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An Unexpected Love Affair by d_simplicity (NC-17) starstarstarstarstar [Comments - 494]

I sneak peeks at him everyday but he never notices me. The exuberant emotions I bear towards him are far more than I can handle and are very unprofessional. I dream about this man every night in hopes that one day he'll acknowledge my presence or at least get my name right, but to no avail.... Justin is my fetish and secret guilty pleasure. That's all he's ever going to be and I can live with that....

A crush I can not love.
A heart I can not fill.
A love I can not give.
A bond I can not break.
For this love can not exist.

By Angela Moore



Categories: In Progress Het Stories
Characters: Justin Timberlake
Awards: None
Genres: Angst, Drama, Humor, Romance, Suspense

Series: None
Chapters: 53
Wordcount: 296020 - Hits: 164285
Complete?: No - Published: Aug 08, 2007 - Last Updated: Apr 24, 2009 -
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Date: Jan 23, 2008 Title: Chapter 36: A Little One-On-One Time

Christian? This can't be good! First of all... Malcolm needed to like Justin like three chapters ago because that's going to create such a problem, and second of all Christian better not be magically in town or something. Way to ruin the flow of their relationship, hah. Oh yeah and you need to update soon! I really want to know what happens!

Author's Response: Hey tay, thanks for the review. Sorry I'm taking so long to update. I need to get some things out of the way since Life has become busy. I'll be updating soon to everyone who might read this. I'm working on the next update finally. lol. :)

Reviewer: tda720 Signed
Date: Jun 10, 2008 Title: Chapter 44: 'No One Will Tear Us Apart'

ah! so i leave and everything falls apart?! what's with these calls girl? and what did christian want with justin?! this is stilll my favorite story up here after all this time! you better make justin and zara turn out well; i dont like how hes been acting towards her! update soon! pleaseee! <3



Author's Response: Hey Tay! How's everything girl? It's been a while. lol. Everything hasn't fallen apart I wouldn't really say that, but Zara and Justin are facing some issues and mysteries that need solving. :) I'm so glad this story is still a favorite of yours. It's like a  'fan fiction soap opera' as my close friend calls it when I asked her to read it and give me her views on it. LOL And I agree they both have issues. Justin I'm sure you can tell has a serious temper he usually hides well which might end up being a problem...idk. lol. Thanks for the feedback girl I appreciate it and I miss you! When are you going to start back writing? Anyway I'm already almost done with the next update because some inspiration hit so hopefully, I'll have it up soon.

Broken Flowers by god gave me style (NC-17) starstarstarstarstar [Comments - 77]
Sequel to Lips of Pink

Leaving was hard though, leaving Justin was hard. Oh god, I hate thinking about him sometimes, sometimes it hurts more than others. I can only imagine the hate that he feels for me and everything that I put him though. I mean jesus, he watched me kill a man. He saw the last breath of a man, why did I expect him to act any other way then he did? Our last days together are still haunting ones but I doubt that he even thinks about me or our relationship anymore.

Categories: In Progress Het Stories
Characters: Justin Timberlake
Awards: None
Genres: Alternate Universe, Drama, Humor, Romance

Series: Why Don't We Fall In Love
Chapters: 16
Wordcount: 29535 - Hits: 39975
Complete?: No - Published: Aug 11, 2007 - Last Updated: Dec 07, 2008 -
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Date: Aug 12, 2007 Title: Chapter 2: One

can i just say this was the best thing to come home to? .. update more soon! i loved lips of pink and im loving this after only 2 chapters!

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Date: Aug 17, 2007 Title: Chapter 4: Three

Why do I feel like they're going to run into each other while they're on dates? Great update! More soon girl!

4: Certain Hell by god gave me style (PG) starstarstarstarstar [Comments - 9]
Now I remember why I love this place. The tall ceilings, the long bay windows in the living room, the warmth of the rooms. I remember when we first bought it. We didn't do anything but have sex the first couple of days, and in turn, welcomed Cash into our lives. It's quiet as I step further into the foyer. I continue to walk deeper into the house, walking through the living room and into the kitchen. A few minutes to myself, wonderful.

Categories: Completed Het Stories
Characters: Justin Timberlake
Awards: None
Genres: Drama, Romance

Series: A Hollywood Divorce
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 1488 - Hits: 1952
Complete?: Yes - Published: Aug 19, 2007 - Last Updated: Aug 19, 2007 -
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Date: Aug 20, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: 4: Certain Hell

I love this series! I really hope they get back together because that last paragraph just made me extremely sad for the both of them, but for some reason I doubt that's happening! Update soon!

Snuckums by Lily (R) starstarstarstarhalf-star [Comments - 133]
I’m Gianna Gibralda. I’m a singer and I play the piano and I’m starting to open up on tour with Justin Timberlake. Yeah, no pressure. Justin Timberlake thinks I’m going to be huge. I’ve only met him for a couple minutes, I’m not too sure how he can tell that but whatever. I hate crowds and I tend to freak out in stressful situations. I’m touring with Justin Timberlake, have I mentioned that? My life is one big panic attack.

Categories: In Progress Het Stories
Characters: Justin Timberlake
Awards: None
Genres: Celebrity/Celebrity, General, Humor, Romance

Series: None
Chapters: 25
Wordcount: 51945 - Hits: 54785
Complete?: No - Published: Aug 20, 2007 - Last Updated: Apr 11, 2008 -
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Date: Sep 30, 2007 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Oh my gosh.. what is her problem? This isn't good, she needs to lighten up a lil bit before whatever they have ends! Update soon.. and I love the fact that they were in CT, that's my homestate!

