Penname: Keediluv [Contact] Real name: Kijuana
Member Since: Apr 19, 2007
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All I Wanna Do... by MissM (NC-17) starstarstar [Comments - 292]
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Corporate drone Serena Willis is living an existence that seems just fine, until she meets a celebrity on a flight to LA. Not just any celebrity, but one she's been dreaming about meeting for a long time. Trapped together as they fly to LA, they begin to talk and sparks fly. Serena takes a chance, and they hit it off. But will this be just a weekend fling, or is this more than they bargained for?



Categories: Completed Het Stories
Characters: JC Chasez
Awards: Season 5, Season 6, Season 8
Genres: Romance

Series: None
Chapters: 70
Wordcount: 557241 - Hits: 396577
Complete?: Yes - Published: Jan 29, 2009 - Last Updated: Feb 22, 2011 -
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Reviewer: Keediluv Signed
Date: Mar 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

What can I say?  You already know how much I love the story.  It's so grown up...if that makes sense. It doesn't get lost in the whimsical and I love that it's so real.  I think that Serena and JC have a really good thing going and I hope they keep it up.  Update soon..... Amazing!

Ki

Reviewer: Keediluv Signed
Date: Mar 28, 2009 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

She admitted it, like for real this time!  I hope that this is just the beginning of her opening up.  And I'm so proud of him!  He didn't open up like that before and I think this new direction is so sweet.  Great update honey!

Ki



Author's Response: \\o/ It's so great when something just .. happens... you don't plan for it or mean for it to happen, it just comes out. I worked hard at this chapter but the end part just came out. I think every relationship has these little hurdles that you jump and you hope you jump them together, but sometimes not. They each have their own individual things to work out-- but there are hurdles now that they can jump together and hopefully that's comforting and gives the relationship some strength.

Untitled For Now by Melon (NC-17) [Comments - 9]
Justin has planned a very lovely evening out with his leading lady for Valentine's Day, but the occasion is ruined when racial slurs fly from a very obnoxious waiter.

Categories: In Progress Slash Stories
Characters: Justin Timberlake
Awards: None
Genres: Angst

Series: None
Chapters: 3
Wordcount: 7315 - Hits: 5275
Complete?: No - Published: Feb 11, 2009 - Last Updated: May 09, 2010 -
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Reviewer: Keediluv Signed
Date: Feb 11, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I really liked this story.  Seeing that I've been through a very similar situation but I was by myself and the lady wasn't even worth the time.  Good look for putting a taboo issue out there.

Author's Response:

Thanks for reading. I think everyone goes through it at least once in their lifetime in some way, although it is a shame. This story itself is inspired by one of my mom's experiences.

A-List(ed) by d_simplicity (R) [Comments - 116]
“I just stepped foot out of an interview for an assistant job to the chief editor of A-List Magazine. And, I stepped out claiming the job as my own. I’m now officially employed as the assistant to editor in chief of A-List magazine where they set the bar of what’s in, what’s out, what’s hot and what’s not…

It’s no surprise that the editor in chief is Randall’s son Justin Timberlake who along with his half brother Robert Pattinson Timberlake are the heirs to the A-List Fashion Empire…

Gosh what was I thinking? Someone like me from a middle class home never makes it onto the A-List. Who was I kidding? I’m doomed to be one of those ‘Z-List’ people for the rest of my life. This sure is going to be an experience…”



Categories: Completed Het Stories
Characters: Justin Timberlake
Awards: Season 5
Genres: Alternate Universe, Angst, Drama, Romance

Series: None
Chapters: 24
Wordcount: 124104 - Hits: 74311
Complete?: Yes - Published: Feb 19, 2009 - Last Updated: May 12, 2009 -
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Reviewer: Keediluv Signed
Date: Mar 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter Fifteen - Part 2

OK!  So I got through every updated chapter and i'm LOVING IT!!!  I can now add you to the growing list of lovable authors I'm currently reading.  Not that you weren't fabolous before...I'm just now learning of your awesomeness...sorry.  I love Ugly Betty and that the show was an inspiration for the story.  I think Tai is wonderful, and smart with her decision to want to take things slow.  Sean is absolutely fierce!  Justin and Robert are of course gorgeous in all of their flawed ways and Randall needs his ass handed to him.  I can't wait for the day they read him the riot act.  Try to break down those walls he has up.  They are his sons after all.

Whew, that was alot said.  Amazing story lady!

