*NSYNC Fiction :: Keediluv

(Un)Tying the Knot by SomethingBlue42 (NC-17)

Set in New York City, Justin Timberlake and Amelia Domineck are the hottest couple in the Manhattan social scene, and their wedding is fast approaching Event of the Year status. Amelia, headstrong and domineering, is not just planning her wedding, she’s choreographing it and Justin seems to simply be along for the ride, as well as Amelia’s assistant Charlotte who after accepting the job wonders if slavery somehow became legal without her realizing it. A Lolita wedding planner, a flakey assistant, and one bridezilla converge together to bring Charlotte and Justin closer and Justin begins to wonder… is this really all that’s left for him? A ring and a promise of forever with Amelia, or does he dare to dream of something more?

Categories: Completed Het Stories
Characters: Justin Timberlake
Awards: Season 6
Genres: Angst, Drama, Romance

Series: None
Chapters: 45
Wordcount: 246846 - Hits: 232245
Complete?: Yes - Published: May 12, 2008 - Last Updated: Jan 30, 2011 -

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Reviewer: Keediluv Signed
Date: Apr 06, 2009 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 21

OMG!!! I so saw and didn't see that coming. I kinda figured all that passion and fire would erupt someday but I didn't expect it to happen after that arguement. That was so intense that it would make sense that they would but she also could have pushed his ass back. I wouldn't have either though. It would be something if this encounter gets her preggers!! You know it only takes ONE TIME!!! That's how my momma always put it :). Amelia's going to flip her fuckin wig when or if she finds out! Can't wait to see that happen. That was fuckin awesome!

Ki

Author's Response: BAHAHAHAHAHA It only takes ONE time!!! That killed me. I was actually kinda torn about having their first time be here because of the nature of their argument. Like it does kind of make Charlotte a doormat in a way but it kind of works along with this parallell between them. Like Justin is a doormat to Amelia and Charlotte is kind of turning into a doormat to him so they're these characters that are kind of painted into this box and the rest of the story is going to be them trying to break out of their respective boxes and how that effects their relationship with eachother, Justin's relationship with Amelia, and Charlotte's relationship with herself. Whoa that was kinda deep hahaha ANYWAY thanks for reading and reviewing!!!

Reviewer: Keediluv Signed
Date: Aug 06, 2009 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 24

I'm not sure how I feel about Charlotte being his 'side piece' while he fakes this relationship with the spawn of satan....I mean Amelia. The last couple chapters were awesome of course and I hope Charlotte finds her voice and tells both of them how she really feels.

Ki

Author's Response: Yeah Justin and Charlotte are entering some pretty dangerous territory. there's a lot of wrongness going on right now lol. I'm glad you've liked the last several chapters! They gave me such a hard time while writing them so its nice to hear that they don't totally suck hahaha Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!

Reviewer: Keediluv Signed
Date: Aug 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 25

I'm SO ready for him to be a GROWN ASS MAN and tell that BITCH that he can say whatever the FUCK he wants. You like how I capatilized all the curse words...I do. Hehehehehe! I feel bad for Charlotte but what she's doing to herself is not healthy. And poor Justin...maybe he'll get out of it. Not for Charlie but truly for himself. That shit can kill him.

It's like he's the cheese and Roxie's the grater...shredding the hell outta him.

P.S-Can Amelia have a family member or another friend who's disgustingly rich and completely down to earth? Not afraid to cut her down like she does so many others? Just a happy thought. Awesome update hon!

Author's Response: YES!!! Curse words need to be capitalized especially so Amelia can hear you loud and clear lol! I REALLY like your cheese grater analogy. shredding the hell outta him SLOWLY piece by piece. It works really well! I'm glad you liked it! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!

Reviewer: Keediluv Signed
Date: Sep 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 26

Sounds like someone is starting to lose themselves in the wonderfully weird world of Justin Timberlake. That happens alot when we're in (love) or infatuation with someone...trust me. Started acting all kinds of different with my first bf. I think it may be time for a visit from her mom and dad. Nothing like family to pull your head out of your ass...! LOL! Love the update, hun:)

Ki

Author's Response: YES UGH! I've been kinda in this situation with a guy myself just recently and while it didn't end up the way I would have hoped its given me some pretty good fuel for this story as far as emotion goes. Yeah Charlie needs a nice kick in the ass lol Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!

Reviewer: Keediluv Signed
Date: Oct 31, 2009 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 27

I don't know what I'm going to do with them. He pulls her in then bam...let's her go again. It's really amazing what love does to people. It's like Justin doesn't know the difference between loving someone (Amelia) and being in love with someone (Charlie). I'm ready for someone to have an intervention with shaking involved. Just to see if something clicks and one of them comes to their senses.

Awesome update...loved it!

Ki

P.S- Thanks for showing the softer side of Amelia...if only for a moment. LOL!

Author's Response: YES I love your thoughts on the whole situation. Its exactly what I'm trying to portray! I'm glad you appreciated seeing Amelia's more huma side. As I was writing it I wondered if anyone would feel bad for her at all. Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!

Reviewer: Keediluv Signed
Date: Aug 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 29

Love Justin grandpa! Gotta love that no nonsense authority figure in your life. I just hope Justin takes heed.

Author's Response: Guh I KNOW!!! i'd never written Justin's grandfather before and it was a really interesting dynamic. Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!

Reviewer: Keediluv Signed
Date: Aug 22, 2010 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 30 pt 1

I don't know what to say...he's an idiot!

Author's Response: Not much else to say *smacks him* lol Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!

