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25. Pisces. Born and raised Texan. I've been reading fan fiction for many, many years now. It's my secret little pleasure in life. My love of *NSYNC and JT is my not-so-secret pleasure in life and I like it that way.
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Set in New York City, Justin Timberlake and Amelia Domineck are the hottest couple in the Manhattan social scene, and their wedding is fast approaching Event of the Year status. Amelia, headstrong and domineering, is not just planning her wedding, she’s choreographing it and Justin seems to simply be along for the ride, as well as Amelia’s assistant Charlotte who after accepting the job wonders if slavery somehow became legal without her realizing it. A Lolita wedding planner, a flakey assistant, and one bridezilla converge together to bring Charlotte and Justin closer and Justin begins to wonder… is this really all that’s left for him? A ring and a promise of forever with Amelia, or does he dare to dream of something more?



Categories: Completed Het Stories
Characters: Justin Timberlake
Awards: Season 6
Genres: Angst, Drama, Romance

Series: None
Chapters: 45
Wordcount: 246846 - Hits: 232256
Complete?: Yes - Published: May 12, 2008 - Last Updated: Jan 30, 2011 -
Reviewer: MochaB Signed
Date: Feb 07, 2010 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 29

Ok, it's official. I love Billy. Haha. Tell it like it is man! Him and his southern sayings. Love it. Lol Justin needed to hear that. Charlie called him out on it a long time ago, but seems like he needed someone like his grandpa, who he obviously has lots of respect for, to voice his thoughts. I think it's very easy to see how and when he turned into a runner. Also no matter where he's at he gets chastised. At home with his parents and grandparents and in the city by amelia. He's just like a disobedient puppy. A stupid puppy. All of his family and his best friend see it and he's ignored it...ignored the obvious by looking at the past. Justifying things with the past that is long gone. Now his future is coming up on him so fast he can't help but live in the present and finally think about what could and could not be his future. He's just been living in dream world. Well buddy it's time to wake up! *rolls eyes* and every time somebody even mentions amelia or the wedding his gets tense and moody and defensive. Do I really need to say why that's a problem? And I think once he wakes up fully and gets out of dream land he will see the light that's been there the whole time. He loves the idea of what amelia used to be, but those days are gone. She probably loves the idea of having a submissive husband. Haha. And I think he's just scared when it comes down to it. He has been ripped to shreds for years, his backbone is gone, his pride is long gone...all when dealing with amelia of course. All that's there when he's with charlie, but anyway, he's scared to stand up to amelia and end things. If he does in fact leave amelia, he needs to do some soul searching and become who he used to be. Be himself again because that person is almost completely gone and if he marries her it will be lost forever. Still don't want him with charlie though. I want her to rip him to shreds and only then can he start his soul searching. LOL whew! Glad I finally got to these! I've been a busy bee and I need uninterrupted time to read this. :o) update soon!

Author's Response: YES he's getting a lot of advice in a short period of time and just a lot of people telling him what to do in general. He needs to just figure his shit out and take responsibility for his life. Ugh he's annoying ME and i'm the one that shaped him hahaha. Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!

Reviewer: MochaB Signed
Date: Jun 25, 2010 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 31

I love trace. I really do. He says everything about justin's pathetic self that I think, but charlie has been trying to show justin he's more than the dirt under amelia's thousand dollar shoes. That he's more than what amelia has turned him into...some obedient lap dog. HE needs to stand up and be a man! He just pushes it down, buries it, etc. Charlie has done all the work this whole time. What more can she do?! The only thing she could do is speak now instead of holding her peace, but justin would prob just ignore her then and go ahead and say "I do" after amelia humiliates her. She'll try to fix it though cause she is so weak. Pathetic. Yes she cares for him, but how much is she going to take?! She gives herself excuse after excuse just like justin. Stop making excuses and face reality! And he "realizes" he loves her? Alcohol makes the truth come out? Well I wouldn't want the truth like that. Not after their history. And his pathetic self surely won't remember it in the morn or let the truth be recognized once he's sober. He'll just push it down, make more excuses, not do a thing about it! Continue to live in a personal hell. It is so hard to read this because they all make me so mad. I just want charlie for once in this story to not succumb to justin, not just physically but mainly mentally and emotionally. To not make excuses for the hurt he deals her. I want justin to just be a man. Be a mature adult and make a freaking decision! Stop hurting those people that truly care about him (trace and charlie)! Can't make that more clear. Uuuugh. Sorry. This story always gets my blood pressure up. Lol update soon! :o)

Author's Response: Guh you hit the nail on the head. What I love about these characters is they ARE so damn pathetic. There are so many people out there who ARE Justin and Charlotte you know, they run in this circle and can't seem to get out and you just want to shake them and yell "YOU ARE FUCKING UP YOUR LIFE!!!" but like you said they have to make their own decisions. Hopefully Justin and Charlotte will make the right ones. I'm glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!

