Penname: Hollie [Contact] Real name: Hollie
Member Since: Apr 30, 2007
Membership status: Member
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Umm... blonde (and naturally so), little bit off my head, and still far too attached to *NSYNC *lol*

 

Used to be webmistress of Insomniac Dreams but sadly had to close that, so I guess that makes my stories an NF exclusive lol


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Wasted by westernway (R) starstarstarstarstar [Comments - 55]
A collaboration with crashcoincidence
He’s lost his way, gone astray, and though they try to save him. He kicks and screams, lost in a dream that will overtake him.
Cause he don’t want to be saved and he don’t want to be found. He wants to sit back and wait for another round.
Don’t care bout who he hurts, he just wants to bleed.
Wasting away to nothing, worshiping hate and greed. 

Categories: In Progress Het Stories
Characters: Justin Timberlake
Awards: None
Genres: Angst, Drama, General

Series: None
Chapters: 6
Wordcount: 15349 - Hits: 11706
Complete?: No - Published: Jun 25, 2007 - Last Updated: Oct 13, 2007 -
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Date: Oct 13, 2007 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Oh jesus.

Seesaw by Chelsia (PG-13) starstarstarstarstar [Comments - 98]

up and down
back and forth
it's enough to make anyone sick



Categories: In Progress Het Stories
Characters: Justin Timberlake
Awards: None
Genres: Romance

Series: None
Chapters: 14
Wordcount: 34666 - Hits: 30397
Complete?: No - Published: Jun 26, 2007 - Last Updated: Oct 04, 2007 -

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Reviewer: Hollie Signed
Date: Jun 27, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: one

Okay, Janice is Lesson Number One in how NOT to deal with jealousy, well founded or not. Stupid woman. I was very intrigued by this, it must be said, I was reading through wondering what on Earth you were up to, which I love. More soon please!

Author's Response: i\'m sure janice will be needing to learn a few lessons. i\'m happy you\'re intrigued :) at first i had no idea what was going on with this story but the more i write the more i figure it out....

Reviewer: Hollie Signed
Date: Jun 30, 2007 Title: Chapter 2: two

Oh she so did have it coming, she's the one who started it. Not that I condone violence, you understand, but Janice needs to do some apologising too and somehow I don;t think she'll take kindly to it coming from Justin and noy Laina. Hmmm, I love it. Tension and drama is my thing *lol*

Author's Response: tension and drama make for a good read so....it\'s all gravy :)

Reviewer: Hollie Signed
Date: Jul 18, 2007 Title: Chapter 6: six

Hahahahaha. Men, women and vehicles are not always a great combination it has to be said. At any rate, I really do wonder why it doesn't send more warning bells off in Justin's head that Janice is so openly hostile to Laina. Every new girl gets jealous of the ex, but then most new girls have the sense to at least attempt civillity (what with jealousy being a pretty unattractive thing). I also wonder why it doesn't send more warning bells off in his head that he's still so protective/sensitive about his place in Laina's life, too, but then maybe he's just a dummy. More soon!

Author's Response: maybe those warning bells are just about to ring...

Reviewer: Hollie Signed
Date: Jul 03, 2007 Title: Chapter 3: three

Okay, as much as I find it a little unfair for him to sit around comparing Janice to Laina all the time... my God. spending his shit, making him change clothes to co-ordinate, having the audacity/nerve to ask him to buy her clothes... yeah, that one really got my goat. She just asks him to hand over his money for her shit without even... grrrr. anyway, i love this. I'd almost be rooting for him to get it on with Laina if I didn't think cheating was such a lame ass thing to do... even to a girl named Janice. That name sounds good with nobody's.

Author's Response: lol i totally had a different name picked out for her at the beginning of the chapter but i was advised to change it to good old janice. i\'m so glad i did because it seems like EVERYONE just despises that name. And yeah...let\'s talk about that audacity...

Reviewer: Hollie Signed
Date: Jul 05, 2007 Title: Chapter 4: four

See now that's what I'm talking about - independent woman!!! *lol* You can bet Janice would have batted her eyelashes and chomped down whatever her little bunnykins ordered for her... so long as he paid for her next bracelet. grr. I hate that woman far too much already...

Author's Response: lol i love all the hatred everyone has for janice

Reviewer: Hollie Signed
Date: Jul 10, 2007 Title: Chapter 5: five

Why must you make me defend Janice? I'm sorry, but he's an ass for ditching on her like that when he knew she was planning on going to all that effort for him. Even if she does totally suck.

Author's Response: you are totally the first to defend her and i like it. she can\'t be all bad, right? he\'s a jerk too at times. i love it

Reviewer: Hollie Signed
Date: Jul 25, 2007 Title: Chapter 7: seven

That second's pause was just long enough to convince me that Janice meant what she said about the proposal in the offing. As was that begging look. I love the way she blamed Laina for repeating it as well when most normal people would be asking why PETE said it in the first place. I might get annoyed at somebody for spreading a false rumour but I'd be far more interested in who starte dit... unless I was a jealous freak who's just trying to cover my tracks. and my name was as lame as hers.

Author's Response: yeah pete got ignored in the whole thing....but then again, perhaps she was just a jealous freak about the whole thing...with a lame name lol

Reviewer: Hollie Signed
Date: Aug 06, 2007 Title: Chapter 8: eight

Dissatisfaction with current partners, check. Past sexual tension creeping back up, check. They are so getting it on soon.

Author's Response: lol maybe....maybe....

Reviewer: Hollie Signed
Date: Aug 15, 2007 Title: Chapter 9: nine

Okay, even he knows he should break up with her. Though i'm especially glad to see that he didn't just take that disgusting attempt to purloin his credit card for HER business expenses. That woman is a gold digging piece of crap. This does not excuse him for being an asshole on purpose instead of just being grown up and dumping her, but still. More soon.

Author's Response: well perhaps they were both in the wrong there but i think it\'s easier to side with one of them than the other....

Reviewer: Hollie Signed
Date: Aug 18, 2007 Title: Chapter 10: ten

You know what I hate? Seeing other people's perspectives when I want to be all "dump the assholes and get back together." Ugh, Chelsia, why must you be so difficult?

Author's Response: lol don\'t pretend you don\'t love it when i make things difficult. doesn\'t it just make life so much more interesting?

Reviewer: Hollie Signed
Date: Aug 28, 2007 Title: Chapter 11: eleven

Drunk dialling - always a bad, bad business. I think it ought to be a rule that everybody swaps cell phones on a night out so they don;t have their drunk dialling nu,mbers programmed in the phone in front of them *lol*

Author's Response: but the great thing about drunk dialing is all the fun stories that result....

Reviewer: Hollie Signed
Date: Sep 09, 2007 Title: Chapter 12: twelve

Heheh. She can tell herself it's jst ulterior motives all she wants, but Justin has a point and she knows it. Though I do think getting drunk alone in an idyllic cabin with your ex is a dumb idea for anybody who doesn't want to be taken advatange of

Author's Response: hmmm doesn\'t seem to be the SMARTEST idea, does it? we\'ll see what happens...

Reviewer: Hollie Signed
Date: Sep 20, 2007 Title: Chapter 13: thirteen

Why does he only say that when he's drunk? Dude, way to NOT convince a girl to go for you *lol*. Anyway, they're cute, I like them. Hook them up now, 'kay?

Author's Response: lol yeah i\'ll give you it\'s not a GREAT way to convince Laina that she needs him back in her life. hook them up? ok :)

Reviewer: Hollie Signed
Date: Oct 05, 2007 Title: Chapter 14: fourteen

I love Trace. That is all.