Penname: treasure [Contact] Real name: Sherry
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When Selah Bernstine decides that college isn't for her, her mother sends her to the one person that can talk some "sense" into her, her sister Ava--who has just scored her dream job as a dancer on Justin Timberlake's FutureSex/LoveShow Tour. Filled with confusing and conflicting feelings about what she truly wants, as well as a broken heart, Selah learns about herself and how to make her desires a reality through the last person she'd ever expect to, all while making mistakes along the way. At the same time, Justin learns about more about himself and wonders: Is what is right in front of him what he has wanted all along?


Categories: In Progress Het Stories
Characters: Justin Timberlake
Awards: None
Genres: Drama, Humor, Romance

Series: None
Chapters: 20
Wordcount: 62091 - Hits: 58393
Complete?: No - Published: Jun 11, 2008 - Last Updated: Jan 20, 2009 -
Reviewer: treasure Signed
Date: Mar 25, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I like how you but in that "Shut up!"  I have the Future/Sex/Love/Show on DVD so that part was too funny. 

I really hope La doesn't fall in love with Justin and get hurt. That would be fucke up because I like the chick.

Reviewer: treasure Signed
Date: Mar 25, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

This was a good chapter. I like the back story. Her story really touched me. My mother had MS, she's past now. All though MS is a diffrent disease i can see how having something like that can affect you.  I can see now why La is the way she is. I still think she needs to be careful with Justin. I think he might try to play her ass. 

Reviewer: treasure Signed
Date: Mar 25, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Although I'm not to sure about the Justin La thing I do like their interaction.

I also dig the relationship La has with her sister. It remind me of me and my sister.

I can' wait to see what's poppin' off at the club.

Reviewer: treasure Signed
Date: Mar 25, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

That shit was hot girl! It was fire!

Reviewer: treasure Signed
Date: Mar 25, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Girl that chapater screamed sex all through it and it didn't have a bit in it. I love it! Justin is one sexy muthafucka!

Reviewer: treasure Signed
Date: Mar 25, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9: Part I

awwww....i love nick! I hope I'm suppose to...lol.

Reviewer: treasure Signed
Date: Mar 25, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9: Part II

You go Selah!  Justin can't have his cake and eat it too.  She need to leave is cheating ass alone until he figures out if he wants chocolate or whip cream.

Reviewer: treasure Signed
Date: Mar 25, 2009 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10

This has to be my favorite chapter so far, mostly because its the first chapter where Justin is being completely straight up and honest.  It's making him a lot more likable.

Reviewer: treasure Signed
Date: Mar 25, 2009 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11

I"m glad she made up with Just but I do hope she keeps in mind that he is still in a relationship and off limits because if they did do something while he's taken how could see ever really trust him if they got together?

Reviewer: treasure Signed
Date: Mar 25, 2009 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12

That was a nice bonding moment between the two. I wonder how long he can keep his paws off?

Reviewer: treasure Signed
Date: Mar 25, 2009 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13

I was wondering when he was gonna ask for the digits. That little scene between them was cute.

Reviewer: treasure Signed
Date: Mar 25, 2009 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14

Awww...another deep moment between the star cross lovers...lol. Nice chapter.

Reviewer: treasure Signed
Date: Mar 25, 2009 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15

Yeah Selah you missed something extremely major!

Reviewer: treasure Signed
Date: Mar 25, 2009 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16

That was tight! I really liked that chapter. I could picture Justin showing up at her door soking wet.  That was sexy as hell.

Reviewer: treasure Signed
Date: Mar 25, 2009 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 17

Justin's got it bad.

If I was her I would've said fuck my friends and given it up right there in the bathroom.