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Mack Desrosiers: Born in Montreal, Quebec, Canada; raised in Memphis, Tennessee; residing in Orlando, Florida.  She and Justin have been friends since they were in diapers. She's always seen as "one of the guys" or "Justin's little sister"; aways the follower, never the leader, which was how she found herself in Orlando in the first place. As their lives change she finally decides to grab her life by the horns and become the leader, earning the spot of being 'N Sync's choreographer. But everything comes with a price. For her, it's life coming at her like a speeding train and she doesn't know how to get out of the way with her back up against the wall.

"Don't walk in front of me, I may not follow. Don't walk behind me, I may not lead. Just walk beside me and be my friend." --  Albert Camus 

Being edited as of 6/9/19



Categories: Completed Het Stories
Characters: Group, Justin Timberlake
Awards: None
Genres: Angst, Drama, General, Humor, Romance

Series: What's a Girl to Do?
Chapters: 35
Wordcount: 161901 - Hits: 133935
Complete?: Yes - Published: Jul 29, 2009 - Last Updated: Jul 06, 2010 -
Reviewer: Anonymous Signed
Date: Jun 30, 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Memphis Soul

Wait, I just remembered, did she decide to take on any of those jobs? I gotta know!

Author's Response: You'll find out next chapterrrrrr =)

Reviewer: Anonymous Signed
Date: Jun 30, 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Memphis Soul

So this was over a span of a couple of days? Ok, now I get that. This chapter was great. I'm glad she finally got home, like Lance said, it's as if she did an complete 180 once she got there, which was good, she needed the comfortable enviroment. AND IT FINALLY HIT HER! YAY! Aww, I loved how she hugged Lance, that was so sweet. And TRACE! OMFG, he was so adorable in this chapter. AND HE KISSED HER! So Mack finally gave Charlotte the time to explain, good. I don't know if I like Mike so far, I gotta see more of him. Hmmm, she's having his kid? That might not be too good. Update soon, please.

Author's Response: I'm glad you loved the chapter. Yes, Mack finally came to her sense and yes Trace kissed her, he is adorable aint he? Charlotte having another kid may be good and bad, it depends on who you're asking...thanks for the review.

Reviewer: Anonymous Signed
Date: May 03, 2010 Title: Chapter 27: A Hug Can Make Things Better

I want to hit her Mom for showing up so suddenly (well, not suddenly she did send a letter) but still. I also want to hit Mack 'cause she's too headstrong, but I like that about her at the same time. :-) And Justin at the end was so cute. I would love for him to hold me if I were upset.

One more thing: LEONARDO DICAPRIOOOO! HE'S SO HOT!! Great job, girl, please update soon.



Author's Response: You're not the only one who wants to hit them both, but the voices in my head have control over what I write and I can't hit them so... Justin is so cute, I want my own Justin, lol. Or someone that's like him, I'm not picky, haha. Leo, he's so smexy, mhmmm. Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: Anonymous Signed
Date: May 17, 2010 Title: Chapter 28: One and the Same

Hmmm, that's kinda sketchy at the end with AJ and Nick. Wonder if they're planning something. hmm, Nick's a little jumpy around Lou too...

Reviewer: Anonymous Signed
Date: May 27, 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Boys and Belches

BSB and 'N Sync meet, eh? I love how you made them interact with each other, I thought it was great. And having them sit across from their counterpart so to speak was pretty cool. Ugh, Lou is so gross if I were here I'd bitch slap him in front of them so he gets what he deserves. Oh no, don't make her cut herself. Well, maybe Nick can make her feel better. He seems to have taken a liking to her. =) Update whenever you can.

Author's Response: it suddenly hit me who their opposite would be so i decided to seat them that way. Lou makes my skin crawl, and yes a certain Carter has his eye on her, or not? ooh, dun dun dun

Reviewer: Anonymous Signed
Date: Jun 15, 2010 Title: Chapter 30: The One With the Necklace Part 1

I understand the JC thing but that's what makes JC, well, JC.  But I get it, like I said. And Joey trying to pull Mack out of her shell is a good idea. She has to crack soon with all fo that pressure, I'm surprised she hasn't gone crazy yet. And I love Nick in this despite but being a Backstreet Boys fan.

