Categories: In Progress Het Stories
Characters: Justin Timberlake
Awards: None
Genres: Drama, Humor, Romance
Series: None
Chapters: 20
Wordcount: 62091 - Hits: 58448
Complete?: No - Published: Jun 11, 2008 - Last Updated: Jan 20, 2009 -
giiiiirl...i'm freaking out over here! haha. how you write these insanely hot scenes that don't even involve the actual act of sex, i will never understand, but i hope you continue to do so. justin is fire and if i was her i'd want to get burned. haha. it seems that she was all for nick when she thought justin was unattainable, but now...yeah he may be with jess now, but if he broke up with her the next day he would be attainable you know? cause they both have a strong attraction to each other and have admitted it. nick has no claim over her so she shouldn't feel so restricted (if she does feel that way). and i think maybe she should take a step back and look at the nick situation because she said he was the first person in a long time to notice her, and well she could just feel a big attraction to him because of that, when they may be best as friends. kind of like it could be blinding her. of course, i could be totally wrong, but yeah. the ending kind of left me confused. i don't know if she's talking about justin or nick. i guess time will tell...haha. oh and i love your little phrases: dickmatize, caking with her, etc. they crack me up! keep up the amazing work! update soon! :o)
ok. that was hot. both scenes with nick and justin, but am i the only one that isn't happy that it happened? i don't know. i just think she went too fast. i feel like she's letting that ohmysomebodylikesme! feeling and hormones take over too much and make her "comfortable." i mean, good she doesn't regret it, but yeah. and i sure didn't like what just happened with her and justin. i mean...i did cause it was freakin' hot of course and i'm a perv, but you know. haha. justin just wants the best of both worlds, which is definitely not fair and him and selah both just hurt their significant others, even if those people don't find out. i just think that they just need to be miserable, or not fully happy, with their partners until they fess up to what they really want deep down AFTER they have ended the relationships. i don't want her to be a hussy either, but she just turned into one. haha. she did get two hot guys to please her though so on one hand i'm like, "go 'head girl!!" haha! i think her and j really need to talk more. serious talks and not ones filled with innuendos. one thing i don't understand: Ava was all about Nick being mischievous (in a way) at first, now she's all like, "how good a kisser is he?" and about head and all that...what happened? i don't know. i just think selah needs to be wary of both justin and nick, but for different reasons which i feel like if i explained my reasons would become a book instead of this essay. i don't know...just update soon woman! haha. please. :o)
i'm glad justin apologized, but i feel like selah is trying to play the victim here. i mean, don't get me wrong. justin is older and he should no better, but it's not like selah was pushing him away. she seemed fine until he denied her request to break up with jess. i know her past is hard on here so that didn't help the situation, but yeah. again, good for justin for apologizing and suggesting they get to know each other. personally, i just wish selah would break up with nick. i mean, if she's constantly thinking about justin it doesn't matter that she physically is leaving justin alone. he's still on her mind, plus she has guilt. the main reason i think she should break up with nick is so she gets to know herself better. i feel like she doesn't know herself enough. she needs "me time." concentrate on making herself better, gaining confidence, and work on going after her dreams. and i know i was all like, "man! ava needs to back off" at the beginning of the story, but now i'm thinking, "ok ava. get the leash on this girl." hahaha! :o)
Author's Response: I feel what you\'re saying and where you\'re coming from. I agree that Selah should have been stronger and smarter about her decisions when it came to getting involved with Justin and I think she tried to do so, but went about it in a messed up way that kind of made her look selfish. But at the same time I feel that since she doesn\'t have a lot of experience in the whole \"relationship/male\" area, she got herself involved in a very shitty situation and didn\'t really know how to get herself out of it on her own and I think Justin stepping up to the plate and suggesting that they start over as friends is going to give her that opportunity. I think the two of them starting over is going to get her to look at things, put them into perspective and help figure out what and who she wants in life because you\'re right, she doesn\'t know herself very well and that\'s why she keeps getting into these messes. Also, confessing to her sister I think was her cry for help because it\'s obvious that she\'s needs some outside assistance and guidance. As for breaking up with Nick...well they\'re even officially dating or anything, they\'re just involved with each other so Selah could easily break things off with him if she wanted to. But something tells me that Nick isn\'t going to make it easy for her to do so. Thank you SO much for reading and reviewing, I love your reviews...they make me think (haha).
