*NSYNC Fiction :: heartsevolve

Part of Your History by beezeswims (PG-13) [Comments - 43]

For one minute he's the Justin she's always known. He is five years old covered in mud laughing like a maniac as she sprays him with a super soaker, ten with a voice as big as the ocean singing along with Steven Tyler in his Mama's car, fifteen handing her a cell phone and promising to call every night, twenty- one pressing kisses on her collar bone and telling her nothing's going to change...

Categories: In Progress Het Stories
Characters: Justin Timberlake
Awards: None
Genres: Celebrity/Celebrity, Drama

Series: None
Chapters: 9
Wordcount: 18960 - Hits: 21866
Complete?: No - Published: Mar 16, 2009 - Last Updated: Apr 09, 2009 -

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Reviewer: heartsevolve Signed
Date: Mar 13, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

I don't know how I never ran into this story before, but you write wonderfully!

Reviewer: heartsevolve Signed
Date: Mar 13, 2011 Title: Chapter 3: 2: Sad Songs

She adds it to the list and tries not to imagine the two of them sleeping in the bed she picked out.

Ohhh, that line got me. So good! on to the next chapter!

Reviewer: heartsevolve Signed
Date: Mar 13, 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Interlude: Blinded (When I See You)

She's hurting, he can read it on her face and he could hear it in her voice yesterday when they talked on the phone. But he's lived with these ghosts since she's been gone, and he figures it's about time she faces them too.

AOIJFOWG OH MY GOD, BEST LINE EVER. I know I'm not really leaving comprehensive reviews, but just know this is probs one of my favorite stories on here! The angst is SO well done.

The Space Between by azchickadee (PG-13) [Comments - 83]

The space between

What's wrong and right

Is where you'll find me hiding, waiting for you

The space between

Your heart and mine

Is the sapce we'll fill with time

The space between...

-Dave Matthews Band

Can three couples survive "The Space Between"?

Categories: In Progress Het Stories
Characters: JC Chasez, Justin Timberlake
Awards: None
Genres: Drama, Romance

Series: Crazy Love
Chapters: 21
Wordcount: 111263 - Hits: 77042
Complete?: Yes - Published: Jul 14, 2009 - Last Updated: Nov 21, 2009 -

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Reviewer: heartsevolve Signed
Date: Jun 29, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

"Yes you are." He interrupted. "I can see it in your eyes. I love you." He stated emphatically. "And I know you love me and that's all that matters. This is just a house."

God, he knows her so well. I love it.

Author's Response: sigh....he's pretty much perfect :)

Between The Lines by musicmel (NC-17) [Comments - 93]

Scandals. They can make or break you in this industry. Malia has been lucky enough not to get involved with the drama of Hollywood and have a scandal that rocked her boat. Against her better judgment, she has had a very lengthy rough relationship with someone that her camp was not thrilled about from the beginning. He was a rapper/singer from Atlanta, who moved to L.A. to find himself but what he found, was Malia. Who was already a successful songwriter about to break into the music scene, front and center. She wrote and produced the single that put him on the map, over a year ago. Since that moment, his time was over in the industry. Single after single, they all flopped. The hype surrounding her however, made the expectations sky rocket the publicity for the album. His foul mouth and bad behavior was a threat to her career, but her great image and thriving career was exactly what he needed.

Categories: In Progress Het Stories
Characters: Justin Timberlake
Awards: None
Genres: Celebrity/Celebrity, Drama, Romance, Suspense

Series: None
Chapters: 28
Wordcount: 75194 - Hits: 72975
Complete?: No - Published: Apr 22, 2010 - Last Updated: Jul 01, 2011 -

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Reviewer: heartsevolve Signed
Date: Jun 12, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Shots

Oh dang. I'm such a sucker for attheclubdancing!justin. So attractive, I can't stand it! But I was so surprised he stopped her in the cooler! Whyyy?

Author's Response:

Him stopping that moment in the cooler was wrong on so many levels, but he has a reason.

I love new readers :)

Thanks

Reviewer: heartsevolve Signed
Date: Jun 12, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Awaken

I loved the way you explained what happened in the night with snapshots. It was very much like drunk mornings I have when I try to replay what happened the night before!

Can't wait for moooore!

Author's Response:
Waking up the morning after a good drunkfest is always the weirdest feeling. Esp if your waking up next to Justin Timberlake.. haha It's funny how thats exactly how you feel. You seem to have flashes of the night before the peices fall together.
Thanks for reading and reviewing :)

Yellow by Ashley (R) [Comments - 162]

Things aren’t always black and white. Relationships, situations, people - they're complicated and messy, and often heartbreaking, even when they make you happy. Sometimes they’re gray, sometimes they’re blue, and when Justin meets Zooey, everything suddenly turns… yellow.

Categories: Completed Het Stories
Characters: Justin Timberlake
Awards: None
Genres: Celebrity/Celebrity, Drama, Humor, Romance

Series: None
Chapters: 20
Wordcount: 83648 - Hits: 60444
Complete?: Yes - Published: Jul 04, 2010 - Last Updated: Jul 24, 2011 -

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Reviewer: heartsevolve Signed
Date: Jul 29, 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Oh Friend, You've Left Me Speechless

OH MY GOD, I CAN'T BELIEVE THEY KISSED. I'M LIKE FREAKING OUT RIGHT NOW. Does that mean their friendship is completely ruined forever?! Oh lord, lord lord lord! How are they coming back from that? And more importantly, how are you going to get them in the same room, ever, ever again?!