Reviewer: MochaB Signed
Date: Sep 12, 2010 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 32

NO.EFFING.WAY.
NOOOOOOO. FREEEAKING. WAAAAAAY!! I can NOT believe I just read those two words. He took what his grandpa said the completely wrong way! I am seriously almost in tears. This is so ridiculous! HE is ridiculous! Reading the start I was hoping that charlie would just go and say what she had to say and I'm glad she did even though it probably felt like complete hell for her with the lack of reaction she got. At least, as trace said, she won't regret it later. I know I say how weak she is, but that doesn't mean she's deserved this hurt and pain that she's gone through. Yes she has brought it on herself, but gosh she's a good person! Too good obviously with what she has put up with from justin and amelia. And now that the shock has worn off, I'm glad he went ahead and said I do. I wanted charlie and justin to be together. I didn't, but there was always a small part of me that did. That had hope that he'd wake up. I wanted him to just stop being stupid and be honest with himself and stop hiding from himself. But he is such a lie and she just revealed her heart to him and he still goes through with it so I'm done. I don't want them together at all because what he's put charlie through in unforgivable. If charlie ever talks to him again I want her to show how strong she is and how he's going to regret not being with her. I reeeally want that. She needs her moment of strength and confidence before this is all said and done. Ugh. Wow. So glad I finally could read it. What a chapter woman. I love you. Lol update soon! :o)

Author's Response: Okay I really liked your review because of the range of emotion you showed. Like how you went from being in shock to really thinking about what happened to Charlotte and what justin put her through. It was nice to actually SEE that transition because that's really what I was going for with this chapter. I'm glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!

Reviewer: MochaB Signed
Date: Nov 23, 2010 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 33

FINAL-EFFING-LY!!! ugh! i still can't stand him though. lol it took him entirely too long to do this.  him hurting charlie isn't what made him do this.  amelia treating him like a pet, like dirt, like an employee, like a ignortant child didn't make him do this.  his love that he knew he had for charlie but never wanted to admit didn't make him do this.  only when he finds out amelia is cheating did he get the freaking clue...after all this crap he's put up with and done.  you know i could go on and on expressing how pissed off he makes me and how stupid he is, but i've done that for about 30something chapters so I won't repeat myself. lol amelia is a sad, sad person. obviously she didn't treat justin like a person so of course her rep is all she has, and it's her own fault so i'm not sad for her. i was really hoping charlie could finally leave amelia's presence with her head held high. anyway, 99 percent of me what charlie to say "F you justin!" when he comes groveling to her (which he should do) and 1 percent wants them to finally be together. it will probably be more if he really, really gets his act together and grovels on his hands and knees for forgiveness, and only after charlie doesn't immediately give in and makes him work for her. justin needs to get his act together, but not just by admitting his feelings, but by becoming himself again and fixing all his relationships that he has ruined (family and friends). ugh. i always leave an essay review for this story. lol so glad i finally had the chance to read the update. please update soon! :o)

Author's Response: Girl I love your essays haha. Its nice to see that people are thinking and feeling when they're reading and a thoughtful review lets us know that. I know I say this all the time but the next section is half way finished haha. I always write half and then my brain goes on vacation but I have a four day weekend coming up so I'm hoping I can get some writing done. Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!

Reviewer: MochaB Signed
Date: Mar 13, 2011 Title: Chapter 44: Epilogue

ugh. conflicting emotions here! so happy to finally read the end, but so so sad that it is over! :o( but wow...this has been an emotional and entertaining journey. i feel like i've been a character in it myself with how intense my feelings would be as i read this story.  anyway, i'm super happy with the outcome.  i was worried there that charlie would let him in easily since he has such a hold on her, but i'm so glad it wasn't easy and she made him suffer for a bit. it was only fair! but i'm so glad they made it back to each other and justin made it back to himself. absolutely love that. perfect ending. :o) i will have to check out the deleted scenes. you always seem to create characters that become my fav couples. Charstin. Skystin. loooove. thanks for sharing your awesome talent with us once again and creating this masterpiece. yes, masterpiece. now when are we going to make this into a movie? :o)

Author's Response: YAY I'm glad you liked the ending. This story was such a mountain and conquering it was rough but I'm very happy with the outcome and really ecstatic that you guys are as well. I'm glad you're loving the characters and hopefully we'll hear more from these guys. Thanks so much for reading all this time and for your wonderful reviews!

Wednesday by a_nonymous (NC-17) [Comments - 2]
Inspired by a discussion of the image of Justin at a gentlemen's club in the "What Goes Around ..." video.