Ki



Author's Response: Aw yay! A new reader! hehehe. Aw, I'm touched that you think I'm that cool of an author since it has such great authors doing this way longer than I have. But I'm happy that you're loving this story because it's definitely a change of pace for me and I wanted to do something different for a change. I love Ugly betty too! So yeah, it was the biggest inspiration to get this story off the ground. :) And, I have a friend who breathes fashion so, between him and the show, this one came easily for me to do. lol. Glad you're loving all of the characters and the drama with the boys and their dad hehe and there're not that many updates left to go, but I hope you enjoy the rest just as much. Thanks for commenting and letting me know. :-D

Reviewer: Keediluv Signed
Date: Mar 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter Sixteen

Ok, that was awesome.  I've been happy, shocked, sad, excited, angry (only slightly), and giddy all in one chapter!  I love, love, loved the press conference.  Loved even more that his mommy came because we all need some mommy time (or grandma, aunt, close older woman figure) every once in a while.  I hope he can embrace his new little sibling and make up with his mom.  As for Randall....I'll accept whatever you present with that situation, lol!  Awesome update ma!

Ki



Author's Response: Yay! So many emotions...that's great! :) I'm glad you can connect to the characters. They sure are a colorful bunch huh? hehe. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for letting me know. More is on the way... :)

Reviewer: Keediluv Signed
Date: Mar 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter Seventeen - Part 1

Hell yeah!  There's ALWAYS time for round two!  Good update but now I'm just wanting the other parts.  I'll try and be patient, but it won't be easy.  Great per usual ma!

Ki



Author's Response: Woop! Yea, with JT there's always time. hehehe. I"m so happy you liked this update. Aw, I'm working on the other parts promise. Thanks for commenting. I'll update as soon as I can. :)

Reviewer: Keediluv Signed
Date: Mar 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter Seventeen - Part 2

Aww, Robert can't handle his liquor?  This was a cute chapter and I love that she's now thinking about love and marriage with him.  I hope they get a chance to have a little more fun before they leave.  Great update ma...now on to part 3?  Let me stop.

Ki



Author's Response: Rob had way too much to drink only proving Justin's point. hehehe. But it was fun to write. And yeah, Rob put the thought of settling down with Justin in Tai's head. *sigh* we'll see how it all turns out. Thanks for the feedback. Part 3 is coming soon. :)

Reviewer: Keediluv Signed
Date: Mar 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter Seventeen - Part 3

Hell yeah!  I don't know how you can say no to him either...being all cute and stuff.  This was a great update honey!  I love how she's taking care of her man and I hope everything works out when they get back to NY.  As for Nella...I don't know about the whole accident thing.  She doesn't want the baby so my mind went another direction but I hope I'm wrong.  And what is Randall up to?  See, I need you to update again so I can know what's going on!  Great update!

Ki



Author's Response: I don't know how anyone can say no to Justin, the man has some unnatrual power. lol. Thanks for commenting. Oh the whole shebang is coming soon lol. You all will see what happens with everyone. Three more updates to go! :)

Reviewer: Keediluv Signed
Date: Apr 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter Eighteen

OMG SON!!!  That shit was HEAVY MAN!!!  First Nella's crazy antics, then Robert trying to kill his dad and Randall's secret heart condition?!  This is just too much!  I don't know how I feel about Randall maybe not making it...I guess I feel like Tai on this one.  He really doesn't give anyone a reason to care.  I feel for Justin and Robert though so for their sake, I hope he pulls through.  If only for them to make peace before he dies.  Awesome, totally unexpected update!

Ki



Author's Response: Aw yeah, I've been deleting and re-writing this update trying to get everything out there and solved so everyone is finally able to understand what was really going on. I'm glad I finally completed it. The remaining updates should conclude everything. Thanks a bunch for reading and commenting girl I appreicate knowing what you guys think. I agree, there isn't much about Randall that needs saving but at least Tai sees how important Justin and Rob's dad is still to them despite everything. Thanks! :)

Reviewer: Keediluv Signed
Date: May 03, 2009 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter Nineteen

Awesome update!  I'm glad you explained what happened to Randall and I'm also happy that Justin is taking the stance he is.  Everything can't always be peachy keen you know?  Very realistic shit woman!  And I DO NOT blame Justin for snatching up Tai.  She knows she wanted it!  Awesome per usual lady!

Ki



Author's Response: Ki hey girl! Thanks for reading and I'm glad you liked the update. Means a lot. Well you know, Randall didn't die, but I'm pretty sure it would have been unrealistic if everything was wonderful after like a month compared to what he put his sons through their entire lives. Plus, Justin's a strong guy, he wasn't going to break that easily. It is kind of sad how things turned out with their dad, but that's life (in fiction land...lol) and I'm glad you were able to relate to them. We'll see how it all ends and what will come of our A-List men. Oh and you know I had to put in a little office scene before it was over..hehe. :) Thanks again.

