Penname: Keediluv [Contact] Real name: Kijuana
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A little romantic piece that popped into my head the other night...Enjoy!

Categories: Completed Het Stories
Characters: Justin Timberlake
Awards: None
Genres: Romance

Series: None
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 2014 - Hits: 2161
Complete?: Yes - Published: Jan 04, 2008 - Last Updated: Jan 04, 2008 -
Reviewer: Keediluv Signed
Date: Apr 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Just Call Me Daddy

I reviewed this last night but something about a security code error so it didn't post.  I loved this story!  I thought it was so grown-up sexy!  The children are beautiful and I love that you invited the reader to take part.  Awesome!

Ki



Author's Response: Aww, thank you Ki! I appreciate your review!

You're hostessing at a restaurant and its been a shitty night. Waiter!J is there to make it alllllll better

Categories: Completed Het Stories
Characters: Justin Timberlake
Awards: None
Genres: Alternate Universe

Series: None
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 4025 - Hits: 3693
Complete?: Yes - Published: Jan 07, 2008 - Last Updated: Jan 07, 2008 -
Reviewer: Keediluv Signed
Date: Nov 14, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Order Up

If anything like this would have happened while I was working at an Italian restaurant, I don't think I would have ever left.  I'll take one Justin (or Josh because I love him) to go please.  Thank you!  LOL, hot shit mama.

Author's Response: AGH Thanks girly! This was TOTALLY inspired by my boring ass hostessing job haha. Justin speaking italian mmmm mmm boy haha. Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!

Verona Walters is your typical sweet average girl. She goes to college, has a job and is working towards her bachelor's. Her only problem? She has a guy on the brain that she constantly drools over and fantasizes about. Her latest obsession is heading over to where he works every night just to get a sneak peak of him. She knows she has it bad, but still keeps hope that maybe fate will be in her favor one day. So, what happens when that same guy she's crushing on unexpectedly return her feelings? Will she be able to deal with all the affection and attention coming her way or will she be too shocked and even scared to act on the hand that fate has dealt her?

Categories: Completed Het Stories
Characters: Justin Timberlake
Awards: None
Genres: Alternate Universe, Humor, Romance

Series: None
Chapters: 5
Wordcount: 21086 - Hits: 12958
Complete?: Yes - Published: Feb 15, 2008 - Last Updated: Feb 21, 2008 -
Reviewer: Keediluv Signed
Date: Apr 01, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: The Beginning

I'd never bring money again.  This story of yours popped up in the random story section and I thought, why the hell not?  It's good so far and I like that Verona and I have similar personality types.  On to chapter 2!

Ki

Reviewer: Keediluv Signed
Date: Apr 01, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: The End - Part 2

Honey, you're good at these little visual pick-me-ups.  I loved this as well.

Ki



Author's Response: Eeep! Yay! Thanks a bunch for liking. Appreicate it. :)

JC Chasez visual, another oldie.

Categories: Completed Het Stories
Characters: JC Chasez
Awards: None
Genres: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 2996 - Hits: 3394
Complete?: Yes - Published: Feb 28, 2008 - Last Updated: Feb 28, 2008 -
Reviewer: Keediluv Signed
Date: Apr 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Can't Get Enough of You

That was great!  I like forceful JC...him and that tounge of his...whew!  Nice job!

Ki

Verdant by Sox (NC-17) starstarstarstarstar [Comments - 612]
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I sat in front of a mirror finishing my makeup and felt a steady throbbing like the beating of a drum in my chest. I have never been so scared in my life, and I’ve been through a lot of shit.  After taking a deep breath I stood up and fixed my fishnet stockings before taking one last look in the mirror. I look like a slut. What am I doing?
 



Categories: In Progress Het Stories
Characters: Justin Timberlake
Awards: None
Genres: Drama

Series: None
Chapters: 50
Wordcount: 128396 - Hits: 198723
Complete?: Yes - Published: Apr 25, 2008 - Last Updated: Jun 03, 2009 -
Reviewer: Keediluv Signed
Date: Mar 01, 2009 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42

OMG!!! I don't even know where to start.  I started reading this story @ about 1am, got in a the first 15 chapters then went to bed.  I came home from work @ 6pm and I've been reading pretty much since.  I can't even tell you how good this story is.  It's like, so real life and you can lose that in the romance and wonder of fanfic.  This is probably one of the best stories I've read personally.  I have many more opinions on the characters and I'll tell you some of them...

Chloe: At first, I was put off by how she kept questioning herself but when I learned about her mom and her upbringing it made sense.  I just wish she learned to trust more because everyone needs a strong person to help them in their lives.

Justin: Loved the fact that he's willing to help take care of her...well, until the last few chapters.  I hope it'll work out though.

Brady: So flipping cute!!!

Amazing story, keep going...lol!

Ki



Author's Response: Thank you so much. I'm so glad you like it and I love to hear all your opinions so keep them coming :) Thanks a lot!

Reviewer: Keediluv Signed
Date: Mar 05, 2009 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43

I love how it's always just 'this or that.  Kudos to Chloe for blowing up the fucking spot!  I would have decked his ass in the eye for doing that to my son but it's Justin so you can't be mad at him for long.  Awesome update ma!

Ki



Author's Response: haha She's still mad, don't worry. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Keediluv Signed
Date: Mar 10, 2009 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44

Aww!  She should make his ass pay for the counseling he thinks she needs so badly.  I don't think it's a bad idea but he's not making things easier.  I'm wrapped up in this now lady!  Great, per usual.