Categories: Completed Het Stories
Characters: Justin Timberlake
Awards: None
Genres: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 1346 - Hits: 1787
Complete?: Yes - Published: May 19, 2008 - Last Updated: May 19, 2008 -
Reviewer: MochaB Signed
Date: May 28, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Wednesday

dang...i will too. haha. very nice. :o)

One day she's just the assistant, the next day she's so much more...

Categories: Completed Het Stories
Characters: Justin Timberlake
Awards: None
Genres: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 1877 - Hits: 2229
Complete?: Yes - Published: May 25, 2008 - Last Updated: May 25, 2008 -
Reviewer: MochaB Signed
Date: Jun 01, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Rae of Sunshine

awww! that was so cute. hot and cute. haha. :o)

After nine years of horrible boyfriends. Will Kristina finally find a good man, or will she go back to the only thing she knows.

Categories: Completed Het Stories
Characters: Justin Timberlake
Awards: None
Genres: Drama, Romance

Series: None
Chapters: 74
Wordcount: 188680 - Hits: 216013
Complete?: Yes - Published: Jun 02, 2008 - Last Updated: Jun 12, 2009 -
Reviewer: MochaB Signed
Date: Jul 23, 2008 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41

haha. i've really enjoyed this story with each new chapter you add. i can't wait for brooke to be born. after all the newborn craziness is over, i can't wait to see what happens between all four of them. update soon! :o)

Reviewer: MochaB Signed
Date: Jul 23, 2008 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42

and she will continue to have you wrapped forever. haha. that was a really, really cute update. it was really nice of trace to set up the room too. it was all so sweet. and good for saying no to all that magazine crap. way to go jt! haha. udpate soon. :o)

Standing here, In the middle of the fire
Watchin the walls burn, Feelin my heart turn
Hard as a rock, Cold as stone
A cold fire, Look away
And when the walls fall
How will you deal with it
This time, By the light
Of the cold fire

Poem: Cold Fire by Michael Farquer

Venture into the short tale of a Vampire's journey as he (Justin) and his partner (Hailey) are faced with passion, lust, desire, danger and death...

*From - The Blood Series: A Vampire's Love*



Categories: In Progress Het Stories
Characters: Justin Timberlake
Awards: None
Genres: Alternate Universe, Angst, Drama, Fantasy, Mystery, Romance, Supernatural

Series: The Blood Series: A Vampire’s Love
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 7976 - Hits: 1321
Complete?: No - Published: Jun 02, 2008 - Last Updated: Jun 02, 2008 -
Reviewer: MochaB Signed
Date: Jun 05, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Part 5:1

this is really, really good. i remember when i first started reading fan fic many years ago, i read a vampire story and it was alright, but yours is great. justin is super sexy in all his pretty much emotionless, angry, all black wearing vampire glory. haha. and i love their relationship. they test each other so much, but love each other even more. i can't wait to read about the fight and see what happens (although i'm scared to see how you will end this haha). i love a good action scene. update soon! :o)

Author's Response: Well I have to say Vampire stories or just supernatural on a whole are my favorite to read. lol. But not many people write these types of fan fiction so I'm stuck on the novels. lol. And yeah, Vampire!Justin is sexy. But hey, if you want to ready anymore vamp fics, lostinadreamx gots some good ones up here too. :) And I def. agree that Hailey and Justin test each other but their love keeps growing stronger so that's a plus. lol. I'll try to update as soon as I can with the fight scenes and what's to come for those two. Thanks so much for the great feedback I appreciate it.

When Selah Bernstine decides that college isn't for her, her mother sends her to the one person that can talk some "sense" into her, her sister Ava--who has just scored her dream job as a dancer on Justin Timberlake's FutureSex/LoveShow Tour. Filled with confusing and conflicting feelings about what she truly wants, as well as a broken heart, Selah learns about herself and how to make her desires a reality through the last person she'd ever expect to, all while making mistakes along the way. At the same time, Justin learns about more about himself and wonders: Is what is right in front of him what he has wanted all along?


Categories: In Progress Het Stories
Characters: Justin Timberlake
Awards: None
Genres: Drama, Humor, Romance

Series: None
Chapters: 20
Wordcount: 62091 - Hits: 58448
Complete?: No - Published: Jun 11, 2008 - Last Updated: Jan 20, 2009 -
Reviewer: MochaB Signed
Date: Jun 18, 2008 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I understand Ava having big sister syndrome, but dang can she ease up?!? haha. gosh. any time Selah and a boy are mentioned in the same sentence she gets an attitude and acts like her sister isn't supposed to date until she's 30! haha. I really feel for Selah though. Hopefully during this process she'll be able to open up, gain confidence, and go for what she wants. It would be awesome if she got the help and push to do so from Mr. SexyBack himself. Just saying...haha. ;o) update soon!

