her honey! *giggle*


That voice. It was him. ‘Holy. Fuck. It's. Him.  What do I do?!'

I think... what I love the most is that you have these female characters that are just so real. It can be you but I love to think that its me lol... or it can be anyone else reading this you know? because hell that would be me, staring at his bulge for a second too long HAHA!

He gave her a nod, just a tip of his head and wiggled a few fingers at her in a wave, then turned and walked inside. Sauntered inside. Goddamn, that man was sexy.

damn.... damn he is good.

and can I just say THANK YOU for writing this 3rd person because i love how your brain writes JC's brain. yes.

 ‘Well,' he thought to himself, ‘let's be honest, now.' He wanted to fuck her.

LMAO! i was thinking the same thing when he was going on about how she "intrigued" him... heh.



Author's Response: I was just saying today that it's kind of fun putting myself in the mind of a man and trying to figure out what he would be thinking. As nice as I'm sure he is, a man's internal dialgue is likely a whole different story. What makes him nice is his ability to hold his tongue and not say the stupid shit men actually say, and not do the stupid shit men actually do. :/ ANYWAY. Yeah. FUN. lol.

Reviewer: Vikki Signed
Date: Nov 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

LMAO! ok horny!JC is my fav right now.

but maaaaan.... I want cake now. or pie. Or JC with cake and pie.

every time he smiled at her, her stomach lurched and she felt warm inside.

ugh I miss that. I need a man *pouts*.

"And I'll want to taste it." He leaned in to her, his lips almost touching her ear. "Maybe I could lick it off of some places, too."

yeah... i kid you not, I got a shiver right down my back lol!



Author's Response: *giggle*  GOOD! I like shivers!

Reviewer: Vikki Signed
Date: Nov 21, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

wait... WHAT?! a few WEEKS?! no... no I wont stand for that.

this. this right here is my newest fav. update or bring back Serena or I will through the biggest hissy fit ever lol!

 

aaaaaahhhh! I loved this. it was sloooow and seeeexy and totally made me want JC more if that was even possible.

 

and i lol'd at him smelling toast. i dunno why i found that hysterical, could be bc I'm not an insomniac and I want to sleep lol! speaking of..... how adorable that he got her to nap on the couch! aaaawwwww!

 

 



Author's Response: Lol, yeah he put her down for her nap. Yeah, at least a week. I need to make sure the rest of the story makes sense!

Reviewer: Vikki Signed
Date: Dec 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

"Are there any left? We were a little experimental last night." JC laughed, appreciating her more every second that he knew her. There was nothing like a woman that was sexy and had no problem letting it show-turned him on like a light switch. "You're somethin' else, Shelby girl. What are you doing for the rest of your life?"

*guh* looooove.

 

It would have to wait. She had a TV to go pick up

I LOVE her... I have no idea why, but I do lol!

 

NEXT!



Author's Response: These two crazy kids. They don't even know what they're getting into!

Reviewer: Vikki Signed
Date: Dec 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

god I always hate that "what are we" talk ... my reply is usually 'll deal with it, until I can't anymore. I'll try. I don't want to not see you again. However it will work for you, that's fine." lmao!

"Sorry, honey. Me man, see electronics, get stupid."

HA! I love that moment of laughter in the middle of all the sexyness :)

No, it's more of a Lenny Kravitz, bluesy type sound. You know his song It Ain't Over Till It's Over?

SHIT i would die a happy fangirl if he ever... please god please!

btw... fucking HATE Rod. I wish diarea upon him.


NEXT!


Author's Response: HAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA. Yes, we all despise Rod. Asshole!

Reviewer: Vikki Signed
Date: Dec 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

"Well...." He cleared his throat, unable to take his eyes off of the pop of color. "I can, usually. But uhm...sexiness of this magnitude really needs an in-depth evaluation."

LMAO!


"Don't break it. I haven't played with it yet."

body shots? body shots?! BODY SHOTS??!!! ..... you are trying to kill me. i just know it.


"I can't even imagine what would be a big enough deal that I can't know about it."


i feel torn. I get him and the frustratedness but ... shit a girl needs her space and time too. its not like she's coming from a normal/average breakup here.

 

NEXT! 



Author's Response:

shit a girl needs her space and time too. its not like she's coming from a normal/average breakup here.

 

Exactly. And really my fuck buddies don't need to know every detail about me. That's why you're a fuck buddy, not a boyfriend. KNOW YA PLACE! *LMFAO*

 

 

Reviewer: Vikki Signed
Date: Dec 03, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

"Well... are you and this friend...well, I mean... is this friend a....does he..."

HAHAHA! I love her mom... prob bc that is SO my mom right there.

When would her dead ex fiancé not matter anymore? When would she be able to go through life and not have to consider Lucas or his ex-wife, or his children?  

See. This right here could make her sound sooo insensitive. He's dead for christ sake, you're suppossed to show some respect and all. but damnit! I get that "ok I want to move on!" vibe she has going on though. poor thing.

If he wanted to, Rod could totally throw a kink into that plan.

No. Please tell this isnt some foreshadowingness - fuck I hate Rod.

JC started to smile, his tongue snaking out to lick his bottom lip. She almost had him. She knew it. "I do like  that part. And you did buy dessert. Can't let that go to waste."

HA! Men... *shakes head* ... so easy but I LOVE HIM! and he loves her... which i think is gonna cause uh-oh's.