Author's Response: it's her reasoning, not mine. and Joey's such a sweetheart, i know!! and the pressure will get to her soon, it's her reaction that i'm worried about.

Reviewer: Anonymous Signed
Date: Jun 15, 2010 Title: Chapter 31: The One With the Necklace Part 2

Pressure by Paramore, what an excellent song choice considering the circumstances, lol. The ending was sweet, just what Mack needed, a night with her boys. Hmm, methinks Lou is behind that sudden record deal offer. Awww, Nick is being so sweet to her. Please update soon!

Author's Response: who wouldn't want a "sleepover" with the boys in their pajamas? you'd have to be crazy to pass that up. thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Anonymous Signed
Date: Jun 22, 2010 Title: Chapter 32: A Plane, No Train, and An Automobile Part 1

What can I say about this chapter. The begining was amazing. I loved how you described their sleeping habits. (Joey snoring like a truck, hahaha!) And JC wants to get back together with Nikki? Or not? Hmmm. I like the insight into his thinking. Oh I hope he figures out what's going on with Mack soon.

Aww, Lynn leaving. That scene was so sweet. Justin trying not to cry and acting all macho. And Lynn making sure that Justin and Mack understood that they would need each other now more than ever made me tear up, I'm not kidding. I loved how JC was the one who helped them walk away. I want a "big brother" like him. And the roadtrip idea? Sounds good but something tells me that they're going to be mad at each other by the end of it. And...TWO CHAPTERS LEFT? NOOOOOOO! Well, I can look forward to the sequel.



Author's Response: Yes, the sleeping habits. I needed to write something that fit their personalities and I always imagined Joey the snorer. Does he? I left some hints in the chapter that tells what his response will be. Mack's a very complex person, her secret will come out when the timing is right. And yes, sappy Justin made me tear up a bit. JC, the big brother. *Le sigh* thanks for the review.

Reviewer: Anonymous Signed
Date: Jun 22, 2010 Title: Chapter 33: A Plane, No Train, and An Automobile Part 2

Ok, FINALLY! SOmeone talks to Mack about what's been going on. I'm glad it's JC and I'm glad he wouldn't take silence for an answer. Threatening to keep her locked in the car, smart plan. (I'd want to stay locked in a car with JC, XD). Anyway, WOW. That whole JC adoption thing...I'm speechless and crying. It's just...you made him sound vulnerable and that was so sweet. And how he wants to help her and how they're proud of her...awwwww....

DOO RUN RUN! YES! I'm glad you added that in, that was so funny. It makes me want to watch the videos again. Adding Mack in for a few bits was a good idea. And I think Johnny's hinting at something when he's talking about Nick. They seem pretty good together, but it seems that their friendship has an underlying meaning. And Chris with the sign. OMG, how he spelled traitor wrong. And, awww, Trace, begging her to come back home. That was sweet. I still can't believe it's two mroe chapters, but I can't wait to see how this ends and the other begins. I can this and SLY ending and begining with a bang!



Author's Response: JC, the big brother, you gotta love him. Who wouldn't want to be locked in a car with him? Ahh, yes the adoption thing, made me tear up a bit. Doo Run Run, i had to add that. I was thinking about what to do to have them pass time and then I remembered the masterpice called the Reel Nsync. I'm glad you liked the chapter and are looking forward to SLY. Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: Anonymous Signed
Date: Jul 07, 2010 Title: Chapter 35: Summer of Changes