Reviewer: Keediluv Signed
Date: Aug 22, 2010 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 30 pt 2

I hope she lets him treat her the way she deserves....if she can get over the idiot that is. Sad bunch I swear!

Author's Response: Guh I knooow that's exactly what Justin needs; a nice kick in the nuts to realize she's perfect for him. *sigh* Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!

Reviewer: Keediluv Signed
Date: Aug 22, 2010 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 31

WTF does Trace expect? If that asshole hasn't figured out that the girl loves him and he loves her, there's no hope. And I don't want her with someone who won't realize what the fuck he has in front of him. That is all. :)

Author's Response: You know you're the first person to express feeling like Trace was asking too much of Charlotte here. I'm kind of surprised more people didnt have that reaction. Thanks for reading and revieiwng!!!

Reviewer: Keediluv Signed
Date: Aug 22, 2010 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 32

He's the ultimate idiot! I know I keep saying that but really, it gets to the point where it's like; if you want to be miserable, then be miserable! Just don't expect the people who love you to stand around and watch you kill yourself. Just because you've chosen this road, doesn't mean I have to ride down that raggedy bitch with you. I'd be out as fast as Charlie was. Poor thing! I hope at this point, she moves the fuck on and gets with someone who will appreciate the love she's willing to give. Fuck Justin...he can suck it! Okay sorry about that. Your awesomeness have me up @ 4 in the am wishing ill on a fictional version of a good dude. I'm going to bed. :)

Amazing shit honey!

Author's Response: Justin is pretty much the biggest moron ever in this story. I love him but he just can't make a decent decision to save his life lol Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!

Reviewer: Keediluv Signed
Date: Nov 08, 2010 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 33

I thought I'd feel relieved that he finally grew a pair but I'm so over them (he and Amelia) that I don't care what they do. I do hope that Charlotte finds someone else because her and Justin together would highly disappoint me. She deserves better than someone who doesn't even love himself.

You are brilliant! :)

Author's Response: Awww thanks girl! I feel your disgust and all I'm gonna say is the next two chapters are gonna be tricky for me but hopefully they satisfy you guys. Socloseomg haha Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!

Reviewer: Keediluv Signed
Date: Jan 01, 2011 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 34

Ginger is flippin awesome and it sounds like her mom and my mom have been having conversations. I think Charlotte did the right thing. If she would have taken him back then, she would be more concerned with fixing his heart and not her own. What sense does it make to be in a relationship of any sort that would eventually make you resent the other person? She needs to take the time to heal herself before even giving the notion of a Charlotte and Justin a second thought. Two broken people being together just leads to bitterness.

And again, I'm sitting here thinking of them as a real couple and not something written from your wonderful imagination. This should be a book mama!

Happy New Year love :)!

Author's Response: Yeah I kind of love Ginger. She's dumb as a post yet strangely insightful haha. It was really important to me that Charlotte got to stand up for herself before the story ended. It kind of didn't work to well with Amelia but it HAD to happen with Justin. After all she's been through she deserved some respect. I'm glad you enjoyed it girl! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!

Bar - tender Loving by d_simplicity (R) [Comments - 35]

At a certain point, we all need some tender loving. Now, mix that up with the perfect definition of ‘sexy' wrapped in the package of a young server who specializes in whipping up your favorite drink, giving you the perfect concoction of something lethal yet addicting and intoxicating. For Angela, that's her poison. Only, it's not so much a drink but rather the person who serves up these delicious delights.

"I can believe you don't have a man presently, but I won't believe that you don't want one." Pausing, his blues latch onto my browns and he smiles slyly. "I'll tell you what I think though. I think that you just haven't gotten the man you want yet...or maybe..." Drifting again, his smile widens. "He just doesn't know that you indeed want him so he can make the first move." Damn, he knows me so well...

Categories: Completed Het Stories
Characters: Justin Timberlake
Awards: None
Genres: Alternate Universe, Humor, Romance

Series: None
Chapters: 3
Wordcount: 19290 - Hits: 9740
Complete?: Yes - Published: Jul 19, 2008 - Last Updated: Jul 22, 2008 -

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Reviewer: Keediluv Signed
Date: Mar 30, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Night Two, Three, Four, Five...

AHHHHHHHHH! They kissed...yay! That was too damn cute...okay, on to chapter 3 for me!

Ki

Author's Response: Aw yeah that kiss *sigh* I miss those two...lol

Reviewer: Keediluv Signed
Date: Mar 30, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Night...Uh...??...

Aww girl! This is just too stinking cute! The sex was so hot! I've had sex like that before...hehehe. I hope you write a companion piece to this if you haven't already?? I'm going to look now, but this was a good read.

Ki

Author's Response: OMG gurl thanks for reading this little short and liking it. :-) I know I wanted to make a part two with them but never got the round to with all my updates I'm trying to get out. Still never know, But I doubt I'll attempt anything now. But thanks so much for commenting and letting me know you enjoyed it. :) hehehe.

Do Over by Timberlake (NC-17) [Comments - 551]

There was a penniless, wallet less, white boy in my house in the middle of North Philly with cuts and bruises and memory loss and all I had was a pocket knife, three bandages, and a cat to protect me. UPDATED 9/21

Categories: In Progress Het Stories
Characters: Justin Timberlake
Awards: Season 4, Season 5, Season 6
Genres: Drama, Romance

Series: None
Chapters: 44
Wordcount: 253097 - Hits: 202127
Complete?: No - Published: Aug 30, 2008 - Last Updated: Sep 21, 2010 -

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Reviewer: Keediluv Signed
Date: Oct 17, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Snow

I know how much you don't like doing chapters like this but you did an outstanding job. Great as usual!