Penname: MochaB [Contact] Real name:
Member Since: Sep 08, 2007
Membership status: Member
Bio:
25. Pisces. Born and raised Texan. I've been reading fan fiction for many, many years now. It's my secret little pleasure in life. My love of *NSYNC and JT is my not-so-secret pleasure in life and I like it that way.
Twitter: brittneymo
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Slow Dance by Gabo (NC-17) starstarstarstarstar [Comments - 70]

They were drawn to each other the moment they met. But is lust enough to keep them together? Or will Kelen's heart lose the battle against her head?

Time might stop and i'm ok with that
Two left feet, your smile cracks
Your grace makes up for my lack
Slow turn and we're back in step again...



Categories: In Progress Het Stories
Characters: Justin Timberlake
Awards: None
Genres: Angst, Drama, Romance

Series: None
Chapters: 22
Wordcount: 129378 - Hits: 65159
Complete?: No - Published: Oct 31, 2007 - Last Updated: Aug 26, 2008 -
Reviewer: MochaB Signed
Date: Aug 27, 2008 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

an update! yaaaay!! i'm glad they made up...kind of. well they did, but justin sounds like he's not completely over it, which i can understand. hope that doesn't cause a problem. and kelen and her weight loss and stress levels? i don't think it's going to end well. i sense some good, especially for justin if  he gets laid haha, but also some more drama coming. i hope you uupdate soon. hope your move in went nicely too! :o)

a little phone sex never hurt anyone...

Categories: Completed Het Stories
Characters: Justin Timberlake
Awards: None
Genres: Romance

Series: None
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 2491 - Hits: 2146
Complete?: Yes - Published: Nov 07, 2007 - Last Updated: Nov 07, 2007 -
Reviewer: MochaB Signed
Date: Sep 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Not a Problem

I know you wrote this forever ago, but I just read it and it is awesome. Very sexy indeed. Great job. :o)

Heat by SexualCoco (NC-17) starstarstarstarhalf-star [Comments - 3]
It's hot as hell outside. But mixing you and Justin together will only make it hotter...

Disclaimer: This is rated NC-17 for a reason, so if you're not down with going down, I suggest that you not read this one.

Categories: Completed Het Stories
Characters: Justin Timberlake
Awards: None
Genres: Romance

Series: JTPC POTD Series
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 1337 - Hits: 3414
Complete?: Yes - Published: Nov 19, 2007 - Last Updated: Nov 19, 2007 -
Reviewer: MochaB Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: Apr 14, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

wow! that was dirty girl...the really good kind of dirty. haha. :o)

In a world of eroticism, Diane Blossom is one of the most sought after ecdysiasts. She’s a performer, entertainer and mother. Her job description is anything but appealing and her employer is none other than the ruthless hotshot Justin Timberlake himself. He however, is anything but kind and pleasant. Wanting out of this life is Diane’s main goal, not just for herself but for the younger life she is responsible for. However, finding a way out would prove to be more challenging and dangerous than she thought. And it’s all because she ended up meeting him on the job…



Categories: Completed Het Stories
Characters: JC Chasez, Justin Timberlake
Awards: Season 4
Genres: Alternate Universe, Angst, Drama, Romance, Suspense

Series: None
Chapters: 18
Wordcount: 122665 - Hits: 75669
Complete?: Yes - Published: Dec 07, 2007 - Last Updated: May 22, 2008 -
Reviewer: MochaB Signed
Date: Jul 27, 2008 Title: Chapter 18: The Epilogue

oh my gosh donna. i have been meaning to read this story before you finished it and never got around to it until now, and oh my gosh. it was amazing. seriously. i was instantly hooked and so drawn in by these characters. it was very refreshing to read a story depicting justin as you did. it's like you want to hate him, but you can't when you see how tormented he is and how he was really trying to change, how he was really a good guy deep down. ugh. i felt like i was right there in it all! haha. you time it all so well and made it so realistic. you seriously did such a wonderful job. this will always be a top 5 favorite in my book. now on to read the beginnings of the follow-up and probably read this one again. again, amazing job ma'am. :o)

Author's Response: So it's been forever since I've been on the archive because I've been crazy occupied with school and then my laptop had issues and all that jazz. It's getting fixed. :) But, I saw this comment and girl, you just made me so happy with that review. I was like wow, that's an amazing compliment and I loved that you enjoyed this tale so much. Reviews like that make an author so happy. I'm so glad you were that into the story. hehehe. I truely appreicate all the reviews I get from the readers for my stories so thanks so much for sitting down and telling me how much you liked this one. That means a lot. Glad you liked it! :) I should be back to the updates soon. Hope you enjoy the second too. thanks again girl! Means a lot! :)

Lourdes Washington was the daughter very few people knew Johnny Wright had. When she is forced to move in with him and allow him to help her face her demons, she finds herself finding more than just her healing.

