Penname: Nik [Contact] Real name: Nikki
Member Since: Nov 07, 2007
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First, Justin had mistaken her for a boy. Secondly, he criticized her for the way she dressed. And the icing on the cake…her older sister and not she, was the cause of all his wet dreams. Yet, twelve years later who is he married to…yes her. Ironic isn't it?

Note: Some chapters are set in the past.

Categories: In Progress Het Stories
Characters: Justin Timberlake
Awards: None
Genres: Alternate Universe, Angst, Drama, Romance

Series: None
Chapters: 7
Wordcount: 42425 - Hits: 22919
Complete?: No - Published: Apr 07, 2007 - Last Updated: Dec 31, 2007 -
Reviewer: Nakia Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Dec 15, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Every Relationship Has a Casualty

Yoohoo and Mr. Pee-Body...BOGUS! lol. As before I have nothing else to say about that intro except that I'm glad Darnell doesn't have an itchy trigger finger!

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Date: Dec 15, 2007 Title: Chapter 2: Taste the Familiar

Andrew is kinda bogus for dragging Justin into that situation to begin with but such is life, right? lol. Darnell is a bad ass with all of that flipping of the bird but it's funny seeing how they started out together so long ago with that love/hate relationship. I'm mad he got a stiffy though...once again, keyword: BOGUS! haha!

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Date: Dec 15, 2007 Title: Chapter 3: Tight-lipped Therapy Session

"What in the Grey Goose hell?" HAHAH! Victoria has her dirty nerve trying to tell her daughter how to live her life but I guess she's been doing that for years so it's no shock. Just a little BOGUS, lol...sad that the therapy session didn't seem to be beneficial that round but there are more coming, right? Maybe Justin has a sex addiction or something? Had to make him get another hard-on while at the dance didn't you? And that Whitney...? I hope she has an ass kicking coming in the near future!

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Date: Dec 15, 2007 Title: Chapter 4: New vs.Old

Darrien is a douche and I hope someone does kick his ass...you should show him as some old bald guy with a beer belly in the future...just a thought! Ha!

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Date: Dec 15, 2007 Title: Chapter 5: Untitled

Damn she is mean as hell to him! I know they have issues but she's more mad at her mother than anyone else and shouldn't go cutting him off like that as a result. Where the hell is Davis? He needs to talk some sense into his wife so she'll stop getting her child all riled up and out of control.

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Date: Dec 15, 2007 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5: Untitled

ooh, Drew got Darrien preggers back in the day? i have to know the details. update soon.

NEW CHAPTER 11/26, 8,000+ words. Enjoy! What does it mean to treat a person as an object? It means you use that person to get what you want without particular regard to what happens to them or how they feel. At one extreme you would not even care if you actually cause harm. More frequently harm is not intended, but the well being of the person you are using is of little or no concern to you. What is of concern to you is to get what you want, which in this case is sex even if it kills you...

Categories: In Progress Het Stories
Characters: Justin Timberlake
Awards: None
Genres: Alternate Universe, Angst, Drama, Romance

Series: None
Chapters: 17
Wordcount: 76382 - Hits: 48931
Complete?: No - Published: Apr 07, 2007 - Last Updated: Nov 26, 2007 -
Reviewer: Nakia Signed
Date: Nov 08, 2007 Title: Chapter 16: Conspiracy of Fools

I should start doing these damn reviews as I go because every time I get to the end of your chapters I get stuck on wanting to comment on the end...lol. First let me say that the Chocolate Dud thing is funny but that it's really messed up Ian is all in Azaria's business like that and needs his nosy ass kicked. That is SO unprofessional. Also, I super love Ms. Janet and the pinching of the cheeks, the money offer from JT's new client, and holy wow, you DID NOT take it there with the sex in the closet! Azaria kinda reminded me of self during that conversation that happened in there as limited as the conversation was but I'm going to keep that in my back pocket. lol. Loved the update! Write me more soon! Still my fav story!

Reviewer: Nakia Signed
Date: Nov 26, 2007 Title: Chapter 17: The Contradictory Nature of Azaria Richards

I'm mad he 'cuffed her! LMAO! That was great! As always I'm now awaiting the next chapter but this was definitely an amazing update. It was super cute when they started claiming one another for the first time. Aww....love. lol

Author's Response: Lmao, look at you wishing love for them already. It was cute even though she tried to correct it lol. He had to cuff her or else she would have been gone by the time he left! Glad you enjoyed it thanks for reading Nikki.