Ki



Author's Response: Yes, he could make things easier, but i think it's kind of a test as well... he's playing those mind games haha thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Keediluv Signed
Date: Mar 24, 2009 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45

OMG!!! I don't even know what else to say.  If he gets Brady, I don't know what my girl will do.  She could seriously flip the fuck out.  Now, I'm really nervous.  See what you do to people with the awesomeness that is your writing?!  I'm too caught up.  Great update.

Ki



Author's Response: She would definitely need a mental hospital if she were to have brady taken away haha. Thanks for the review, and thanks for getting caught up! :)

Reviewer: Keediluv Signed
Date: Apr 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46

Ok, so completely happy that Brady is safe.  I wish Justin would have clipped Gabe's ass over the railing but one thing at a time I gues...lol!  It seems to me that Justin is coming around on the Chloe-relationship front???  Sorry, that's just me being hopeful.  Great update honey!

Ki



Author's Response: haha Justin should have thrown him over the railing.. damn lol I think you may be on to something with Justin and chloe's relationship... but we'll see. thanks for the review!

Set in New York City, Justin Timberlake and Amelia Domineck are the hottest couple in the Manhattan social scene, and their wedding is fast approaching Event of the Year status. Amelia, headstrong and domineering, is not just planning her wedding, she’s choreographing it and Justin seems to simply be along for the ride, as well as Amelia’s assistant Charlotte who after accepting the job wonders if slavery somehow became legal without her realizing it. A Lolita wedding planner, a flakey assistant, and one bridezilla converge together to bring Charlotte and Justin closer and Justin begins to wonder… is this really all that’s left for him? A ring and a promise of forever with Amelia, or does he dare to dream of something more?



Categories: Completed Het Stories
Characters: Justin Timberlake
Awards: Season 6
Genres: Angst, Drama, Romance

Series: None
Chapters: 45
Wordcount: 246846 - Hits: 232245
Complete?: Yes - Published: May 12, 2008 - Last Updated: Jan 30, 2011 -
Reviewer: Keediluv Signed
Date: Feb 01, 2009 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 18 pt 3

I can't say anything but how wonderful this story is.  I've been reading since 7pm and it's about 3:30am now.  I just couldn't stop.  Justin is amazingly punkish, which is different for me.  Amelia...the word bi*** doesn't even seem to fit, like it's so much more than that you know.  I really love this story! Great work!

Author's Response: WOW that's a marathon session there! Thanks for taking the time to go through and read everything. I'm glad you're enjoying and thanks for reading and reveiwing!!!

Reviewer: Keediluv Signed
Date: Feb 11, 2009 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 18 pt 4

Aww shit now!  This is the direction we need to be heading into.  Although some ppl may not agree with me, I think Justin should take his time to see how much he can grow out of comfort (because it's not love) with Amelia and in love with Charlie and himself.  Awesome update!

Author's Response: EEP I like the way you're thinking! He needs to see that there's more out there! He needs to open his friggin eyes! lol Glad you liked it Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!

Reviewer: Keediluv Signed
Date: Mar 05, 2009 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 19

OMG!!!  That shit was hot!  I know I wanted them to take their time but that slow torture shit was killing me.  YAY!! As far as Amelia goes...I would have kicked that 'ho' in her knees then proceeded to whip her ass.  It would be the shit if you made Charlotte this bad ass chick now.  She should put it on Justin now.  Okay, I'll stop.  Girl, you know I love you and this story!

Ki



Author's Response: Girl it was killin' ME too!!! I'm so glad you liked it and we'll see where it goes from here *excitedomg* Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!

Reviewer: Keediluv Signed
Date: Mar 25, 2009 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 20

You keep running, it's what you're good at!!!!  That line is the dopest I've read thus far!  That telling a mofo off all while being ladylike.  He really is a punk-ass for not saying something and being so caught up with Patti.  It's driving me crazy that he's so in denial but I hope he can get his stuff together soon before he loses that girl.  Awesome!

Ki

P.S-Have a wonderful trip and have fun!



Author's Response: I loved that line too! Its my fave of the section *bounce* Charlotte's got some spitfire in her and we're gonna be seeing more of that in the next sections. I'm glad you liked it, thanks for the well wishes and thanks for reading and reveiwing!!!

Reviewer: Keediluv Signed
Date: Dec 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 28

Can I just say that I LOVE PAUL!  Thank GOD for the man he's blessed enough to call dad huh?!  That's the kind of conversation that everyone needs once in a while you know?  

That love/non love scene was hard to read.  I never thought I'd say that but yeah...it was awkward, weird, uncomfortable yet had moments of sensuality and for a moment, you knew that he has love for her.  But she wouldn't be Amelia if she didn't complicate things with her boring, stationary self.  I don't understand how ANY grown woman in a relationship can go eight months without making love to someone who looks like Justin and then have the nerve to say she's doing it for him. WOW...there are no words.

I'm afraid of what's going to happen next....you're too good at this mama.  Awesome update...and thanks again, you made my day better :)

Ki 



Author's Response: YAY thanks girl! You made MY day better from this review! And Paul for the win in this chapter. I was really happy with how that scene turned out. The love/non love scene...I like writing those. Its a challenge. Like how do you write sex in an unsexy way? hahaha Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!