Two stars, two assistants, four people, growing up, getting over, starting new and seeing clearer.I was reading this story as you wrote it, and I'm pretty sure I commented on the chapters, but after courtney found out it was angie that was leaking crap I fell behind and told myself I needed to catch up. Then you finished and I still hadn't caught up! Haha. I was looking in my favs the other day and was like "oh.my.gosh! I never finished!!" So I spent this week reading it all over and finally finishing only forever-and-a-day later. Lol anyway, I absolutely LOVED this story. Really great ending too. Justin and mere are one of my fav fiction couples, and you probably have no plans for them, but I would love to see another story with them. Even if it's just a 1 to 3 chapter short. I'd love that. Anyway, had to comment with how much I enjoyed this story and the characters, including courtney no matter how much she frustrated me. Lol but you're such a talented writer, always have been a fan since I found narcy yeeeeeeears ago and fell in love with your work. wonderful work ma'am. :o)
I absolutely LOVED this!! I'm so glad I'm reading it so late cause if I had read it while you were working on it and working on updates I probably would've went crazy! Lol once I started it I really couldn't stop. It's definitely one of my favs now. Awesome job. :o)
I really wish you would update this soon. :o( i loved lips of pink. i'm sure i've read it about 4 times. i first read it on your website years ago, and i've read it on here too. but yeah...i would really like to see what unfolds once justin gets to long beach. so yeah...please? haha :o)
ooooooh crap. haha! this is about to get really good. i can't wait to see what happens when they run into each other. i loved justin and ash together, but how he treated her was terrible so i'm glad she's found happiness with everything. that's not to say i don't want to see if her and justin still have it for each other once they see each other, but yeah. haha. i'm so happy you updated! hopefully you'll grant us with another new chapter soon. :o)
ok...man that was good. i wish ashlynn would've had a chance to bust kim though. she was completely out of line. it doesn't matter that justin is her boyfriend now. she had nothing to do with ashlynn and jt's relationship, and most definitely doesn't know ash, so she shouldn't be putting her two cents in. she doesn't know what their relationship was like or what they were feeling when all that mess went down. she only knows about the surface because of what justin has told her. did he tell her EVERYTHING though? ugh. he shouldn't have told her anything though in a way. what happened was/is very personal and shouldn't just be shared like that. he hasn't known or dated that girl long enough to share something like that if he had to do so. anyway, i don't like that girl. and justin yelling at ash...i can see how that could happen in the heat of the moment, especially since he's probably still harboring hurt from what happened, but that wasn't good either. what was good though was the fact that he didn't let kim think it was ok for her to say all that she did. anyway, i can't wait to see what happens next. maybe elisha and ash can reconnect and the girls (minus kim of course haha) can hang a little. we shall see i guess. i hope you update again soon! :o)
awww. :o( this really sucks. i can see what they are trying to do for each other, but forcing themselves to try to love another person and staying with a person they don't want to be with will only cause trouble in those relationships later. justin needs to stop caring what trace and kim will think. kim is going to hate him anyway when this secret becomes to bothersome and his feelings come out, so why not dump that idiot? haha. same for ashlynn. she's just going to hurt chris. they are both hurting themselves. justin needs to apologize big time for how he treated ashlynn though during their final days cause that was just incredibly mean and cold. anyway, i'm so glad you've been updating. makes me happy. haha. :o)
haha. yeah. ok justin. so kim had a moment of truth? well good for her in pretty much admitting that she's threatened by ashlynn when the girl didn't even do anything to her. moment of truth or not, i still can't stand her. i can't wait to see what happens when they go to ash's job. update soon. :o)
haha! oh man i can not wait to see what goes down at their meeting. update soon! :o)
i agree with everything LuLu said. haha. ashlynn is just trying to be the bigger person and do her job. justin is definitely afraid HE will be the one that gives into his temptation. Seriously, who said anything about Kim?!? yeah...you justin. not ash. and trace gets on my nerves with his attitude towards ashlynn. she didn't do anything to him! yeah justin's his boy and all, but he needs to get rid of his attitude and hatred. she didn't do anything to him. he needs to just keep his mouth shut around her. who is he to ask her what she's doing there?!? could you not tell that she's working when the secretary directed you in an office where she was standing in dressed nicely and said that he two o'clock was here? duh! ugh! i'm getting mad all over again! haha. seriously though, ash saved justin's life, then he treats her like she has a highly contagious and deadly disease. does trace know about that?!? UGH! ok. that's all. ugh. update soon. haha. :o)
hmmm...very intersting. haha. she'll knock him out of the park soon hopefully. haha! i can't belive trace was actually civil. gaaah! update! like...now! :o)
well dang...i don't know what to say about that one! haha. i can see where she's coming from. i mean...that came out of nowhere! so i'd be skeptical too. but if he was being serious, well...he has to know how that can be weird. maybe he was trying to make her react that way so then he could be like this isn't working because when you get down to it, he's getting close to admitting that he wants her back. hmm? maybe? probably not? haha. update soon! :o)
ooooooh crap! ain't this something! haha. two people in denial still loving each other. an explosion waiting to happen. by starting over and becoming friends, that is defintiely not going to lead to getting over each other and wanting to be with other people. that's going to end up in yall wanting each other badly. justin already wants her, and he definitely cares about her. if he didn't, he wouldn't want to try to be friends. *sigh* i can't wait to see what happens next. lies already flowing out! haha. update soon! :o)
hmmm...this could be very interesting. haha. can't wait to read more! :o)
*giggles* oooooh boy! let's get it going! man, they want each other so bad. living in denial BIG time. cheating is not good, but man i want them to just be together. this hurricane could end up being the best thing to happen to them. update soon! :o)
Allowing herself to have a crush was her first mistake. Her second was believing that she could control her feelings. It all seemed to snowball after that, and now Rylee-Jean Anderson is fighting to save her friendship as well as fighting off the feelings she'd developed for her best friend's man.
LOVED this story!! I rememberer starting to read it when you first started it and got to the chapter where Rylee gave Christina the check for rent but after that I don't know what happened but I never finished until now. Not even sure if i reviewed back then. Anyway i went back to the beginning and couldn't stop for the past 3 days. Such a great story, but I wouldn't expect anything less. You're a talented writer and I always enjoy your stories. So yeah awesome job! :o)
Author's Response: Thank you, very very much! It means a whole heck of a lot to hear something like this :) I appreciate you taking the time to catch up and finish the story. Thank you!
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