Reviewer: Nakia Signed
Date: Nov 08, 2007
Title: Chapter 16: Conspiracy of Fools
I should start doing these damn reviews as I go because every time I get to the end of your chapters I get stuck on wanting to comment on the end...lol. First let me say that the Chocolate Dud thing is funny but that it's really messed up Ian is all in Azaria's business like that and needs his nosy ass kicked. That is SO unprofessional. Also, I super love Ms. Janet and the pinching of the cheeks, the money offer from JT's new client, and holy wow, you DID NOT take it there with the sex in the closet! Azaria kinda reminded me of self during that conversation that happened in there as limited as the conversation was but I'm going to keep that in my back pocket. lol. Loved the update! Write me more soon! Still my fav story!