Categories: In Progress Het Stories
Characters: Justin Timberlake
Awards: None
Genres: Drama, Humor
Series: None
Chapters: 7
Wordcount: 32907 - Hits: 16855
Complete?: No - Published: Apr 08, 2007 - Last Updated: Jan 12, 2008 -
Milla here. I already left you a review so you know how i feel about this story. Again, I'm not a Jules fan! Lol. That hypocrite. Update soon.
Author's Response: Yep, you were my first review, which helped me to stop freaking out about the story. haha Jules does suck...maybe she\'ll suck a little less as the story progresses. *shrugs* Who knows, maybe not even then. lol Thanks for the review! I\'ll try to update relatively soon. No guarantees unfortunately.
Reading this chap made me imagine you. I could honestly see you in class blanking out from absolute boredom and on conversation that you could care less about. You and your character have a lot in common too. I could imagine you acting the same way if you were in that same situation. Poor...what is the girl's name lol? I guess I'll find that out late right? She ought to cut Jules...anyway on to the next chapter. If you don't get the second review that means I went to sleep lol. Loved it :)
Author's Response: Yeah, she is a little like me. All my main female characters usually wind up being at least a little like me. I\'m not sure all the things she\'ll wind up doing , but probably won\'t wind up being something that I\'d do. Yeah, Jules...smh...she knows she was wrong for that.
I wonder why I could remember this chapter very well but not the others. I clearly remember discussing this over Aim and thinking why is Cameron not listening to his confession! It's like she was purposely ignoring him as if she didn't respond it would make it less true. I missed the female character in this chapter a little. Oh Justin's character is brutally honest that I almost felt for Cam, notice I said almost lol. I have no words about Jules. I don't really care for her ass. How are you going to think about your bestfriend's feeling after you boned her fantasy husband. But anyway I wonder what's in store for these characters.
Author's Response: That\'s exactly what Cameron was doing. It\'s her way of dealing, but not immediately dealing at all. So no love for Cameron or Jules? lol Well can\'t really say I blame you on that. lol I wonder what\'s in store for them too, lol, I\'d definitely update a lot faster if I knew. lol Thanks for reading/reviewing!
Wow...um...that was kinda harsh Mister. But I can see that he wasn't in the right mindset to talk and actually be nice to her...especially after the information Cam just delivered. But for some reason I still don't feel sorry for Jules. Is that mean?
Author's Response: I don\'t think that\'s mean. I\'m not sure if you should feel sorry for her necessarily. It\'s probably bad that I haven\'t made my mind up about her. lol
I just want to say that I absolute love "A House is not a Home" my favorite part is:
Are you gonna be, say you're gonna be
Are you gonna be, say you're gonna be
Are you gonna be, say you're gonna be
I was singing along right with Justin. Ok back to the story. Oh Mr. Chris sounds like a handsome fella might I add. Aww her mother died?? That's so sad. Somehow I don't think Jules apology was sincere. And when is the BFF and Justin going to meet? And what is the BFF's name? Milla said Renee is that right?
Author's Response: You don\'t think Jules was sincere? Hmm, I can\'t remember what she was apologizing for right now. The lost jewelry or the Justin thing. But I think on either one, she was being sincere, because she does feel bad, but then if you possibly continue to do/want to do what you\'re apologizing for, I guess that would be reason to wonder about her sincerity. lol When are they going to meet, lol, that\'s what everybody wants to know and that\'s what the beginning of chapter five alludes to. So my answer is soon. lol About the name thing, yes, that\'s her name, but it hasn\'t been said in the story. Because I wanted it go with the title, and I asked someone, can\'t remember who, if that would be annoying to hold that back until the end, and I think they said yes, but as you can see, I\'ve done it anyways. lol smh.
[i]Took me a few more times of playing the fool before I found my balls again and gathering them up, literally--I actually held them as I said to her, "This isn't going to happen anymore. So whatever you've done to give your pussy that voodoo magic--kudos-- but it wasn't going down like that anymore, because I'm a man dammit. And a man's gotta have balls."[/i]
That part of the chapter was classic lol, even though he hadn't actually said it to her with that wording. Um...wtf is going with Justin's perspective on his relationship with Cameron and Jules. He made all of that fuss earlier and now that they are having pretend sex he's bitching.
I'm waiting for him and the female character to meet. I wonder how that'll go down.
I enjoyed the chapter immensely. Kinda, hate Chris, but I don't really know why. Maybe because he just stood there and hadn't said a damn thing, which made her look like an even bigger fool. This mystery guy sounds intriguing, who is he? Of course, it isn't Justin because she would have fainted lol.
Good job Ange!!!
Author's Response: haha, glad you liked it. And it was meant to be that he did actually say those words to her. I guess Justin in a nutshell is someone who can\'t just be happy. Because he was for a good while happy with Cameron, then he slipped up with Jules and ever since then he couldn\'t figure out how to make it right. And sometimes he thought he didn\'t even want to, but suddenly when she tells about her secret and then proceeds to dump him, he doesn\'t know how to take it, because that\'s not how it works for him usually. So she started to look good to him again, then the not-a-relationship relationship thing happened, then break-up sex happened and hence his bitching. Does that make sense? I hope it does. lol\r\nHe\'s going to meet her! I keep re-writing that chapter, and it\'s driving me crazy, but it\'s going to happen. lol\r\nYou hate Chris? Well, the main reason he did that to her is because of what she said during the other chapter and then when she proceeded to completely ignore him, which wouldn\'t make him all that happy with her. lol\r\nThanks for the review, Kah!
