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Member Since: Mar 30, 2009
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"How can one not dream while writing? It is the pen which dreams. The blank page gives the right to dream.” -- Gaston Bachelard

 

Just trying to free my mind through writing...


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Between The Lines by musicmel (NC-17) [Comments - 93]

 

Scandals. They can make or break you in this industry. Malia has been lucky enough not to get involved with the drama of Hollywood and have a scandal that rocked her boat. Against her better judgment, she has had a very lengthy rough relationship with someone that her camp was not thrilled about from the beginning. He was a rapper/singer from Atlanta, who moved to L.A. to find himself but what he found, was Malia. Who was already a successful songwriter about to break into the music scene, front and center. She wrote and produced the single that put him on the map, over a year ago. Since that moment, his time was over in the industry. Single after single, they all flopped. The hype surrounding her however, made the expectations sky rocket the publicity for the album. His foul mouth and bad behavior was a threat to her career, but her great image and thriving career was exactly what he needed.



Categories: In Progress Het Stories
Characters: Justin Timberlake
Awards: None
Genres: Celebrity/Celebrity, Drama, Romance, Suspense

Series: None
Chapters: 28
Wordcount: 75194 - Hits: 72975
Complete?: No - Published: Apr 22, 2010 - Last Updated: Jul 01, 2011 -
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Date: Aug 31, 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Another Round

no! no! no! is this forboding? r u trying to tell us something? LAUREN! ANOTHER ROUND!

Oh man, we're in so much trouble. Am I Ingrid? Jeez woman...

I loved it.



Author's Response:

Get your shot glasses ready!! Vegas will be an adventure! (Who in their right minds, would let the 3 of us, free to roam Vegas with Justin in town, just feet away? Hmm Smart people that’s who!!!)

I really didn’t even think about this being compared to our real lives, but now that I think about it… it sorta does. Lol

Thanks darlin’!!

Reviewer: jersey_tenn Signed
Date: Sep 06, 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Drunk Choices, Sober Thoughts

RUN! HIDE! And don't you come out until you have this solved!

Beautiful. I loved it. And the song...perfect. But, you knew that already.

It's always the things that we want more that we cannot have.



Author's Response:

I ran real fast and I’m hiding in Casa Timberlake. Crap, I shouldn’t have told you where I was. But he will protect me better than Kroll normally does.

That song. Jeez, I still can’t stop listening to it. It’s just so so so great! :)

I promise soon you will get an update and it will give you more details…

Thanks love!

 

Reviewer: jersey_tenn Signed
Date: Oct 04, 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Breathe Again

she's grown some balls!!!!!

Whoa! Wait! What cannot happen?

MEL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Malia grew a pair, shocker but she did.

Oh no... what cannot happen?

 

Thanks love ;)

Reviewer: jersey_tenn Signed
Date: Nov 05, 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Tonight I Wanna Cry

keith? really? did u have to? really? MEL! gosh darnit...where's the tissue? i've gotta go...

i told u before and i'll tell you again, YOU play the strings to MY heart.



Author's Response:  Keith. That song is indescribable. It’s one of those songs that if you didn’t have a broken heart you will after hearing his words, hearing his pain. If fit so perfectly that I couldn’t resist using it.Thanks love ;)

Reviewer: jersey_tenn Signed
Date: Nov 08, 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Things People Say

Amen...thats all I can say (for now).



Author's Response: Finally. They have been a pain in the butt!

*I have to say this was my favorite chapter, thus far.

 

 Thanks ; )

Driving Sideways by katethegreat (R) [Comments - 23]

At least you know
You were taken by a pro
I know just how you feel
She talked a perfect game
Deflecting all the blame
You took the jack
And changed the flat
And got behind the wheel--
Now you`re
Driving sideways
Taken in by the scenery
As you`re propelled along
And your companion
Will not help you to navigate
For fear she may be wrong


And you will say
That you`re making headway
And put it in overdrive
But you`re mistaking speed
For getting what you need
And never even noticing
You never do arrive
Cause you`re
Driving sideways
If you roll down the window you`ll see
You`re where you don`t belong
And your companion
Will not help you to navigate
For fear she may be wrong


And you`re powered by
The hopeful lie
That it`s just around the bend
And when this, by default
Comes screeching to a halt
Let`s hope that you
Know what to do
To start it up again


Driving sideways
Hitting scan on the radio
So she can sing along
And she`ll sit
Thinking you`re going to handle it
Until she`s proven wrong
Until she`s proven wrong
Until you prove her wrong

 

"Driving Sideways"- Aimee Mann

 

Sequel To Mad Season



Categories: In Progress Het Stories
Characters: Justin Timberlake
Awards: None
Genres: General, Humor, Romance

Series: None
Chapters: 4
Wordcount: 3534 - Hits: 7414
Complete?: No - Published: Jun 19, 2010 - Last Updated: Aug 12, 2010 -
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Date: Jun 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Prologue

oh my god! i think i just died! so f-ing hilarious! i love it! you r a genius!

