Penname: Hollie [Contact] Real name: Hollie
Member Since: Apr 30, 2007
Membership status: Member
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Umm... blonde (and naturally so), little bit off my head, and still far too attached to *NSYNC *lol*

 

Used to be webmistress of Insomniac Dreams but sadly had to close that, so I guess that makes my stories an NF exclusive lol


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Ring Around the Rosy
A Pocket full of Posies
Ashes, Ashes
We All Fall Down

A baby changes everything.

Categories: In Progress Het Stories
Characters: Justin Timberlake
Awards: None
Genres: Drama, Romance

Series: None
Chapters: 26
Wordcount: 62677 - Hits: 186762
Complete?: No - Published: Apr 07, 2007 - Last Updated: Mar 12, 2008 -
Reviewer: Hollie Signed
Date: Jun 01, 2007 Title: Chapter 14: crooked man

Hmmm. Intresante. More, please

Author's Response: lol just because you asked nice...

Reviewer: Hollie Signed
Date: Jun 06, 2007 Title: Chapter 15: all for the want

As much as I have sympathy for working mothers... that's the trade off. She knew it, she chose it, so I can't work up as much sympathy as I'd like to. Possibly I'd be feeling more charitable if it wasn;t for the silly little reaction to Justin sorting stuff out with Mae. You dumped him, deal with it *lol8

Author's Response: women are so fickle. i love that you\'re anti kate. be strong hols don\'t give in!!!

Reviewer: Hollie Signed
Date: Jun 10, 2007 Title: Chapter 16: still it lingered near

Trace... is weirding me out. Justin, however, rock on. Putting your baby before the coke and growing your ass up is good. More, please. Like, now if possible.

Author's Response: yes it is. maybe he should get one of those cookies you keep looking for...

Reviewer: Hollie Signed
Date: Jun 27, 2007 Title: Chapter 18: cry baby bunting

Oh typical. NOW she wants it all back? I'm sorry, but if you disappear out of a kid that age's life, they will forget it. It's a thing, they can't help it. She was warned before she left and still off she toddled. Forcing yourself in where you don't belong never works, and her looking at this like she has to steal her place back shows how little she gets it. You abandoned the kid, you hve to rebuikd YOUR relationship with him not steal somebody else's. sheesh

Reviewer: Hollie Signed
Date: Jul 07, 2007 Title: Chapter 19: came tumbling after

I've only just worked out that all yoru chapter titles are from nursery rhymes. Am I slow or what? Anyway, I love this. You knew that, but I think it bears repetition

Reviewer: Hollie Signed
Date: Aug 18, 2007 Title: Chapter 20: georgie pordgie

WOOHOO!!!!! Finally! I've been waiting for that damn kiss for ages!! Also, it was seriously cute. Excellent. I also thought it was sweet the way she's trying to show Jonah who Mommy is even if she's not there.

Reviewer: Hollie Signed
Date: Nov 10, 2007 Title: Chapter 21: rain rain go away

FINALLY!!! Ahhh seeing this made me so happy. Why don't you update more, why?

Reviewer: Hollie Signed
Date: Nov 26, 2007 Title: Chapter 22: falling down

I really don't like Kate too much at the moment. There's an utter unwillingness to take responsibility for where she's at in Jonah's life and in justin's - both of which are her own fault since she decided to up and leave - and until there is she's going to make life awkward for all of them.

Reviewer: Hollie Signed
Date: Dec 03, 2007 Title: Chapter 23: the clock struck one

At first I had at least some sympathy for Kate, but this reeks of manipulation. Makes it difficult to continue feeling any sympathy for her.

Reviewer: Hollie Signed
Date: Feb 05, 2008 Title: Chapter 25: all the way home

I feel no pity for her at this point because... well. Utterly transparent ploys like that whole magazine thing just remove any sympathy I have for a person. Mae's beign surprisingly saint like, got to wonder how long that'll last *lol*

Reviewer: Hollie Signed
Date: Mar 13, 2008 Title: Chapter 26: teeter totter

So... she just basically said that she's only with him because of his kid and he just gave her an ultimatum? Okay, it was a tough call, but on balance she just about wins the smack upside her head

This story was created off of the question: If Justin hooked up with your best friend, what would you do?

Categories: In Progress Het Stories
Characters: Justin Timberlake
Awards: None
Genres: Drama, Humor

Series: None
Chapters: 7
Wordcount: 32907 - Hits: 16855
Complete?: No - Published: Apr 08, 2007 - Last Updated: Jan 12, 2008 -
Reviewer: Hollie Signed
Date: Sep 30, 2007 Title: Chapter 5: That's What Friends Are For

You so want to wake up and have that Buffy 'Once More With Feeling' moment where everybody breaks into song, don't you? *lol*

Author's Response: I had to google that to find out what episode that was, turns out it was after I\'d stopped watching and Buffy shouldn\'t sing, at least not so high. lol I like the musical moments where you wouldn\'t normally expect them, but that was just...hmm, special. lol But yeah, if we could all break out into a song and dance every now and then I think the world would be a better place. Thanks for reading/reviewing!

'We're going down and you can see it too...We're going down and you know that we're doomed...My dear we're slow dancing in a burning room...'

Justin and my relationship wasn't always like this. I just don't know where everything went so wrong...

Winner of Best Song (Chapter One) at the Silent Tragedy Awards

Categories: In Progress Het Stories
Characters: Justin Timberlake
Awards: None
Genres: Drama

Series: None
Chapters: 32
Wordcount: 88355 - Hits: 64607
Complete?: No - Published: Apr 11, 2007 - Last Updated: Oct 09, 2007 -

Reviewer: Hollie Signed
Date: Jun 10, 2007 Title: Chapter 17: The Beginning: Part Sixteen

I don't like getting to the end of your chapters. That means waiting for a new one. That sucks, i don't like doing it. So keep the time short, 'kay? ;o)

Reviewer: Hollie Signed
Date: Jun 18, 2007 Title: Chapter 20: The Beginning: Part Nineteen

This is... gah. I kind of want to smack her upside her head for being an idiot and I want to smack him upside his head for knowing how she'd react and doing it anyway.

Author's Response: lol i\'ll just smack them both for you, k?

Reviewer: Hollie Signed
Date: Jun 27, 2007 Title: Chapter 21: The Beginning: Part Twenty

Yikes. So cute, but yikes. Don;t kill off Justin! *lol*

Author's Response: lol how could i ever kill off someone as amazing as justin?