Penname: musicmel [Contact] Real name: Melissa
Member Since: Sep 22, 2009
Membership status: Member
Bio:
I love music. Anyone that knows me via Twitter or Facebook knows that first hand. I have an obsession with live music. Attending concerts is my drug of choice. I believe that I am from a 'writer' but I enjoy writing and getting my crazy ideas out into the world. I’m pretty sarcastic… ok so really I think Sarcasm should have been my middle name. A sense of humor could really improve someone‘s life… really that was serious.
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Past Featured Story

 

"'Cause I'll give you my heart,
if you would let me start all over
again"

 

Justin Timberlake is starting over.
After four years of wallowing in self pity and depression over losing the only two things that he'd ever loved, he's going back.
Back to the music.
Back to the chaotic schedule, the fans, the touring.
And hopefully, back to her.

 

**This story takes place in late 2012 :) 



Categories: Completed Het Stories
Characters: Group, Justin Timberlake
Awards: None
Genres: Drama, Romance

Series: I Shall Believe
Chapters: 19
Wordcount: 76491 - Hits: 74298
Complete?: Yes - Published: Jan 24, 2010 - Last Updated: Jan 05, 2012 -
Reviewer: musicmel Signed
Date: Apr 03, 2010 Title: Chapter 8: All I Need

Ok... My heart is officially broken. Justin makes me sad.

I'm trusting you... if you don't come through I will sick my sword man after you.



Author's Response: justin makes me sad too and he's my character. unfortunately, half the time that i'm writing this, i don't even feel like it's me writing so...it's all him. yell at him. lol

Reviewer: musicmel Signed
Date: Apr 03, 2010 Title: Chapter 7: She Could Be Happy

Ok so Justin is totally breaking my heart. Ugh I wanted to burst into tears for him. Just when he was ready and everything was falling into place the world gives him a loop. Hopefully he learns from this and doesnt slide back into depression.

 



Author's Response: i shed a few tears writing that chapter. i felt so bad for him. but at the same time i had to give it to Madison for not just crumbling and coming back. She's an independent and strong chick. There was a reason she left in the first place and how Justin is right now--he's not someone that's ready for a relationship. i think madi realizes that.

Reviewer: musicmel Signed
Date: Apr 03, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Start All Over

I had a feeling they would run into Madison here... ahhh I cant wait to see how this meeting goes. :)

Reviewer: musicmel Signed
Date: Apr 03, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Second Chances?

NOOOOO!!!!!!!

They are both so in love with each other!

Btw I always love when a man wipes the tears away from a woman's face.... so cute!

Reviewer: musicmel Signed
Date: May 12, 2010 Title: Chapter 9: If I Knew Then...

I'm soo glad to see Justin not so angry. (while it lasts) I think he is going to find more and more of his self as he records the album. Ahh!

Great update!

Reviewer: musicmel Signed
Date: Jun 03, 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Finally...

I am happy to see Justin on the right path, I'm prepared for it to be a little rocky but I LOVE it!

I'm all for Justin & an Acoustic guitar btw, just throwing that out there!



Author's Response:

hahahahah. yes, you might just get that when Johnny sets up some small shows for him ;)

I'm working on putting together the list of songs for his album--I'm fairly happy with what I've got so far!

Reviewer: musicmel Signed
Date: Jul 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Gravity

I think I miss you.-Ugh. That melted my heart. Because of everything she could have said to him… she was just, honest. Those measly four little words can change someone’s life.Such a great update! You had me with the dream thing. I swear I went back three times and was like did I miss something? Is this really happening? If only I would have kept reading, I would have realized it was a dream. You made it feel like it was really happening in their lives. Those kind of dreams are creepy to have. I could swear up and down that it was real.

Reviewer: musicmel Signed
Date: Aug 01, 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Did I Ever Tell You

Go ahead; pat yourself a couple times on the back because this was the best chapter so far. I loved every bit of it. I was proud of Justin for not responding when she initially sent the message. It was some strength on his end. (I may not have been that strong.) But I loved how he did respond in the end.



Author's Response:

Best so far? Seriously? THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU! 

I don't know that I would've been that strong either. Especially with a text like she sent him. But I had to make his character grow a bit, and I figured that by him not just jumping on the chance to talk to her would've been going backwards. It wasn't really a need to text her back when he did it and he didn't really let on too much about where his head was at with the text she sent. 

Blah. I'm tired. Therefore I'm rambling and I have NO idea if that made sense. lol. 

But THANK YOU for the review! I love you! :) lol

Reviewer: musicmel Signed
Date: Aug 10, 2010 Title: Chapter 13: I Gotta Feelin'

I *love* seeing the old Justin!! I was smiling while reading the entire chapter.

What's funny is, they would totally be the guys to do something like this, be the drunk friends in a bar who thought hey were nobody, just enjoying the alcohol and good friends... then BAM the next day its everywhere! lol I would like a night out with them :)



Author's Response: dude, me too. i think they'd be awesome to party with like this. It is my goal to be invited to a Chris K party sometime before I leave Orlando. I loved the scene with Johnny getting all up in their faces about going out and causing a scene because when they planned it out, that didn't even come to mind. Why should it anymore, you know? Then again, us crazy fans who want them together would totally read something into it if it happened like this. I remember seeing a pic of Justin and Chris getting dinner somewhere in NYC--it was last year sometime I think--and I was like...DUDE! They're plotting. lol.