Author's Response:

haha i'm inclined to think i'm a crazy person, with a serious case of add.

but, thank ya love! i appreciate it a whole bunch!

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Date: Jun 22, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 1: A Screw Up Of Epic Proportions

poor Ellie....its not her fault!!!!! oh man....this is great! give us more!

Author's Response:

haha poor ellie, indeed.

thank ya love! i appreciate it a ton!

Meantime Girl by AmberW (R) [Comments - 9]

They kept meeting under rushed circumstances.  Their chance meetings quickly start to become semi-regular.  The more regular their meetings get the less rushed they are.  Their feelings develop over a series of meetings, but in the meantime, what do these feelings mean?

I know this is a little strange
but in the meantime
she will be my girl
in the meantime
I promise her the world
in the meantime
I am hers and she is mine
I finally find the perfect girl
and I am pressed for time
in the meantime  

Meantime Girl-

Jaron And The Long Road To Love



Categories: In Progress Het Stories
Characters: JC Chasez
Awards: None
Genres: Celebrity/Celebrity, Romance

Series: None
Chapters: 2
Wordcount: 4405 - Hits: 2190
Complete?: No - Published: Jul 05, 2010 - Last Updated: Jul 15, 2010 -
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Date: Jul 05, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: I finally find the perfect guy and I am pressed for time

whoo! can i b Odi & can I continuously run into that hunky piece of man meat?!?! ahh....more! more! more! more!

Author's Response:

um, the role of Odi is already filled by me LOL  I wouldn't not mind just constantly running into JC-I bet he smells amazing LOL

Thanks for the review :)

Don't Stop by azchickadee (PG-13) [Comments - 65]
Three years.  That's how long it had been since they'd seen each other--since she had walked away from the only man she had ever loved and every day Mayra is haunted by the question: what if.  A chance meeting on the beach may give her the answer to her question but is it the answer she's been looking for?

Categories: Challenges, In Progress Het Stories
Characters: JC Chasez
Awards: Season 6
Genres: Alternate Universe, Drama, Romance
Challenges: Anyone BUT Justin, A Day At The Beach

Series: None
Chapters: 8
Wordcount: 26329 - Hits: 20318
Complete?: Yes - Published: Jul 07, 2010 - Last Updated: Jul 28, 2010 -
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Date: Jul 29, 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Epilogue

i don't think i need to praise your genius any more than i already do, so I will simply thank you. Thank you so much for this! I absolutely loved it! At first, my mind flew and figured that the kids were another nanny job on the west coast and then....BAM! And i was like, WHOA! YES! WHOO!

One of my ULTIMATE FAVORITE stories is a Daddy JC series so this is just AH! Wonderful! Great! Awesome! Spectacular! Thank you hun! It was perfect.



Author's Response: :D  I'm glad you liked it.  And if you were thrown about the kids at first that means I did my job!  lol...that's what I was going for.  Wanted to throw people off and surprise them.  Daddy JC is just too adorable for words.  I had to put him in there.  I knew all along this was how the story was going to end.  It was fun writing this for you.  Now I have to figure out what's next.....

Reviewer: jersey_tenn Signed
Date: Jul 07, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

::fans self:: oh my lordy, this is great! eek! beautiful, amazing, accurate....ah! i love it! yes, man of my dreams! he belongs to so many ppl's dreams....ah! but I get my one shot @ him: EAT YOUR HEART OUT "RACHEL" lol....

so, I totally wore my kick-ass pair of jeans & black halter for my 21st [celebrated that sucker in memphis] and I order LITs all night!

Love that you included the cheesy pick up line --- totally happened & I couldnt believe it! poor guy, did he really have to have a receding hairline?!?! LMAO!