But this new person was everything her Justin was not. That person looked like he hadn't showered in days, his expensive clothes looked like they needed a trip through the washing machine and you couldn't even see his once beautiful face becuase the scraggly beard over took his features. His eyes were the same though; that deep blue that felt like they were piercing right through your soul. She would never truly escape from his eyes and everytime his name flashed across her tv or an old picture of him popped up in a magazine, her heart would flutter like a butterflies wings. He was so beautiful back then her breath would literally catch in her throat. It awed her that she was once so in love with a man.

Categories: In Progress Het Stories
Characters: Justin Timberlake
Awards: None
Genres: Angst, Drama, Romance

Series: None
Chapters: 22
Wordcount: 39980 - Hits: 58659
Complete?: No - Published: Apr 13, 2007 - Last Updated: Oct 08, 2008 -
Reviewer: Nakia Signed
Date: Nov 27, 2007 Title: Chapter 8: seven

Oh, shit, I'm scared!!! LOL. There is going to be a serious ass snap off isn't there? Man...interventions can be some serious shit but good lord I don't want him to jump outta that bed swinging! Update soon! You know you rocked it!

Reviewer: Nakia Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 03, 2008 Title: Chapter 18: seventeen

This update was beautiful. I'm so happy all the sessions have been working for them and that they're kind of finding each other again...damn that hail storm, lol.

Bittersweet... You're gonna be the death of me... I don't want you ... But I need you ... I hate you and love you at the very same time ...

Categories: In Progress Het Stories
Characters: Justin Timberlake
Awards: None
Genres: Drama

Series: None
Chapters: 15
Wordcount: 67837 - Hits: 45601
Complete?: No - Published: May 25, 2007 - Last Updated: Feb 22, 2008 -
Reviewer: Nakia Signed
Date: Nov 27, 2007 Title: Chapter 13: Take A Seat

Oh, damn, she's gonna confess!? OMG, you better update this soon. I'm all up at arms about this chapter. First, I love Jessica Alba so I'm hurt that he hurt her like that even though I know what he's going through...and then there's that devilish Theresa...man...just write me some newness and THANK YOU for updating! Love ya!

Undeniable by Chamile (NC-17) starstarstarstarstar [Comments - 40]
Meeting a celebrity in downtown Chicago isn't unusual, but becoming an instant part of his life is.  In Undeniable, Justin find himself mingling with a girl who's not like the rest. Her unique personality keeps him intrigued, and he goes to great lengths to keep a relationship going throughout his hectic schedule. With the threat of cheating and constant fighting, will these two make it through, or will she just be another notch on his belt?

Categories: In Progress Het Stories
Characters: Justin Timberlake
Awards: None
Genres: Romance

Series: None
Chapters: 16
Wordcount: 38364 - Hits: 39493
Complete?: No - Published: Nov 25, 2007 - Last Updated: Dec 18, 2007 -
Reviewer: Nakia Signed
Date: Nov 26, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

LOL. He is such a tease and she likes it even though she's trying to deny it! Ha! Loves it...moving on to the next chapter.

Reviewer: Nakia Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Nov 26, 2007 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Aww, that was sweet of him. So maybe he's not a bastard huh? lol Great writing.

Everything has gone to Hell in a hand basket, and still we continue this dance we call 'love.'

Categories: Completed Het Stories
Characters: Justin Timberlake
Awards: None
Genres: Drama
Challenges: Awesome August! 2010

Series: None
Chapters: 3
Wordcount: 1752 - Hits: 5035
Complete?: Yes - Published: Aug 12, 2010 - Last Updated: Aug 12, 2010 -
Reviewer: Nik Signed
Date: Oct 03, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Justin

Life-Changing...I love your writing.

Author's Response: thank you so much! i love yours as well :)

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Justin Timberlake is the top FBI agent in his field.  Head of the missing persons unit, he’s sought out and recovered dozens of people over the years, only to have his marriage fall apart in the end.  He’s depressed, that’s a given, but he’s always remained focused on his work.

Gracey Starvich has a gift.  She can see things.  Most people take her for a joke, but for the few that don’t, she uses her gifts to better the lives of innocent people.  Offered the job of a lifetime from the FBI, she’s eager to put her gifts to the test once and for all.

But Justin has never been one for psychic phenomenon.



Categories: In Progress Het Stories
Characters: Justin Timberlake
Awards: None
Genres: Action/Adventure, Alternate Universe, Angst, Drama, Horror, Mystery, Romance, Suspense

Series: None
Chapters: 20
Wordcount: 66255 - Hits: 14349
Complete?: No - Published: Aug 27, 2013 - Last Updated: Oct 22, 2014 -
Reviewer: Nik Signed
Date: Dec 09, 2014 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19

Heeyyyyyyyy....UPDATE! LBVS