Reviewer: ninabina Signed
Date: Jan 08, 2011
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Your writing style is really unique, and I really enjoy it. But I'm a little confused--I'm sure intentionally, though. It seems like this is a vampire thing, but I can't really tell. It's like you explain it, but always subtly hide what you're saying too. Or maybe this is all part of his secret.
Either way, can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: Hey there!!!
I am so excited that you like it! My first review! eek! This one is totally different than what I usually write, and I love the challenge. The prologue is a little chaotic-just glimpses into the words that define how Justin lives his life, what is happening in the future. Chapter 1 backs things up a bit, developing what you see happening in the Prologue. Hopefully some answers will be given. It's not a vamp story, he's totally human, just with some paranormal abilities. However, it is AU, he's not the Justin from *Nsync or the celebrity...he's a normal guy, navigating the world the way he knows how. Each piece will be pulled back a layer at a time, so hopefully, I won't lose ya and things will start to make sense more and more. :) It's definitely a little darker...but I am a sucker for the bad boy. :)
Hope you enjoy, next chapter very soon!
Thank you again!!!!!!!!!!!!
-BD