Author's Response: haha Gianna is a little crazy! Thanks for reading :)

Her First Mistake by a_moments_grace (R) starstarstarstarstar [Comments - 133]

Allowing herself to have a crush was her first mistake.  Her second was believing that she could control her feelings.  It all seemed to snowball after that, and now Rylee-Jean Anderson is fighting to save her friendship as well as fighting off the feelings she'd developed for her best friend's man.



Categories: Completed Het Stories
Characters: Justin Timberlake
Awards: None
Genres: Alternate Universe, Drama, Romance

Series: None
Chapters: 29
Wordcount: 60847 - Hits: 96792
Complete?: Yes - Published: Aug 28, 2007 - Last Updated: Dec 11, 2008 -
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Date: Aug 28, 2007 Title: Chapter 2: It Never Fails

Christina can easily be taken out of the picture! I'm loving this so far, RJ and Justin seem like they're going to hit it off extremely well.. Update soon! 



Author's Response: Thank you :)  Christina isn't going to be out of the picture anytime soon, we're just gonna have to live with that :)  I'm so happy you like it, this story has been floating around in my head for a while now and I'm excited to share it with everyone!

Reviewer: tda720 Signed
Date: Aug 29, 2007 Title: Chapter 3: 'Double D'

Hmm, Justin agrees with Brett does he? Too bad about Christina not being gone! RJ and JT.. it can't get any better! Update soon!

Author's Response: that was fast!  I barely had the chapter posted :)  Thanks for the review, but you're gonna have to live with Christina for the time being ;)

Reviewer: tda720 Signed
Date: Sep 01, 2007 Title: Chapter 5: His First Mistake

These two chapters were great! Justin's an idiot for kissing her though. I can tell I'm really going to like Trace in this story, who knows maybe he and Rylee will develop something ::wink wink::. Update soon!!

Author's Response: Justin is an idiot, but he is a man :)  I like Trace too, and who knows...maybe he'll end up being the one to sweep Rylee off of her feet, you'll just have to read to find out!  Thank you for always having something great to say, it makes me smile :)

Reviewer: tda720 Signed
Date: Sep 12, 2007 Title: Chapter 8: The Secret's Out

Holy hell, I'm late on this, but they slept together!! I'm definitely on Team Trace right now because Justin is being a dick! Not that I condone using people, but RJ should really consider starting something with Trace, they seem to have a good bond and they'll be good for each other. Justin's missing out on a lot! Loved the update, thanks!

Author's Response: Justin is totally miss out on a lot, I agree!  He'll wake up soon enough, though :)  I'm glad you've caught up!

Reviewer: tda720 Signed
Date: Sep 17, 2007 Title: Chapter 9: Open Mouth, Insert Foot

Talk about big mouths, geesh is he jealous much? Someone's gotta teach that boy that jealously isn't attractive. Loved the update, Trace really should have been at that dinner though!!

Author's Response:

Yeah, JT has a big mouth and it's going to get him into a lot more trouble, too.  And I agree, jealousy isn't attractive, especially when he's such an ass about it! lol Thanks for the review :)

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Date: Sep 20, 2007 Title: Chapter 10: Walking on Broken Glass...literally

Why do I feel like Christina is going to break up with Justin since he's been 'clingy' and Rylee is going to have to play the middle man in between the two? Idk maybe it's just me but that's the impression I'm getting. But I loved this chapter and I'm glad that she's not pissed at his ability to be an ass! Update soon!

Author's Response:

Thank you, so very much, for reading and leaving comments :)  I'm so glad you're liking the story....and Rylee will most likely get stuck in the middle, but it might not be in the way that you're thinking :) You'll just have to wait and see!

Reviewer: tda720 Signed
Date: Sep 22, 2007 Title: Chapter 11: Just Another Moment of Weakness

What the hey? You can't just stop there, there better be another chapter on the way or something because that was steamy. You already know I loved it. Update soon, really.

Author's Response: I did just stop there, oh snap!  Yes, it was steamy...and I loved it too! lol.  Thanks for reading, I always look forward to reading your reaction :)

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Date: Sep 24, 2007 Title: Chapter 12: Aftermath and Mixed Emotions

For a second there I thought I was going to have to get angry at her! But yesssss, finally they let their true feelings show, but I do feel bad for Christina. How are they going to break it to her? Hmm, I think this calls for an update (and pronto) because this story is filling the void that I have for Second Best right now (yeah my computer works but MSWord is being a little on the tempermental side right now).. Loved the update!

Author's Response: You know, Whitney said the same thing!  I thought about Rylee storming out...but, hey...JT is pretty damn addictive, lol.  Thank you, so so much for reading and reviewing, it means a whole heck of a lot coming from someone that I think is so talented :)

Reviewer: tda720 Signed
Date: Oct 01, 2007 Title: Chapter 14: Head Spin

Wow, Christina deserves to be alone after that bitchiness. I think the two of them need to just tell her and get it over with, although I am going to feel a little bad..I'm loving the constant updates, update again soon!!

Author's Response: I'm loving the constant updates too, lol.  They'll have their chance to tell Christina soon...I don't think it's going to be pretty.  Thanks for the review :)