Reviewer: musicmel Signed
Date: Feb 03, 2011 Title: Chapter 15: The In Between

Excuse me… you cannot leave me hanging like this. I’m gonna need more, like now ;)
This was such a great chapter. I am actually surprised that Skylar acted so calmly, for some reason I expected a huge scene. Nevertheless great job my dear!

Reviewer: musicmel Signed
Date: Apr 20, 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Let It Rain

*Sigh*I love that Justin was strong enough to swoop in, do what he needed, and leave. It shows how much stronger he is now. If he would have asked those questions any sooner, I think he would have lingered wanting her to just take him back.You totally deserved the nomination for this character, he is very well written!!MEMPHIS!!! I hope they are ready for us, again!

Brie and Josh were the unusual couple around LA.  He was the accomplished muscian that had won awards with his group and awards as producer.  She was the unknown woman that was dating JC Chasez.  She quickly became known for her sketchy behavior and crazy antics.

As the couple gets serious, her antics get crazier.  JC starts to wonder if he's truly happy or if he just enjoyed playing with fire for a short time.



Categories: In Progress Het Stories
Characters: JC Chasez
Awards: None
Genres: Angst, Drama, Romance

Series: None
Chapters: 2
Wordcount: 2196 - Hits: 3568
Complete?: No - Published: Feb 16, 2010 - Last Updated: Apr 20, 2010 -
Reviewer: musicmel Signed
Date: Feb 16, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

NOOO!!! That is not what how you end something like that.

I want more thats for sure! Great start!



Author's Response: Thanks :)  Looks like I'll be writing more....

Reviewer: musicmel Signed
Date: Apr 20, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

JC, Hello… car sex is great! Who needs to be inside for that?

I can see this being a very sexual story! They seem to be all about sex, which totally fits into JC’s world!

 

Author's Response:

Hahahaha car sex would be the smart choice but since JC is Mr Freaky how freaky can you really get in a car? LOL 

I haven't decided the tone of the story but I do know the JC and Brie are human versions of rabbits :)

Thanks Mel!

The Hallmark Company can suck it. I hate them for creating this holiday.  Even more than that, I hate that it's made those of us that are single feel like losers if we are alone on said holiday. Especially the ones who are usually ok with being single, independent people. Like myself. Today is the one day that I find it negative to be alone. And it's all because of stupid Hallmark and the stupid chocolate companies wanting to make a bigger profit. Oh, and the color red.  Whoever produces the color red or pink...I hate them too. Am I bitter? Absolutely. And I have no problem admitting it.

So I'm boycotting Valentine's Day this year. Wearing black, not buying cards or flowers or cutesy heart shaped boxes of chocolate. Not doing any of it. Like I said before, Hallmark and the chocolate companies can bite the big one. I'm determined to have a crappy, cynicism filled day.

I should've known that things wouldn't work out like that. They never work out how you expect, do they? Nope. My day went completely the opposite as planned.

All because he showed up.



Categories: Completed Het Stories
Characters: Justin Timberlake
Awards: None
Genres: Romance

Series: None
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 8514 - Hits: 1711
Complete?: Yes - Published: Feb 16, 2010 - Last Updated: Feb 16, 2010 -
Reviewer: musicmel Signed
Date: Feb 16, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Something Like You

  Well fuck me into next year. Justin fucking Timberlake was standing behind me in line. And my God was he gorgeous.That is something I would SO say. Haha That kiss… whew… beautifully written!You could totally write ’the space between’!! I loved it. I now would like a handband as well!

Author's Response:

yes, that is completely something I would say as well. 'Fuck me into next year' is quickly becoming my new favorite phrase. lol. Aside from it being a story on the site, what's 'The Space Between'?

Oh and true story, party city was really selling those antenna headband things. Though I'm not sure they said anything. But I'm totally buying them for next year so people can look at me funny. haha. 

Glad you liked this! I had fun writing something light and fluffy. 

Thanks for the review love! <3

"Some Girls (Dance With Women)"

The door is coming off the hinges
About to pass out, no doubt it's hot in here
Because the club is full of women
It's wall to wall and I got my crew with me

We grab a table spot to chill in
Hunt down a waitress, make an order
Here we go
Throw back a drink and let it kick in
It takes a minute
Who's ready to have some fun?

Get up and take a lap and mingle
Love being single on a night like this, yea
So many beautiful young people
That game is lethal, you don't have to kill them though

Just look at everyone as equal
While you were dancing she was watching, feeling you
Her and her girlfriends by the speaker
All moving on each other, this is when the show begins

Baby girl you keep looking at me
Move your body so sexy
Nice and slow, watch you roll
You know how I like it

Baby girl cause you know you got me
Move your body so sexy
Nice and slow, watch you roll
You know how I like it

Some girls dance with women
Knowing that it gives them attention
And I wanna get in with them
So pass me a drink and lets roll
(Come here girl)

Some girls dance with women
Knowing that it gives them attention
I wanna get in with them
So pass me a drink and lets go
(Lets go)



Categories: In Progress Het Stories
Characters: JC Chasez
Awards: None
Genres: Angst, Celebrity/Celebrity, Drama, Romance
Challenges: Rated XXX: Mature Ladies Only

Series: None
Chapters: 5
Wordcount: 5493 - Hits: 10749
Complete?: No - Published: Feb 22, 2010 - Last Updated: Mar 13, 2010 -
Reviewer: musicmel Signed
Date: Feb 27, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: All Moving On Each Other....

I so didn't expect her to be a virgin. I'm intrigued and want more! Great job!