I need to find this Princeton family myself...ooh wee, dream job! The spanish wasn't completely off...Corrections: condenada** & Eres una muchacha muy loca**

I LOVE IT! thank you! can't wait for more!

btw....u totally made my night! eek! HUGS!



Author's Response: eeep!!  so glad you liked it!!  :)  and yes, I had to put the receding hairline in there to make running into JC that much better!  LOL...glad I was able to make your night.  I'm working on chapter two as we speak....

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Date: Jul 10, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

waking up on a Saturday morning to an update....ROCKS!

oh yes...i just threw myself at him, classy. Oh yes. He just might be the only man I'm willing to throw myself at...definitely. I'm so glad you put on there that I still remember, because I ALWAYS remember. Man, oh man, DON'T STOP!

but wait....oh no! no! i let him go again?!?! u're killing me!

hey!!!! of course they aren't mine fool! get with it JC! geez....

loved it chica! thnx!



Author's Response:

:)  Sorry it wasn't up last night...well, it was last night for me...damn time zone differences getting in the way again....

Anyway, I'm glad you liked it!!  I always get nervouse when I start writing a story that is based on someone else.  lol....stick with me....things will get resolved.  Eventually. 

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Date: Jul 13, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

i'm freakin campin at the present moment & i see the campground office has wifi & a comp, so I totally bailed on my friend this early AM to come read this....eek! here we go...[#Nsync #MM inspired] 

r u sure that u & i havent met in some alternate universe?!?! its like u've lived through my heartbreak! ah! thank you! this chapter was just...ah, wonderful, perfect, bittersweet. I miss my bottle of tequila now. Oh man, I have my own "Kelsey" in my life too. She is just my rock. Ah!

ok, seriously, I love you. Why? Because of this right here, "the weaknesses he had battled all thanks to a certain dark haired, brown eyed beauty who was a beguiling mix of Southern charm and Latin heat and passion." Oh man, really?!?! I think I just fell in love with myself. Gosh, I love it.

Now! I wasn't ready for what?!?!?! Gosh, I was an idiot! And, uh, Rachel, that chica that has such a hold on 'your' Jace is Moi! Me! Yo! hehe...u better be shakin in your stilettos! lol....

give me more! give me more!



Author's Response: hahaha!!  yesss!!  wifi at the campground!  that's awesome...lol...I was pretty pround of that description of you, myself.  I wrote it and was like, Damn.  No wonder Jace is messed up right now!  LOL.  The answer to your other question will be revealed...in time...just be patient.  I'm going to be working on the next chapter hopefully today at work again. :)

Reviewer: jersey_tenn Signed
Date: Jul 17, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

nothing exciting?!?! are you kidding me?!?! he proposed!!!!!!!!! and I rejected!!!!!!!!!! ah! what was I thinking? gah! i loved it! thanks girlie! u definitely brightened up my Saturday morning! eek!

Author's Response: lol...I know, how could you?!  but....there is more to be revealed in this story when it comes your your past history.  mauahaha *evil grin* 

Reviewer: jersey_tenn Signed
Date: Jul 20, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

i read this entire chapter with a smile on my face...thank you. Its so creepy that you described my studio apt that way, bc thats the way my real apt is. I have ZERO pictures up.

And, omg, I'm afraid. I'm afraid, and I want to know what frightens me. Excuse me, but if JC proposed to me, I'd accept (drunk or sober) BUT, I can understand my reaction. I think.

Thanks for the love, hun! I loved it!



Author's Response: hope it made your night better :)  Your side of the story is coming next. No pictures?  really?  That's the first thing I do whenever I move in anywhere is put pictures up!   

Reviewer: jersey_tenn Signed
Date: Jul 25, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 -- part 1

ok...so, I read this b4 work, and OH EM GEE! I ran out my apt with teary eyes!!!! I seriously need to get a grip of myself. I get WAY too emotional/attached to this story. I cannot possibly explain to you how on point you have me. It's creepy.

And, JC, my gosh, he breaks my heart. He shatters my soul. I LOVE IT!



Author's Response:

lol...and now you know why Kristen is always accusing me of stalking her!  I'm not stalking you, I promise.  I'm just very observant and I watch (or in your case: read) what people do and say and how they act. I love trying to figure people out.  That's part of the reason I'm going into psychology. It fascinates me and I love it! :)

And JC breaks my heart, too!  He always seems to get the raw end of the deal...poor guy.