Categories: In Progress Het Stories
Characters: Group, Justin Timberlake
Awards: None
Genres: Angst, Drama, Humor, Romance

Series: None
Chapters: 9
Wordcount: 26139 - Hits: 20272
Complete?: No - Published: Dec 15, 2007 - Last Updated: Jan 12, 2008 -
Reviewer: MochaB Signed
Date: Sep 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Iknow you haven't added to this in a looooong, long time but I really hope you decide to do so one day soon. I randomly came upon it tonight and couldn't stop once I started. I really love it and would love to read more. :o)

Closer by Ally (NC-17) starstarstarstarstar [Comments - 6]
"I wanna feel you from the inside..."

Categories: Completed Het Stories
Characters: Justin Timberlake
Awards: None
Genres: General

Series: None
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 955 - Hits: 2940
Complete?: Yes - Published: Jan 03, 2008 - Last Updated: Jan 03, 2008 -
Reviewer: MochaB Signed
Date: Jul 24, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Closer

*faints* just...yes. It gets straight to the point from the get-go. All kinds of kinky goodness! Haha. The last line made me laugh a little. :o)

Is it too much to ask to just be able to understand?
Can one male pop star/actor help a girl whose just getting he feet wet in the acting buissness? Help her understand herself and all that she is? Can one girl help a pop star who has written off all things love related, and give him and understanding of true love? Or will both fail to understand

Categories: In Progress Het Stories
Characters: Justin Timberlake
Awards: None
Genres: Celebrity/Celebrity, Drama, Humor, Romance

Series: None
Chapters: 24
Wordcount: 43395 - Hits: 50208
Complete?: No - Published: Jan 10, 2008 - Last Updated: Jan 24, 2009 -
Reviewer: MochaB Signed
Date: Jun 21, 2008 Title: Chapter 17: Date Night

ow ow!! sexiness! haha. i really like your story so far. i love how belinda is still feisty and can take it as dish it right back to justin and trace, although she's having a hard time finding herself and all this new found chaos. and boy if i don't love how j and bel treat each other...and how they are about to treat each other. *giggles* haha. i'm so glad they finally went on a date. now i hope they start a relationship and forget about this whole "only fooling around" stuff. it's obvious they have deep feelings for one another. update soon! :o)

Author's Response: Congrats u have the official honor of giving me my longest review to date lol\r\nThis is actually the 2nd date I wrote I hated the 1st one I wrote lol\r\nAnd yes a little sexy time and hopefully if these two buck up more to come ;)\r\n\r\nHopefully justins insecurities won\'t get in the way, because we can all ignore how we feel but it never really goes away

Reviewer: MochaB Signed
Date: Jul 31, 2008 Title: Chapter 19: No Time Like The Present But I'm Damaged

saucey. haha. i really enjoy this story, and like you said, "finally!" i like updates. haha. anyway, i like that they are getting closer, but i feel they are holding back so much, especially justin. i hope they can both open up more, become more sure of their feelings and what they want, and that their relationship continues to grow. and i hope she gets her stuff figured out with her family. sometimes, you just need to not answer the phone. update soon please. :o)

Author's Response: They both want to open up to each other and with the family issues for b she is in a way but justin... as much as he tries he\'s still holding back. Glad u like the sauceyness...if that\'s even a word hehe

Reviewer: MochaB Signed
Date: Feb 06, 2009 Title: Chapter 24: Drinking Game and Meaningless Apologies

i can't wait to see how their day goes, if you write about it that is. haha. i really don't understand why she continues to answer the phone when people from home call. she shouldn't just like justin said. that was a waste of cell phone minutes. i don't see them having some big revelation about how terrible they are anytime soon. she should just be happy with the people that do truly care about her that she has in her life and forget about the rest. anyway, good chapter. update soon! :o)

Author's Response: how can i not write about the day i mean as nice as Belinda may come off to people Lynn is still going to want to interrogate the girl that her son is interested in.\r\nI agree she should stop answering her phone whenever family come a callin\' but she has guilt riding on her shoulders if she doesn\'t answer and is still hoping for a turn around which like you i don\'t see happening any time soon.\r\n\r\nthanks for the review love, glad your enjoying it

Bryne James must have missed the appeal that all of America was stuck on when it came to Justin Timberlake. Even now, after six months of knowing him, she still had yet to find it. Now that they are forced into business, Bryne has to swallow her disdain to take hold of a once in a lifetime opportunity.