Author's Response: Haha, yeah Ava definitely is trying to make sure that her sister doesn\'t get too attached or involved with these two men in particular. But I think it\'s because she doesn\'t want to see her get used and then hurt and you\'ll understand why she feels that way very soon. Selah on the other hand is definitely going to have her time to shine and come out of her shell as the story evolves and Mr. SexyBack may have something to do with that. ; ) I love your reviews so thank you so much for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: MochaB Signed
Date: Jun 13, 2008 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

i know without a doubt that i'd need a bucket! hahaha. i'm really enjoying this so far. so selah would like to dance too huh? hopefully she'll be able to make her dreams come true as time goes on. i hope you update soon! i can't wait to read about her initial meeting with Mr. JT. :o)



Author's Response: Shoot, you and I both! Haha. There are a lot of things that Selah would like to do, but just doesn\'t have the confidence to do them. She\'s a bit of a complex person because she keeps a lot inside, but you\'ll find out more about her as the story goes about why she\'s like that. Oh and she will be meeting Mr. JT pretty soon. ; ) Thank you so much for reading and reviewing, I appreciate it!

Reviewer: MochaB Signed
Date: Jun 15, 2008 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

ominously is right. haha. this chapter made me enjoy this even more. selah and i are a like it a lot of ways...ok, i know she's a character, but you know what i mean. haha. but yeah...i really can't wait to read more about her that will allow us to get inside her thoughts and feelings. and you know, if i was her and he winked at me, i'd have a teeny moment too no matter how much i know that he's just a regular person. haha. update soon please! :o)

Author's Response: Aww, I\'m glad that you can relate to her because that was one of my main objectives with the story, that everyone can relate to Selah in some way. Like I said before, she really is a complex person and the reasons why will be developed over time. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing, I appreciate it!

Reviewer: MochaB Signed
Date: Jun 21, 2008 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Can it be the other F? haha! i'm kidding!!...maybe...ha! ;o) anyway, another great chapter. thanks for the insight. i think selah needs to better distinguish from love and lust. she mentioned she has that problem of thinking the slightest attraction means love, so admitting it is the first step. plus, i mean her sister told her how Nick is so it's like dang...she didn't have a warning with Dame, but now she does. she better listen. so with her problem, maybe Ava does need to stay on top of her. and nick's shallow story about the prom...red flag. the whole n.e.r.d. part was so funny. i've been listening to the new album constantly since tuesday. can't wait to read more. :o)

Author's Response: LMAO! Oooh, the story is just beginning and Justin is taken so it can\'t be the other F (just) yet (haha). I agree about Selah and how she needs to distinguish those two differences and since she\'s learned the hard way before with Dame, she\'s trying to be more cautious and you\'re going to see more of that as the story goes on. On the contrary, I don\'t think Nick\'s story should be a red flag, he was just being a stupid teenager at the time. But regardless, I personally think Selah should cautious just due to everything she\'s been through. I\'m glad you liked the N.E.R.D. part, I LOVE them and I want their new CD SO BAD (haha). Thanks again SO much for reading and reviewing, I appreciate it! : )

Reviewer: MochaB Signed
Date: Jun 26, 2008 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

ohmyfreakinggoshheckyes!! that was the hottest dance EVER. girl seriously...that was sexy. my body heat just rose way too high and i definitely don't mind. and great song choice. haha. things reeeally just got kicked into high gear and i'm loving it. justin is already bringing her confidence back everytime they speak. she gets all feisty and flirty and it's awesome. haha. jessica is still in the picture though, and i don't want ava to find out about this or nick. i think it should just stay between them because it was so private and there was some kind of connection made. i know that jess is still his gf, but i don't want selah and justin to distance themselves. i don't want them to backtrack. they don't have to go forward immediately (obviously), but i just don't want them to get weird on each othere. eh. i guess i have to wait and see what happens next. please update soon! awesome job on this one. :o)

Author's Response: Firstly, you know you are so right about Justin giving her a little bit of confidence back everytime that they speak or interact with each other and I never thought of it that way, so thanks for pointing that out to me. Secondly, yeah I had to find someway for these two to release the tension that they had between them (without them taking their clothes off), so I decided on dancing and I just made it as sexy as possible *teehee*. Not only do YOU not want Ava or Nick or even Jessica to find out, but neither do the two of them so we\'ll see how well they can keep this under wraps without being awkward toward each other or giving something away. And trust me, after that chapter there is no going back for Selah and Justin. I love your reviews and thank you so much for taking the time to read and write one. ; )