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By My Side by Bobbilynn (NC-17) starstarstarstarstar [Comments - 183] New!
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She expected nothing.  Life was always the same repetitive process daily, even with the job she had.  Suddenly, her life is turned upside by one little plan that she knows will leave her flat on her face.  So, why did she agree to it?



Categories: Completed Het Stories, In Progress Het Stories
Characters: JC Chasez
Awards: None
Genres: Drama, General, Humor, Romance

Series: None
Chapters: 46
Wordcount: 147131 - Hits: 147699
Complete?: Yes - Published: Aug 13, 2007 - Last Updated: Apr 06, 2024 -
Reviewer: Jorie611 Signed
Date: Aug 13, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Meet the Characters

Nice work so far! I appreciated the photos of the characters and they look really cool too. As for the intro, I love how you described Lily and all her sisters. Can't wait to see where this goes.


Author's Response: Thank you =]  It just hit me suddenly today and I felt the need to write it before I forgot about it.  I hope you like the twist that is coming =]

Reviewer: Jorie611 Signed
Date: Aug 16, 2007 Title: Chapter 6: Part Four

I love it! I really like the twists and turns this story has already taken in it's few opening chapters. I can't wait to see how their real mariage will work out. Good job!

Reviewer: Jorie611 Signed
Date: Aug 21, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Meet the Characters

I've caught up and read all the updates and I just love this story!! I love the way you write it and the way you make JC and Lily interact. I can't wait to see what happens once they get off that plane.


Author's Response: Aww, thank you!  :)  I hope you like what I have planned then!  :]

Reviewer: Jorie611 Signed
Date: Aug 22, 2007 Title: Chapter 12: Part Ten

Not a nice way to leave us in suspense. I want that boat ride now! haha. Great job as always!

Reviewer: Jorie611 Signed
Date: Nov 14, 2007 Title: Chapter 21: Part Eighteen

Great job!! I really loved this chapter! I love how you made up the screennames and still had them communicating via the computer/webcam. It was super cute and sweet. Can't wait for an update!! :)

Reviewer: Jorie611 Signed
Date: Dec 05, 2007 Title: Chapter 31: Part Twenty Seven

aww. I like the whole J, K, L thing for the name. It's a cute idea.

Well looking at meanings for Kira, I find it more suitable. It is Gaelic meaning "dark, dark lady" *could refer to her hair), Japanese meaning "gliiter" or "twinkle", Persian meaning "sun", and Latin meaning "light".

haha. I'm sure you can google the name for more info, if you wish. I totally vote for Kira!!!

Great chapter, great story, and glad the baby is born!



Author's Response: Yeah, that's the whole reason Kira is a choice, haha.  I liked Kaley though, but we'll see which one ends up in the next chapter!  =]

Reviewer: Jorie611 Signed
Date: Dec 06, 2007 Title: Chapter 32: Part Twenty Eight

Yay! I'm glad you picked Kira.

I really liked the "articles" at the beginning and end of the chapter. They're a nice touch. 

Reviewer: Jorie611 Signed
Date: Mar 16, 2008 Title: Chapter 35: Part Thirty One

Glad to see an update. I love this story! This chapter was so cute, especially the last part when JC and Lily were alone. I'm anxious to see what happens next for the new little family. :)

He was the music industry's reigning Pop King.
She was the highest demanded lyricist and producer.
Together, they were a powerhouse musical team that was unstoppable.
The Bonnie and Clyde that took over the world.
He was rugged, charming and handsome.
She was unique, quirky and beautiful.
They were also Hollywood's favorite 'it' couple.
*
He had become the center of a crazed obsession.
She had become caught in the middle of it.
Suddenly, they weren't so unstoppable.
The infamous Bonnie and Clyde had suddenly lost all power.
He was the target.
She was the helpless victim.
They were suddenly captured.



