Penname: musicmel [Contact] Real name: Melissa
Member Since: Sep 22, 2009
Membership status: Member
Bio:
I love music. Anyone that knows me via Twitter or Facebook knows that first hand. I have an obsession with live music. Attending concerts is my drug of choice. I believe that I am from a 'writer' but I enjoy writing and getting my crazy ideas out into the world. I’m pretty sarcastic… ok so really I think Sarcasm should have been my middle name. A sense of humor could really improve someone‘s life… really that was serious.
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Part V by jersey_tenn (NC-17) [Comments - 4]

 

The Reason



Categories: Completed Het Stories
Characters: JC Chasez
Awards: None
Genres: Drama

Series: Closer
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 1262 - Hits: 1775
Complete?: Yes - Published: May 04, 2010 - Last Updated: May 04, 2010 -
Reviewer: musicmel Signed
Date: May 04, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Its your sex I can smell...

Oh how I love the sensual side of them with the mind blowing rough sex. My opinion, the best kind of sex.

You have done so well at writing this! Can I have more, now?

Need You Now by Mel514 (PG-13) [Comments - 2]

 

"It's a quarter after one, I'm all alone and I need you now..."  



Categories: Completed Het Stories
Characters: Justin Timberlake
Awards: None
Genres: Romance

Series: None
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 2315 - Hits: 1099
Complete?: Yes - Published: May 13, 2010 - Last Updated: May 13, 2010 -
Reviewer: musicmel Signed
Date: May 13, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Need You Now

Oh wow, how i loved it. You wrote his thoughts and his emotions, perfectly. So so great!

*This song has been inspiration for so much. I think everyone has that moment of weakness. That moment of wanting somethign you wish you still had. You miss someone so much that you just need them now. :)



Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it :)

Part VI by jersey_tenn (NC-17) [Comments - 4]
Past Featured Story

 

The heartbreak



Categories: Completed Het Stories
Characters: JC Chasez
Awards: None
Genres: Drama

Series: Closer
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 1780 - Hits: 1739
Complete?: Yes - Published: May 20, 2010 - Last Updated: May 20, 2010 -
Reviewer: musicmel Signed
Date: May 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Closer to God...

Yes, you must say more. I want more! I think I would to meet this JC and teach him a few things. He is *very* rough.

Though never explicitly voiced, the knowledge of her friends and family’s disapproval of the man she loved persuaded Gemma Porter to deny his request to elope at the age of twenty and caused his subsequent and abrupt move out of town. Five years later, a now wealthy and successful Justin Timberlake returns, and by the most unfortunate of events, Gemma continuously finds herself in his presence. Her friends and family don’t remember him, Justin jokes with her as if she hadn’t broken his heart, and most importantly, Gemma must come to terms with the fact that she may still be in love with him. 



Categories: In Progress Het Stories
Characters: Justin Timberlake
Awards: None
Genres: Alternate Universe, Drama, Romance

Series: None
Chapters: 5
Wordcount: 19650 - Hits: 10023
Complete?: No - Published: May 22, 2010 - Last Updated: Aug 01, 2010 -
Reviewer: musicmel Signed
Date: May 28, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I'm interested thats for sure! Bring it on your doing a great job!!!

Author's Response: So I'm so late, but THANK YOU :D

Reviewer: musicmel Signed
Date: May 28, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Oh no. She is engaged. This is going to get very interesting! Love it!



Author's Response: She is! :(, but yes, haha veeeery interesting indeed!

Reviewer: musicmel Signed
Date: Jun 08, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Hmmmm. its goign to be very interesting with the two of them. She is clearly not sure about marrying him. She doesn't want the guy that is away all the time.

Author's Response: I hope it's interesting! Haha. But yes, Gemma's never really sure about anything, really.

How do two people who have never met suddenly become involved in each other's lives, without ever knowing who each other are? A tiny mistake leads to an entirely new chapter in life. 

Categories: In Progress Het Stories
Characters: Justin Timberlake
Awards: None
Genres: Drama, Humor, Romance

Series: None
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 555 - Hits: 1005
Complete?: No - Published: May 26, 2010 - Last Updated: May 26, 2010 -
Reviewer: musicmel Signed
Date: May 27, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Bzzz

I want more! That was such a tease!