and i must point out what i noticed today. you have 11s all over the place. 11th chapter (even though it's really 10 but whatever haha), began on june 11th, updated today july 11th. happy one month anniversary!! haha. i'm so cool. *heavy sarcasm* lol :o)
alright now. yay for justin and selah starting over as friends, but how long will that last? say justin and jess break up. yeah. it wouldn't last long. haha. great job for stepping up to her mom though. her mom needed to hear that. just because she's her "mom" that doesn't mean that she's not wrong, rude, or hurtful at times and doesn't need to hear it. selah kind of makes me mad now though. haha. i still feel like she just thinks it's all justin's fault. yes, she recognizes that she needs to be more careful and needs to make herself happy, etc. but come on...you're wrong too. you play mind games too. and the only time she's like, "justin who?" is when nick is all up on her or encouraging her. what would she be saying if jt started being encouraging and having meaninful convos with her? gaaaah i don't know. i just think she needs to cool it. she has justin down, but nick too. i just think they need to take it slow cause like she said they aren't official so all this "boo" and stuff...*shakes finger* haha. update soon ma'am! i hope your internet comes back soon! :o)
i don't really have anything much to say about this chapter. for once. haha. all i can say is that while i read it i made the following noises in no particular order: uuuuuuh..., hmmm..., oooh kaaaaaay..., uuuh huh... haha. update soon! :o)
Author's Response: LMAO! Well I guess I can understand why you made those noises because there was some questionable lines in there. But I hope you enjoyed it and thanks for reading and reviewing!
you kill me. haha. see ava was talking and i was like, "that's right. say it! you are speaking the truth." then selah was agreeing and saying stuff that made me go, "yes. you are seeing the light." then what she thought after nick was being all cute and i was like, "well crap...that didn't last long." haha. i just hope she meant that she could see herself with him later. much later and not like in a few days. haha. but she's young and confused so i'll give her a break, but she should definitely listen to her sister. maybe over the break justin and selah will be able to talk more seriously and get to know each other better since he has her number now. oh, and that first part was hot. you already knew that though right? haha. i hope you get to feeling a lot better soon! :o)
Author's Response: Hahaha, girl you crack me up. But not to worry, I can openly say that Selah will be taking some notes from her sister and as for her decision on making her and Nick official? Well you\'ll find out about that pretty soon too...dammit, I need you to quit walking about in my brain because you know too much! Haha. As for Justin and Selah getting to know each other over this break, well that\'s going to start happening pretty soon as well so we\'ll see how that goes and how everything pans out before Australia. Thanks so much for reading, reviewing, and the love. I appreciate it and I hope I start feeling better too. ; )
dang it. i'm pissed. i caught up and read the chapter before this new one (which i have not yet read) and posted two reviews and they were long and so good and now they are gone since the archive moved! waaaaaah!! :o( haha. dang it. thought i'd share my pain with you. thanks for listening. ;o)
i'm about to explode over here! RAJKFJIAJOW!!! you kill me briana! omygoshohmygosh! i can't even deny that i'm happy about what just happened. her dream...it just all came together. what i'm most happy about is that she is happy this happened and doesn't regret it. i'm happy she realized that she was never over her feelings for justin, that her first time was so sweet and beautiful and hot, and when she said that she wants and cares about nick but she wants, cares, and needs justin i was just like, "the end." haha! seriously though, justin...that boy...man! but i know nick is still in the pic, and i could only hope that this all goes smoothly, but i'm not stupid and i know some mess is about to go down. i hope your move back to school went smoothly. update soon! :o)
Author's Response: My other favorite reviewer! (haha). Well I\'m SO glad that you enjoyed it, I know that almost everybody was waiting for them to get down but I just had to find the right time. Justin has definitely opened a part of her that she was trying to keep buried deep down inside when it comes to him and with Nick still in the picture, she has a decision to make. So yeah, Australia is most likely going to be pretty messy with two dudes tugging on each of her arms. But we shall see what happens... ; ) Thanks so much for all the love, support, and awesome reviews girlie. I appreciate them so much and I\'m glad that you\'ve been enjoying this story.
my other favorite author!! haha. :o) i hope your computer gets back to top shape again. i lurk daily on jjb and i hope your roomie situation gets worked out. been there. incredibly frustrating. anyway, i got my fingers crossed for you and all us other college students, and i hope we are able to stay sane (or as sane as we can) during the semester. haha. :o)
Author's Response: *Gives you a HUGE hug* Serisously, this year isn\'t starting off too great so it means a lot to have your words of encouragement. And yes girl, I hope I stay sane throughout it all too (haha). Again thank you for always being such an awesome reader and reviewer, I appreciate it so much. Btw, I was reading your little bio on here and I\'m a Pisces too! Just thought I would let you know (haha).
i may or may have not been lurking the JTPC as usual and saw the idea of this story start there and have hope that it would be written. i may or may not be reeeally glad that it was too. haha. awesome job. :o)
Author's Response: EEP A JTPCEr!!! I'm glad you liked it! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
so sweet and romantic and sexy. i really liked it. great job. :o)
awww! this is really good so far. me likey. they are so cute with their little touches and stuff. they just need to get their feelings out in the open. update soon! :o)
Author's Response: I'm glad you like it. Isn't that always how a new love is with all the little touches and smiles and giddiness? I'm working on that update right now so it should be up soon.
well that sure was awesome as a first attempt! haha. i loooove that she tricked him. that was great. :o)
Author's Response: Thanks so much.
ohmygoooosh. *faints* this was freaking hot girl. i'll call justin "daddy" any day! ha. i love the jtpc. :o)