Oooooh! This is intriguing..I'm liking it so far, I can picture this clearly in my head.. :D

*reads next chapter*

Josh decided to explore the house while Madison slept. He went into the living room and perused the photos sitting on the mantle above the fireplace. There were pictures of her with her parents, her friends, and a guy he didn't know. His heart sank.

JC, stop being so nosy..LOL But glad that Madison told him she wasn't seeing the guy anymore, and I like these lines here as well:

"He wasn't you." She whispered as she looked down at her feet.

"What was that? I couldn't hear you." Josh grinned as he stepped closer to her.

"He wasn't you. OK? There. I still have feelings for you. 

Haha! I knew it! :D

AWWWWW! THIS WAS SO ADORABLE! LOVE IT!

I SO laughed at these lines here:

"Michael!" He called loudly as he stood in the doorway of his open-plan living room and glanced once again over his shoulder to see if he could spot his cell-phone in his peripheral vision. To his dismay, he couldn't.

"What?" came the reply, shouted loudly, and from a distance. Michael was somewhere in the house, but Lance had no idea where. He wasn't concerned about that. All he really wanted to know was where his cell-phone was.

"My phone. I've lost it,” he explained in a loud and riled voice.

I can totally picture Lance looking for his phone, and having Michael look for it..after all, he scares him from time to time according to instagram vids..HA! :D

Anyways..I also laughed at this: Anyone who picked up Joey Fatone’s cell-phone by mistake would’ve known instantly that it belonged to him. They wouldn’t have needed to scan through his long list of contacts—of which there were hundreds, including the other members of *NSYNC—or his extensive photo album, which contained photographs as varied as dishes he’d eaten out at restaurants, his children, random crap he’d seen out and about that he’d snapped to send to his friends later, but had since forgotten all about, and his favorite candid snaps of his mates from back in the day—even a few of a very young, peroxide blonde, pre–SexyBack Justin Timberlake

And the ending was just sweet.. :) This was a GREAT read..nicely done.

THIS: singing his heart out finally being heard as so many doors had been slammed in his face earlier that year due to the fallout made by one of Justin's fuckups.

"Dear Goodbye" would've been a nice music video, but do you know which other music video would've been awesome?? The song "Right There(Your Body)" don't know if you heard it, its very rare, they used to have it on youtube, but now its not there anymore..not sure. I have it saved..

But anyways, this is good so far, I'm liking it.. :) 

AWW! :D I FINALLY have the chance to read/review some of these now that the holidays are over..

So far so good!  

It feels like I have just watched "The Incredibles." I wanna be Edna! I can imitate her pretty well.. LOL

But JC as the "Man in Black." sounds rather interesting, JC does look good in black though..

Pretty good story Mel.. :) 

AWWWWWWW! THIS WAS ADORABLE! :D

These lines here had me laughing:  Well it’s about time!” Chris burst out as soon as Justin opened the hotel room door. “Nice of you to finally join us, Princess. You ready to attend your ball?” LOL

There were so many nice moments in here that I couldn't figure out which one to put, but the last line was just wonderful..  

 Okay, which one of you had JC as your Secret Santa? I need to trade you.” Joshtin moment...

Awesome job!  

 THIS:

"You’re heading out?” the bartender asked, taking his empty shot class, setting it down on his side of the wooden table top. He lifted a damp rag into his hand and started to clean off a beer glass. “So soon?”

I REALLY thought that the bartender guy was trying to flirt with JC! ROFL

But the girl that walked into the bar, that must be Maxine am I right?? I can't read the next chapter now, but I'll find out soon enough..this story looks good! :)