That was a very cute chapter. I like how she's not all the way there. Her mom's a biatch though. LOL! Good stuff ladies!
Author's Response: Thanks Ki. Yes her mom is a biatch lol. -kahli
I screamed so loud when I saw that you updated, my niece covered her ears! I was just re-reading this and telling a friend about it yesterday! YAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAY!!!! I think you get the idea.
I'm so happy for her. It'll be interesting to see Vanessa the girlfriend unfold and I can't wait to experience it. She's so adorable now and I never thought I'd say that. Thank you so much for updating, it made my day.
Ki
Hey girl! It's been an insanely long time since I've talked to you and I'm sorry for that. Ok, I finally sat my ass down long enough to read this story. I'd always start, then something happens and I stop or forget what I'm reading. That happens when you're reading so many stories at once. I can't even begin to tell you how much this story has touched me. You tapped into every emotion, mindset and feeling with this story and that only attributes to you as a writer. I knew you were one of my absolute faves for a reason!
In the beginning, I didn't like Vanessa at all. I respected what she stood for but she was the epitome of the word bitch. I was sitting back thinking how in the hell can I feel this way about the main character but she took me there. But then, something beautiful happened; you let us start to get to know her. Not who she had to be for the sake of her profession but her as a person and just like Mr. Timberlake (which I think, had to be a turn on for her) I fell in love. Her relationship with Justin happened organically and I appreciate that. As I read through the chapters I kept thinking, they should just bone and get that shit over with. I'm so glad it turned out to be more that that.
I have a relationship very similar to hers and Barker's so I also loved that relationship. And the last chapter tore me up! I'm SO HAPPY her father did that, I don't even know what to do. I hope to GOD that you decide to update this one day because it really deserves an ending.
Waiting with bated breath,
Ki
I'm digging the story so far. I especially love the beginning. Keep at it Ms. Mari!
Kamylle is the new intern at Jive Records. Only there for a summer, she doesn't plan on doing anything but her job, but fate has something different planned for her. Follow her journey through friendship, love, and life!!!
This is a really good read. I started reading it this morning and just couldn't stop. I'm loving it so far.
Author's Response: thanks!!!! i'm happy you're enjoying it!!
YES!!! I am so glad you posted this story again. I love all the Justin/Kayla drama. Good look!
Ki
This is a really good story. I can't wait to see everything unfold.
I'm really digging the series girl. Good job!
That is so sad! I hope that they can at least be civil during the remainder of the trip. Good stuff girl!
I'm so glad you updated. I really look forward to them. I'm also glad that Justin finally realized that he was the one that did that to her. This is an awesome series.
Author's Response: Thank you kindly my dear, I\'m glad you are enjoying it. Thanks for the review :)
Aint that a bitch?! That's so like him to be all sexy and fine and seductive and stuff. I can't blame her for allowing him to go that far but damnit, now her decisions even harder. Damn, your good girl.
Author's Response: I like sexy and seductive, don\'t you? This does complicate things a bit... Thanks for reading and thanks for taking the time to review.
OMG!! I can't even believe what just happened! See, she admitted that she was wrong for leading him on and that was cool but aborting the baby. Man, this damn story is just too good. Girl, you are a pimp!
Aww, that was so great! I personally don't believe in abortion but I can understand why she thought the way she did in the beginning. I'm just glad that she didn't go through with it. This is a wonderful story.
Author's Response: Thank you :)! I\'m glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for all of the reviews!
Hot damn! Does Dr. Justin do house calls?! Because I think I'm sick...lol. This was funny, clever and really good.
Ki
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