 

Part VII by jersey_tenn (NC-17) [Comments - 7]

 

The End



Categories: Completed Het Stories
Characters: JC Chasez
Awards: None
Genres: Drama

Series: Closer
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 1553 - Hits: 1545
Complete?: Yes - Published: Jun 12, 2010 - Last Updated: Jun 12, 2010 -
Reviewer: musicmel Signed
Date: Jun 12, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: I drink the honey inside your hive...

AHHH!!! Perfect ending! Closer to him :) Yu did an amazing job with this!!!! There's still some open doors... maybe you could continue this into a story? Get the bakground of why they are the way they are?



Author's Response: i kept going back & forth with the ending, taking ur ideas & testing them out but in the end, this one just came together...i think i may continue it...not sure yet

I wrote this when I was like 15 or so-whenever MTV had the show "The Blame Game".  This is a psuedo script I wrote with Justin and Britney being contestants on the show.  I found the printed copy of this in my parents basement and typed it out.  I left the grammar and other offenses as is-it's just too funny to correct.

Categories: Completed Het Stories
Characters: Justin Timberlake
Awards: None
Genres: Celebrity/Celebrity, Humor

Series: None
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 1474 - Hits: 1249
Complete?: Yes - Published: Jun 17, 2010 - Last Updated: Jun 17, 2010 -
Reviewer: musicmel Signed
Date: Jun 17, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: The Blame Game

Justin: yo, dis aint crunk!

Britney: I had to keep my job!

  Bahahaha! I was dying at the quotes. OMG funny shit.

 



Author's Response:

Mel-I found this in the basement and was sitting on the floor dying of laughter and my dad was like "what's so funny" and I just couldn't explain to him since he just doesn't "do NSYNC". Once I found this and read it I knew it had to be posted.  There was no question about it...

 

This is a one-shot based off the lyrics to Drake's song bearing the same title off of his 'So Far Gone' mixtape.  I'd had the urge to write a one-shot all day and this is what I came up with.  Reviews are always appreciated. :]

Categories: Completed Het Stories
Characters: Justin Timberlake
Awards: None
Genres: Romance

Series: None
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 3143 - Hits: 2492
Complete?: Yes - Published: Jul 02, 2010 - Last Updated: Jul 02, 2010 -
Reviewer: musicmel Signed
Date: Jul 02, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Aftter the dayI have had, this was exactly what I needed!! A great one shot story!!

You did a great job!!!



Author's Response: thanks! i'm thinking about writing another one today...all this rain is leaving me with nothing else to do. lol

Three years.  That's how long it had been since they'd seen each other--since she had walked away from the only man she had ever loved and every day Mayra is haunted by the question: what if.  A chance meeting on the beach may give her the answer to her question but is it the answer she's been looking for?

Categories: Challenges, In Progress Het Stories
Characters: JC Chasez
Awards: Season 6
Genres: Alternate Universe, Drama, Romance
Challenges: Anyone BUT Justin, A Day At The Beach

Series: None
Chapters: 8
Wordcount: 26329 - Hits: 20318
Complete?: Yes - Published: Jul 07, 2010 - Last Updated: Jul 28, 2010 -
Reviewer: musicmel Signed
Date: Aug 18, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Grr! They are both mysterious little punks.

I’m such a slacker. I have had this on my jump drive for quite some time and couldn’t find the time to read it. Finally, I put everything else on hold :)

Reviewer: musicmel Signed
Date: Aug 18, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Drunk Mayra is much more defensive when it comes to JC. That side of her needs to come out more! JC didn’t know what to do when she gave him the smack down.

I really wanna know why or how they ended things… hmm

Reviewer: musicmel Signed
Date: Aug 18, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Wowza. I thought she broke him, but I was wrong. She broke him. She really broke him.

FYI, you are an incredible writer :)

Reviewer: musicmel Signed
Date: Aug 18, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

*Smacks Mayra*  What is this girls problem? Something has happened to change her option on love but what could be that bad?

Super job!

Reviewer: musicmel Signed
Date: Aug 18, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 -- part 1

YES YES YES!!! TELL HIM!!!!