Categories: In Progress Het Stories
Characters: Justin Timberlake
Awards: None
Genres: Romance

Series: None
Chapters: 40
Wordcount: 90799 - Hits: 96827
Complete?: No - Published: Jan 10, 2008 - Last Updated: May 30, 2010 -
Reviewer: MochaB Signed
Date: Feb 20, 2008 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 11 b

ok...that was the hottest thing ever and it wasn't even sex! seriously! i don't even want to think about what you will write when they actually do do the deed because it will happen...hopefully soon. haha. I would like her to break it off with Miranda though, and if he actually wants her like he's said he does, he knows he should break it off with Cam and Belinda. But I don't know...all i know is that that was amazing. haha! i love this story. keep it coming please! :o)

Reviewer: MochaB Signed
Date: Feb 22, 2008 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 12

juuuustiiiiiin!!! :oD haha. that was great! he is so gone. i love it. :o) she is too she just keeps fighting it, but i love how he keeps surprising her with his behavior and what he says. i'm happy they didn't have sex, and i really hope they don't (although it will be hot haha) until they get to know each other better. More importantly until she tells him about Miranda and he gives his other girls the boot. I think he's not going to be happy about her and Miranda, so i think that will bring a new set of drama.  update soon please!

Reviewer: MochaB Signed
Date: Jun 09, 2008 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 20

oh my goooosh. ugh! i'm so frustrated. i'm so mad at bryne. she needs to freakin' speak! my gosh! seriously...stop groping at each other and talk. she needs to tell him how she feels because the more they just keep going from saying nothing to having sex, it's not going to fix anything (as that was shown in this chapter) and whatever they had will be over because of that. yeah that paps are terrible and all that, but i mean yall can't even talk to each other? tell each other how yall feel about each other? that will be the breaking point. justin has already told her he can't stop loving her, but byrne...she needs to choose justin and end her relationship with Miranda once and for all. you can only cry for so long before you have to take some action. ugh. man...you got me going with this story girl. haha. update soon please! :o) 

Reviewer: MochaB Signed
Date: Jul 07, 2008 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 21

i don't think i've ever reviewed this story, but i must let you know how much i absolutely love it. it's kept me pulled in since i started reading it and it continues to do so with each update. this one was definitely no different. my gosh...wow. i can't wait to see what happens next. update soon please. :o)

Reviewer: MochaB Signed
Date: Jul 17, 2008 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 22

oh.my.gosh. i'm so pissed at bryne. grow some balls! haha. seriously! she's wrong all the way around. i'm rooting for justin, but i would have a very hard time even wanting her after this. right now, i want him to not want her! it's bad enough she was dating a woman while she was having sex with him, but then she goes and sleeps with his friend?!?! once again, the alcohol was there. maybe she needs therapy. i'm pissed at jc too for even taking advantage of the situation. i mean if she was really feeling all that guilt and didn't want that she could have said no. i don't see an excuse. ugh! update soon please.

Justin's jaded. But he's not the only one.

Hey jaded
In all it's misery
It will always be what I love and hated
And maybe take a ride to the other side
We're thinkin' of
We'll slip into the velvet glove
And be jaded


- Aerosmith (Jaded)

Categories: Completed Het Stories
Characters: Justin Timberlake
Awards: None
Genres: Humor, Romance

Series: None
Chapters: 12
Wordcount: 19892 - Hits: 22722
Complete?: Yes - Published: Feb 04, 2008 - Last Updated: Apr 25, 2009 -
Reviewer: MochaB Signed
Date: Jul 26, 2008 Title: Chapter 9: What the Girl Wants

haha. i loved the fan fiction talk. i love jtpc too! bunch of crazies. haha. anyway, i find that noah telling justin that she was going to try to sleep with him sooo funny. things definitely just got deeper. i can't wait to find out why and how justin is there though. udpate soon! :o)