I'm glad you showed what happened to the others on their vacation, well JC mainly but either way it was a good touch. “Hey J, I love you and all, but I would appreciate it if you got your ass-less ass out of my face,” That was my favorite line. It made me laugh so hard! JT doesn't have an ass I wondered why JC was jumping around the subject, it wasn't like him but I guess it was because he didn't want to tell Justin that he didn't want to get back together with Nikki. Something about them always guessing that it was Christinia who got the contract made me laugh a bit. So we finally hear her response to her offers, she has a good idea about 'em. And, lol at the guys waiting for them to finish their exam. I loved the ending, it was perfect as if the story could end there but perfect if you wanted to add more, which you will. Overall, I'll admit I was skeptic about this story but you've managed to capture me with how the characters dealt with some of their problems. Kudos to writing about it from the begiing of 'N Sync's career by your interpretation. I can't wait to read the next installment.

Author's Response: Of course I showed their vacation, I couldn't leave them out like that. That line made me laugh so hard while I was writing it so I knew I had to put that in there. I'm glad I was able to mae you change your mind about the story. Your words are forever kept in my heart and my head. The new story should be up today.

Singer and songwriter, Melissa Alano hasn't had the best of luck. After losing her mom to cancer when she was 18, and just recently finding her best friend in bed with her fiancee, she figures that maybe happiness and love just aren't in store for her. That is until she meets Lance Bass. Now, read how Melissa is able to struggle through the upsets of fame, and the good-and not so good parts of being in love; with the help of N'sync, and a few other secret celeberites.

Categories: In Progress Het Stories
Characters: Group, Lance Bass
Awards: None
Genres: Drama, Romance

Series: None
Chapters: 17
Wordcount: 57289 - Hits: 37293
Complete?: No - Published: Aug 18, 2009 - Last Updated: Apr 22, 2011 -
Reviewer: Anonymous Signed
Date: Apr 07, 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2

I'm really loving this story. i really hope you update soon.

Reviewer: Anonymous Signed
Date: Apr 10, 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5

JC was being an ass! I'm glad she put him in his place.

Justin Timberlake: a small boy with dreams of making it big. He has the talent, but will he be able to stand out against a cast of talented others?

JC Chasez: He’s been on MMC for the past two years and is ready to start the next one. What he didn’t expect was life to slap him in the face.

Mack Desrosiers: a young girl who followed her best friend as he achieved his dream and decides to try and reach hers. Will the two be able to survive the crack in their friendship?

ON HIATUS



Categories: In Progress Het Stories
Characters: JC Chasez, Justin Timberlake
Awards: None
Genres: Angst, Drama, General, Humor

Series: What's a Girl to Do?
Chapters: 5
Wordcount: 8736 - Hits: 11093
Complete?: No - Published: Dec 15, 2009 - Last Updated: Oct 07, 2010 -
Reviewer: Anonymous Signed
Date: May 27, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: You and Me: Orlando or Bust, March 1993

I could have sworn I reviewed this a while ago. Anyway, I loved the chapter. I feel bad for Trace, but I'm glad Justin gets to where he needs to be. Please update soon.

Past Featured Story

 

When you know it’s meant to be
Everything comes naturally, it comes naturally
When you're with me, baby
 

“Naturally” – Selena Gomez



Categories: In Progress Het Stories
Characters: Group, JC Chasez, Justin Timberlake
Awards: None
Genres: Celebrity/Celebrity, Romance

Series: None
Chapters: 29
Wordcount: 102642 - Hits: 86835
Complete?: No - Published: Jan 15, 2010 - Last Updated: Apr 12, 2011 -
Reviewer: Anonymous Signed
Date: Mar 08, 2011 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 27: New York Minute: Right Behind You

Read all of this in one day. Love love love it! Ana rocks! Post more soon.

Author's Response: You did not!!! Oh my gosh, thank you! Thanks for taking the time to read it (in one day!). I really do appreciate the feedback! Ana is my little soldier, I love her. So, thank you!

Reviewer: Anonymous Signed
Date: Jan 13, 2012 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 28: The Miracle Worker

Ack! It's close to a year since you last updated! I still can't wait to see what happens next. =)