Sigh. You're killin me here, dude. I can't even....OH MAN JUST UPDATE SOON, K BECAUSE I'M DYINGGGG.

Reviewer: heartsevolve Signed
Date: Jul 06, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: I Got A Feeling

LKDSJFAOW WHAT I LOVE THIS.

Their banter is ADORABLE and seriously it is my favorite part of any relationship, ever. And you do such a spectacular job with it! I cannot WAIT for more, they're already so cute...and omg what is gonna happen?! I'm so curious!

And this line, "Zooey hung her head a bit sadly, watching him rise from their comfortable little spot outside with absolutely nothing." was wonderful. especially the 'little spot outside with absolutely nothing.' I'm not sure why it resonated so much with me, but man, it did! :)

Update soon!

Author's Response: Omg, well thank you! I love you for reading! I definitely work on making the interactions simultaneously believable and entertaining, so I love that you appreciate it. I'll try to keep it up. Obviously, I can't tell you what's gonna happen, but if you keep reading, I promise to keep updating! And I like the "absolutely nothing" line, too. I put it in there twice so it would resonate, for whatever reason. I guess I was trying to emphasize the simplicity of it all... sitting outside in the parking lot, just talking. I dunno, I like it. I'm glad you did, too lol. Thanks so much for the review, babe!

Reviewer: heartsevolve Signed
Date: Jul 25, 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Up In The Air

So I've been reading fic for like eleven years which I can't decide to consider it an accomplishment or just a sad, sad fact of my life. But over the years there have been a couple fics - I can count the number on my hands - that I had desperately wished were just straight up novels so I could take them with me everywhere and there would be an actual physical representation of my love, worn pages and broken spines. not to mention being able to read it all at once! But my god, this story is sooo one of them. I loveeee it.

Zooey is like one of my most favorite characters ever, plus I love love love the casting. She and justin would be so cute together! I'm on my phone right now so I'm too lazy to scoll up but that line that justin says, about how he doesn't know if zooey has everything or nothing...GUH. My heart aches, still! Just thinking about it! Give her something definite to have, justin! Damn.

Oh my god and the hand holding. What.......I just...I can't even explain it. Just that I've
been there! I know that feeling. And its terrible and its exhilarating. Yeah.

Lol, so anyway, after a mile long review, I just want to tell you how fabulous a job you're doing with this and I seriously hope its like 50+ chapters, though I get the
feeling that's not how you roll. Update soon, I'm already anxious!

Reviewer: heartsevolve Signed
Date: Aug 15, 2010 Title: Chapter 10: The Two Sides of My Brain Need to Have a Meeting

Ahhhh!! I have miiiiiissed this story like water! Zooey and Justin...sigh. Oh man I can't wait to here what lynn has to say about what she overheard in the bathroom. Man. And Emile is hilarious btw, she seems perfect for kanye.

Don't Stop by azchickadee (PG-13) [Comments - 65]

Three years. That's how long it had been since they'd seen each other--since she had walked away from the only man she had ever loved and every day Mayra is haunted by the question: what if. A chance meeting on the beach may give her the answer to her question but is it the answer she's been looking for?

Categories: Challenges, In Progress Het Stories
Characters: JC Chasez
Awards: Season 6
Genres: Alternate Universe, Drama, Romance
Challenges: Anyone BUT Justin, A Day At The Beach

Series: None
Chapters: 8
Wordcount: 26329 - Hits: 20318
Complete?: Yes - Published: Jul 07, 2010 - Last Updated: Jul 28, 2010 -

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Reviewer: heartsevolve Signed
Date: Jul 10, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I DIDN'T KNOW YOU HAD ALREADY BEEN POSTING CHAPTERS, HOLY CRAP! Um, the ending killed me. SOMETIMES JUST HELLO IS BETTER THAN ANYYYYTHING ELSE!

I am exciiiited for the rest of this! :)

Reviewer: heartsevolve Signed
Date: Jul 10, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Oh my god idk why this story is affecting me so much but I loooove it. I suppose I have a weakness for old lovers meeting again after years of not seeing each other..obviously, haha. But seriously. I ABSOLUTELY LOVE THIS.

And damn, you're getting it all out so fast! :)

Author's Response: lol...well, that's all I have so far. The next chapter may be a few days...still formulating and trying to figure out what they're both going to do. :)

Reviewer: heartsevolve Signed
Date: Jul 12, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

WHY WAS THIS SO SHORT?! Actually, I don't even know how short or long it was, but it FELT short. Because I loved it so, most likely.

Ugh, this story makes my heart hurt, but it's in the most wonderful way and I love it.

And I already told you about what made me literally laugh out loud :) Wonderful chapter, can't wait for an update!

Author's Response:
lol...actually this chapter is the same length as the others :) but, I know the feeling. I always hate it when chapters come to an end. Don't worry, I know what's going to happen in the next one and will hopefully be able to work on it tomorrow.
This story makes my heart hurt too, but stick with me. It'll be worth it, I promise. <3

Reviewer: heartsevolve Signed
Date: Jul 20, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I love that song. You Ruined Me. It's so good. AND AS WAS THIS CHAPTER, MAN. I'm excited for what happens after. GO GET HER BACK, JC, DO IT.

Author's Response:
best song ever! think he can get her back? I don't know...we'll have to see....

Reviewer: heartsevolve Signed
Date: Jul 25, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 -- part 1

Oooh! The flower scene. I have been waiting for that! Poor mayra. :( DOES SHE LOVE HIM!? I think yes!!!

Author's Response: I've been waiting for the flower scene too! Finally found a place for it to fit in to everything :)