Author's Response: Lol. mmmmhhhmmmm. cause he's not supposed to fall for her. Darnit. Give him a little sex and suddenly he's in love.

Reviewer: Vikki Signed
Date: Dec 03, 2009 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10.2

Panting, heaving, lightheaded, he fell back against the mattress. Sweating. Who sweats from masturbating? Did other guys do that?

lol.... omg, masturbating!JC is fucking sexy, just had to get that out.


JC had a way with words, even when those words were crude and base and overtly sexual-- at least where her body was concerned.

seriously though? who WOULDN'T digitally get down with JC? come on. really now. dont try to deny it lol!

btw I had to take a break reading this one... starting panting mydamnself lol! emailing naughty pics? OMGZ!!



ok... now about the seriousness. what are we going to do? I mean really, JC's a goner, and Shelby - poor Shelby - she's got it bad for him too but there some serious emotional baggage there *shakes head*.  



NEX-oh wait. umm... I'm all caught up now. Post more! :)

Author's Response:

Working on it, honey. Working on it!

 

Reviewer: Vikki Signed
Date: Dec 03, 2009 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11

awwwwwww maaaaaaan! this is making my heart hurt.

 

Or she would bare her soul to JC and spill everything, and give in to having feelings for him, of the more-than-friends-with-benefits kind and hope that his feelings for her weren't diminished when he found the information he had been hounding her for, that had been unwilling to give, for fear he would hate how evil and conniving she was.  Used to be.

 

Ok Shelby woman, key words here? used-to-be! You're not like that anymore so let's let by gones be by gones. lol!

 

Not that it mattered. She was going to have to let him go soon, anyway.


STOP SAYING THAT! *puppy dog eyes* I dont want it to be over.

 

And it wasn't a Thursday, and he didn't get to see her, but he was okay with that. He could still call it a good night.


aaaaaaawwwww! SEE this is why I love this and them and together. not apart! crazy Shelby.

and in case I didnt make it clear before I HATE ROD! Its all his stupid ego loving fame whoring fault! If it wasnt for him than maybe Shelby's crazy "the end is coming" thoughts would be postponed a little longer. 

She's giving me suuuuch a bad armeggedonish feeling. I just hope JC's ready and willing to do something about it.



Author's Response:

Your analysis is intriguiging!!!  I can't even comment because there's just so much coming but yeah you're right... what she thinks is happening is different than what's really happening. And JC has to convince her of that. *nods*

 

I posted CH 12 already. I'm going to try to finish it up this weekend. No promises at ALL. 

Reviewer: Vikki Signed
Date: Dec 03, 2009 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12

 He just had no idea how to let her go, when he wanted so badly to hang on.

DONT! don't let go JC! *begs*


 I cannot imagine that she shared any of this with you. I fear, then, that this duty falls to me.

NO! No it does NOT Melina! OMGSTFU!

He probably never wanted to see her again. She didn’t blame him. Not one bit.

oh Shelby woman, will you learn to have some FAITH in the guy. Problemo numero uno from the beginning geez luise.


 He liked his Shelby better.

YES.THIS. AND THIS.

Stick around, and not abandon her because she doesn’t have a rosy past, and make her let him help her.

Good JC. Glad we have an understanding.

NEXT!



Author's Response: Haaaaaaaaaaaahahahaha. Your reviews are awesome. Good we have an understanding! LOL.

Reviewer: Vikki Signed
Date: Dec 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14

Dinner? I don't know! Give me Shelby!

LMAO! I love JC... soooooo freakin' much in this story it's making my heart hurt!

Now Shelby woman on the other hand... humph! She's lucky I dont know her like that or I'd punch her in the arm every time she had a pesimistic thought about her relationship with JC. I get it... I swear I do. I think I had a lot of patience with her through the story, but that EMAIL just totally crossed the line. I would've expected something like "if you still want to talk to me after this, I'll be at..." or SOMETHING! geeez!

Thank god JC's so awesome. :)

"I came to see you, Shelby Woman."

eeeeeeep! 

MORE NOW!



Author's Response: *throws nerf ball at Vikki* If the people in my stories did the things they're supposed to do or supposed to say, there would be no DRAMA. GAH! :p

The Last Thing You Need by Manda Chasez (R) [Comments - 16]

It's been years since JC Chasez was in the spotlight, and he's appreciated the peaceful existence. Imagine his surprise when he suddenly finds himself the star of VH1's newest reality show. It's supposed to be all in good fun, until he invests himself in the last thing he thought he ever needed: finding love.



Categories: In Progress Het Stories
Characters: Group, JC Chasez
Awards: None
Genres: Drama, Humor, Romance

Series: None
Chapters: 5
Wordcount: 16414 - Hits: 12495
Complete?: No - Published: Nov 19, 2009 - Last Updated: Apr 27, 2010 -
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Reviewer: Vikki Signed
Date: Dec 04, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

man I've missed your brain!

A reality love show?! OMGZ! I totally watched the first two season's of Brett Michael's Rock of Love for shits and giggles lol!

This is going to be AWESOME... especially with my theories on that little teasier part you put in the beginning of the 1st chapter... can't wait for the drama rama! :)



Author's Response: Ahh, I know I'm so excited all the ideas in my head keep popping up about the possibilities with this story, haha. And we have my sad addiction to trashy reality tv for this, lol. More soon!! Thanks for reviewing!