Categories: In Progress Het Stories
Characters: Justin Timberlake
Awards: None
Genres: Action/Adventure, Angst, Drama, Horror, Mystery, Romance, Suspense

Series: None
Chapters: 9
Wordcount: 27530 - Hits: 18157
Complete?: No - Published: Sep 09, 2007 - Last Updated: Feb 26, 2009 -
Reviewer: Jorie611 Signed
Date: Sep 09, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: September 12

Hey Bobbi,

I heard you might want a co-writer for yur new story. I'd be interested. I guess it depends on what you have in mind and the storyline. But I love your work and have written myself, so I think we could make a good team!

 ~Jorie

When Ellie moved in across the street from JC she brought along a lot of baggage, and not just in the literal sense; but, even still, that aura of "realness" he got from her made it impossible to stay away.  

Categories: In Progress Het Stories
Characters: JC Chasez
Awards: None
Genres: Romance

Series: None
Chapters: 27
Wordcount: 98981 - Hits: 70223
Complete?: No - Published: Mar 09, 2008 - Last Updated: Jan 03, 2015 -
Reviewer: Jorie611 Signed
Date: Apr 17, 2008 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8

I love this story! It's exciting to watch JC and Ellie's relationship develop and change.

It's been like 2 and half weeks without an update and some of us, especially from the JJB board are very eager for an update! If you could please write up the next chapter or at least give us a time frame for na update! Thanks! :)



Author's Response: Life has been distracting me from my fan fiction the past few weeks.  I promise I will get my butt in gear and try to update soon!  I'm actually opening the Word document right now to see where I last left off....  ;) 

Audrina Littrell is a sensation.  A singing, writing, producing sensation.  After selling nearly 92 million copies of three albums in four years, her career is put on hold when a congenital defect that had stricken her brother in the years prior suddenly reared its head in her life.  After taking time off to take care of herself, she's back with a new album, a new view on life and a new, old problem that she is afraid to face alone.

Categories: In Progress Het Stories
Characters: JC Chasez
Awards: None
Genres: Alternate Universe, Angst, Drama, General, Romance

Series: None
Chapters: 36
Wordcount: 156448 - Hits: 93616
Complete?: Yes - Published: Mar 17, 2008 - Last Updated: Aug 14, 2008 -
Reviewer: Jorie611 Signed
Date: Mar 19, 2008 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4

Thanks so much for quick updates! I didn't expect Audrina to go into the hospital so soon, but now I can see why you have written it as such. Thanks for the good insight into JC and Drina's relationship. I can't wait to see what will happen next!

Author's Response: When I was writing it, I didn't see myself putting her in the hospital so early, but it happened that way, I guess, hahaha.  Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Jorie611 Signed
Date: Mar 18, 2008 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Gah..two chapters in and I'm already in love with this story! The Diary..parts are a lovely touch and I like how you wrote everything in a way that I can imagine it all in my head. Very cool! Can't wait for more...very interesting so far.


Author's Response: Hehehe, well thank you!  I'm glad you liked it!  <3

Reviewer: Jorie611 Signed
Date: Mar 20, 2008 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5

Aww..the end of this chapter is so cute with JC and Drina's banter with his lyrics. I loved it!

Can I just say...it's sad when I get to the end of a chapter, cause I just want more,more, and more.



Author's Response: lol it's not sad, trust me!  There are a few stories on here I do the same thing with hahahaha and thank you!

Reviewer: Jorie611 Signed
Date: Aug 15, 2008 Title: Chapter 34: (The Actual) Epilogue

*sigh* I've enjoyed this story from day one and now having finished reading it all, it's bittersweet. I'm so glad the story ended the way it did. JC and Audrina were meant for each other. Thank you for also giving them the family we knew they deserved. I really loved the portrayal of all of your characters in this story. It will be sad to not have anymore updates to get excited over, but I am very happy that you're providing us with more BMS and other stories in the works. I look forward to that.

Save Me From Myself is definitely one of my fave fanfic stories ever! Most definitely in my top 5-10, lol! Once again, you did an amazing job on it and I loved every chapter. Congrats on a job well done. Good luck with your future works. ;]

Reviewer: Jorie611 Signed
Date: Mar 21, 2008 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6

I read this chapter when you first posted it and I LOVED IT! I read this chapter again when you added the rest and I STILL LOVED IT! :]

Author's Response: Hahaha thanks!  Both times!