Reviewer: Keediluv Signed
Date: May 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter Twenty

WOW!  I can't believe it's all over!  It couldn't have ended better but I am kinda sad we didn't get to 'see' her in the fashion show.  You did such an awesome job with this story honey and it truly was a pleasure to read!  Awesome job hon!

Ki

P.S-How gorgeous is that little girl?!  Beautiful!  And is it just me or did she actually look like she could have been theirs?! 

 

 



Author's Response:

I know! What I'm shocked about is the fact that I finished it in like three months flat. That's a record for me. Because I have longs that are like two years old that aren't done yet. The inspiration for this one just kept flowing to the end and I'm so happy that I was able to complete it. I know...I thought about making Tai do the fashion show, but I didn't want to stretch things out too much. I made her do one close to the beginning of the story so I was like, at least I gave you all that experience. :) And thank you so much for thinking this story was great. I am happy for the most part with how it turned out. I thought about putting a few more twists and making it longer but I realised that I didn't really want it to be long and drawn out. :)

And omg! Their little girl Bella, I choose that pic specifically because I had the same thoughts that her features made her look like she could really be Tai and Justin's. She has the blue eyes and everything! :) It's cool that you noticed it too. Thanks again Ki for reading and loving this one!

Stole My Cool by Ashley (R) [Comments - 123]
Past Featured Story She had him at hello... He had her at goodbye.

Categories: Completed Het Stories
Characters: Justin Timberlake
Awards: None
Genres: Drama, Romance

Series: None
Chapters: 15
Wordcount: 69195 - Hits: 48018
Complete?: Yes - Published: Mar 06, 2009 - Last Updated: Feb 21, 2010 -
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Reviewer: Keediluv Signed
Date: Mar 10, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Don't Think I Need To Tell You More

Ooh wee!  This is a great start you got going lady!  Persistent Justin is ALWAYS a plus.  I also like the fact that she isn't even fazed by his apparent stardom.  I'll keep reading, you keep writing.  Awesome!

Ki



Author's Response: Thank you SO much, girl! I\'ve never done a persistent!Justin, but I\'m definitely enjoying it. He\'s fun to write lol. And yeah, I like that about Kerry too -- probably because I wish I was that way lmao. But really, I thank you so much for your review, Ki! I will most certainly keep writing.

Reviewer: Keediluv Signed
Date: Mar 11, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Sip It Slow, 'Cause It's So Nice

Ok so, the breakfast was sweet and endearing and I loved every minute of it.  Now....

WHAT THE FUCK!!!  How dare that selfish SOB!  I know it's bad to always resort to violence but she honestly should have picked up the first heavy object she saw and sent that shit sailing towards his head.  I hope he gets his!

I'm amazed that you did this absoultely wonderful chapter from your blackberry.  Great update.

Ki

Heaven Can Wait by treasure (NC-17) [Comments - 28]

Justin Timberlake’s goal was to steal the heart of long time friend Beyoncé Knowles.  After doing so life couldn’t get any better in his eyes, but living in a world where nothing good ever lasts and your privacy is a rare commodity can wear and tear at any strong foundation.  Not allowing drama to destroy what God put together Justin and Beyoncé come out stronger then ever and ready to take a huge step in their relationship. With their story book ending an arms length away Justin is devastated to learn his biggest nightmare could very well be his reality, and finds him self asking can heaven wait?

 



Categories: In Progress Het Stories
Characters: Justin Timberlake
Awards: None
Genres: Alternate Universe, Angst, Celebrity/Celebrity, Drama, Humor, Romance

Series: None
Chapters: 8
Wordcount: 43073 - Hits: 18272
Complete?: No - Published: Mar 29, 2009 - Last Updated: Jul 29, 2009 -
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Reviewer: Keediluv Signed
Date: Mar 30, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Characters

Seems very interesting so far... I wanna read!  Looking forward to more lady.

Ki



Author's Response: Thanks chica!

Reviewer: Keediluv Signed
Date: Mar 30, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 01 – The Ellen DeGeneres Show

Aww that was good!  I personally think Justin and Beyonce would be a beautiful couple and I like how open you have Justin being about the relationship because if that was to EVER happen, I don't think he or she would be that willing to put it out there.  Good first chapter!  Now...update :)!

Ki



Author's Response: You're completely right about him being so open. I figured I should make on of them more open then the other since Beyonce is known for keeping a tight lip I decided to make Justin the open book.  Thank you so much for taking the time to read chica!