I don't think I was that confused even though in generally I'm usually confused anyway lol. Um...that was a good chapter Ange. Justin confuses me, but I think he confuses himself even more. Where did he come up with the bright idea to propose to Cameron? I don't think he even thought it through really. I didn't really hate Jules in this chapter so that is a plus lol. I kind of like the relationship between Chris and the narrator in this chapter, it was funny and playful, but maybe they are better just as friends instead. It was nice of her to pick him up from Jail, why was he that wasted in the first place though lmao. Frankie is probably the smartest character in this story thus far lol. Can't wait until the narrator and Justin meet!! Do you have that scene planned already?
Author's Response: lol Not really hating her is almost like liking her. Maybe next chapter she\'ll be likeable? Or not, who knows. lol why was he that wasted in the first place though lmao. Does a college student really need a reason to get drunk? lol I don\'t have it planned. I did, but I\'ve changed it. I liked it the old way, but the one person I let read it wasn\'t that fond of it, so hence the changing. That scene is going kill me.
Milla here. Ok so yeah...I'm feeling this. That line "Well excuse me bitch!" sounds like it came straight from my mouth, lol. But let me say this...Vanessa scares me. Devil in disguise? What kind of drama is about to unfold? And can she get any bitchier! I mean damn, give the man a break, lol. Anyhoo, update soon Lynn!
Author's Response: LMAO, You\'ll love her in the end, i guarantee it. Justin and Vanessa are very similar and so they collide. I can\'t wait to see what unfolds...lol and i\'m the writer! Update will be soon!
This line was so funnny:
"Miss. Alba was blowing up my phone like I smacked her mama."
LMAO.
Anyway enough laughing. That was so sad Mari. The shit is about to hit the fan when Tee finishes revealing that information. Oh my I hope Nicole can forgive her! They have so many years of friendship. And Justin and Tee are just miserable as ever. I hope after Tee starts loving herself she can truly love Justin.
I can't believe she finally said it! And just to think if she had said that awhile ago when she knew she felt it, we could have avoided all this trouble. Tee was really fucked up in the head to say the least. I don't know what she thought she was gaining, but anyway...poor Nicole. Nicole was like the greatest, she didn't live her life as lie like her best friend...damn you think you know people right? I wonder if their relationship will ever be the same. Damn Tee has a lot of work to do, to get back the people she loves. I hope Justin doesn't take her back to quickly she needs to work to get him back, especially the way she just stomped on his heart most of the time. Anyhoo, Great Update MARI!!! It didn't seem that long between updates this time so whatever inspiration you have right now I hope it stays. Also I hope you passed all your exams.
-Kahli
Hey Dianna. I'm still waiting for the update to this amazing story...by the way where have you been? We've missed you it seems like you disappeared on us. Is everything alright?
Author's Response: I\'m still around. Some things in my life took a turn for the worse, but I\'m trying to ease my way back into writing. I swear I\'ll finish this one day.
Oh damn what the hell is wrong with Louise? Why does it take Justin to remind her that Trevion is her daughter? I can definitely tell this is about to get crazy. Oh by the way this whole chapter was the business from start to finish. But Trevion know she was wrong for what she was doing in that car. There was no way he was going to be able to concentrate! Lol. -Milla
That was a very sweet chapter. I enjoyed the endearing and light-hearted conversation. It gave the characters a lot of substance. And that's what I like to see. I must say that I'm intrigued by this story and the characters. I've never read one of your stories before but I heard a lot about you. So I decided to give it a try and I'm glad I did. I've been trying to get back in the swings or reading and writing fiction since I had suffered a lack of inspiration for awhile. Autumn is a character that I know I'll like and the same thing goes for Justin. But for some reason those last lines of this chapter makes me think that something sad is about to go down. On to the next one I go...because this is getting lengthy.
Oh boy that was sad. I guess my assumption about something sad going to happen was right. It start of as a bittersweet moment that turned sour at the mention of her being pregnant and then to find out the father is gone. That's really sad. I wonder how Justin plans to be there for her...well if he wants to. I don't know how stepping in as a father appears to him. I know he's attracted and intrigued by her, but is that enough to allow him to take that big of a step? Anyway, can't wait to see what's in store for this story. I'll add it to my favorites so I won't forget about it. -Kahli
Okay so I'm trying to get back into the routine of reading fiction again and I decided to check out the two chapters you have here. So I know what I read in the beginning about Shay and Justin and their situation, but this chapter focused on the past. Are there going to be more chapters in the past to show how they begin their relationship? And why the hell did she disappear for three months? Scared maybe? Hmm, well update whenever you can I'll check back to see whats going on. -Milla
Author's Response: That is the mystery. Haha! Yes, the first chapter let you know what's going to happen, and obviously that Shay has issues. The next couple of chapters will tell you how those issues started in the first place. So it's kind of like I'm flashing back to let everybody know how what happened happened. Thanks for the review! Definitely check back. I should have the next one up soon.