Reviewer: DeadandGone Signed
Date: Dec 26, 2008
Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 16
I'm so conflicted right now. I know I'm supposed to dislike Amelia but this new haircut and how I imagine it just makes her seem so damn fierce lol.I'm kinda 'Team Amelia' at the moment since I'm so pissed at everyone else.
She's a HUGE bitch, the biggest bitch I've encountered in fan fic, but like justinzgirlkb said she's assertive and that's something I can admire. I am mad at Justin for letting her get this far, she's this way because he didn't grow a pair at the first sign of her wanting to take over. If music is so important to him, then he wouldn't have let her take it away from him. I don't care how much you love someone, if they are the one you're going to spend the rest of your life with then they should know what's important to you. I'm mad at him for not recognizing this sooner, and since she was transforming into someone completely different. It took a haircut ( albeit a hot ass haircut) to notice this? I mean the fact that she's such an asshole to everyone didn't tipoff that hey maybe he should speak up? I do understand that he's in love ( as much as it pains me, because right now it doesn't look too good for CharlStin :(). I see that he does love Amelia and that Charley is just a momentary escape from what Amelia has become. That kinda makes me teary eyed because I see her getting hurt ( she already is) and there's nothing she can do about it.
Now on to Charlotte, can this bitch grow a pair of ovaries please? How dare she let Amelia walk all over her? I know she works for her but WUT THE FUCK! Seriously she needs to either do something or get the fuck out. Like justinzgirlkb she can't be with Justin until she grows up, and toughens up a bit. I did like that she did stand up to her a bit, I need to see some fire from her, I know she has it in her.
I also agree with Amelia's insecurities, there has to be something behind this ice-bitch. I mean no one can be this big of a bitch for no reason lol. Ok now I'm done lol.
Author's Response: EEP I seriously love your thoughts on this. The motives behind the characters are so important to this story and I like when people catch on to the little idosycracies of what each person is doing. Justin's reaction to Amelia's haircut for example. Why did it take the haircut to make him FINALLY see she was changing. Maybe because he didn't want to see she was changing but with such a drastic physical change it wasn't somethign he could ignore anymore. Or maybe it was one final straw on the haystack (big haystack I know but he's a guy what can you do lol) I like that you guys are looking deep into it! And I agree Charlotte needs to man up. She DOES have it in here. What is it about Amelia that just makes people lose all their damn sense lol. Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!