Penname: azchickadee [Contact] Real name: Cheryl
Member Since: Nov 28, 2007
Membership status: Member
Bio:

The fantasy: one of them choosing one of us

twenty-something, addicted to music, love to write, working on my Master's in psychology, waiting to fall in love...

 


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A Life of Half Truths by Leo (R) [Comments - 33]
The demo is quickly approaching, and the guys are doing everything in their power to be ready, thinking success is just around the corner. But when JC gains unwanted attention from Lou, he finds that there's a higher cost to their futures than just long rehearsal hours.

Categories: Completed Het Stories
Characters: Group, JC Chasez
Awards: None
Genres: Angst, Drama

Series: None
Chapters: 17
Wordcount: 83875 - Hits: 58268
Complete?: Yes - Published: Jan 19, 2009 - Last Updated: Jul 01, 2009 -
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Date: Feb 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

oh my gosh I HATE him!!  He needs to rot in hell for what he's doing.  It makes me want to cry for JC. 

Author's Response:

I'm sorry that you want to cry for JC. Hopefully I'm not bringing you down too much because there may be more hatred towards Lou before the story's over.

Thanks for your comment!

Reviewer: azchickadee Signed
Date: Feb 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I'm hooked on this story.  But I'm scared too...does JC tell any of the other guys what's going on? 

Author's Response:

I don't really want to say. You're just going to have to keep reading to find out, but I promise that things get a lot more complex.

Thanks for the review! 

Reviewer: azchickadee Signed
Date: Apr 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Noooo!  Again?  It happened again?!  *sigh* I should have known things were going too easily.  You have to have conflict. A storyline doesn't work without a conflict, I know this and yet I wish it weren't so!  lol

I want to give Joey a great big hug though for everything he's trying to do for JC. And poor Justin, thinking his friendship with JC is in danger! 

You better fix everything in the end...lol...



Author's Response:

Yes, I've created so much drama with all of them, haven't I? They just make it too easy, especially JC. Angst just seems to be drawn to him, lol.

I'm still working on the ending, but I think you'll like it. :)

Reviewer: azchickadee Signed
Date: Mar 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Okay, I just have to say:  I LOVE the way you've captured each of the guys' personalities!  I know how hard that is to do (at least is was for me...the couple of times in my story where all five of them were together stressed me out like nothing else, trying to get them all right!  lol) 

 



Author's Response:

Thanks! I really tried to make sure I captured their personality in this time and place. I always normally focus on anaylzing their personalities and making sure that everything they do in the story makes sense based on that, but this time was especially difficult. In all of my other stories, they've been friends for years so they had this great friendship built up. But in this one, their friendship is in its beginning stages so their dynamic would be different.

But anyway, thanks for the kind words! I love writing group fiction, and I'm glad to see that you appreciate the little stuff. :)

Reviewer: azchickadee Signed
Date: Mar 24, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Awesome chapter!  I missed you last week...but this was worth the wait :) 

I love Justin!  He's so easy to picture in these scenes.  I love the relationship starting to form between the five of them, and I'm really glad that JC has the guys around him right now but he needs to talk. He needs to tell someone what's happened before he makes himself even sicker. 



Author's Response:

I'm glad that you can picture Justin so easily. It'd been a bit of struggle to make sure he wasn't coming off as a total bratty kid. And yeah, JC's being so secretive...as usual, lol.

Thanks so much for the review! I always enjoy hearing what you think. :)

Reviewer: azchickadee Signed
Date: Mar 30, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

great chapter!  I don't know what else to say...lol...I was kind of hoping that Lynn would drag it out of JC finally, but maybe next time?? 

Looking forward to next week's update...  :)



Author's Response:

Nah, that would've been too easy if Lynn had gotten JC to talk, lol. JC's pretty stubborn, so he stupidly hangs onto things when he shouldn't.

I think you'll really like next week's chapter. ;) Thanks for the positive words!

Reviewer: azchickadee Signed
Date: Apr 06, 2009 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Yea for Joey!!  Oh, I so relieved JC finally told someone!  Great chapter as usual!! :)

Author's Response:

I figured you would be, and yes it was about time, lol. I'm happy to hear that you're still enjoying yourself.

Thanks again for the kind words!

Reviewer: azchickadee Signed
Date: Apr 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Initial reactions:

Yes!  Go Chris!!!  It's about time someone puched Lou! 

Awe!  Poor JC!  I just want to give him a hug.  This is going to be so painful for him...



Author's Response:

I had so much fun writing Chris's reaction because it was really deserved, and really Chris was the perfect guy to do it, lol. And yes, JC has it pretty rough. As usual, there will be more drama before I end the story so he's going to have to cope with other stuff.

Thanks for letting me know what you thought about the chapter! I love hearing your comments!

Reviewer: azchickadee Signed
Date: May 04, 2009 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

oh good grief!  the drama continues!  lol...great update.  Can't wait for more :)

Author's Response:

Lol, yes, but things will be settling down soon.

Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: azchickadee Signed
Date: May 17, 2009 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

awesome update, as usual!  :)  I'm glad JC decided to press charges.  Yea for Justin saying the right thing and making him change his mind!  :( Boo for Lance leaving. 

Can't wait for the next update!



Author's Response:

Yeah, it was great writing Justin as the one to convince JC to press charges but in an indirect way. It was nice to finally show Justin acting less like a kid.

Thanks for the review! I'll try to update soon.

Reviewer: azchickadee Signed
Date: Jun 11, 2009 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

only one chapter left?!  What do you mean there's only one chapter left?? Are you planning a sequel?

Author's Response: Yeah, one chapter left. I don't plan to do a sequel. But I do have another story in the works that I'm currently brainstorming for and that I'll post here once I start writing it.

Welcome Home (Final in the series) by Cassy (PG) [Comments - 2]
I'm excited to be going back, but dreading it at the same time. I wouldn't be returning if it weren't for my dad's incessant begging. And Josh.

Categories: Completed Het Stories
Characters: JC Chasez
Awards: None
Genres: Drama

Series: Love Of a Lifetime
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 7961 - Hits: 1348
Complete?: Yes - Published: Jan 20, 2009 - Last Updated: Jan 20, 2009 -
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Date: Jan 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

sigh...I just read all three parts to this series!  Oh my goodness!  My heart was breaking for both of them, but I'm so happy they finally had the courage to tell each other how they felt!  Great job :)

Author's Response: Aww! You're the first person to ever leave me feedback, thank you so much! I'm really glad you liked it.

All I Wanna Do... by MissM (NC-17) starstarstar [Comments - 292]
Past Featured Story

Corporate drone Serena Willis is living an existence that seems just fine, until she meets a celebrity on a flight to LA. Not just any celebrity, but one she's been dreaming about meeting for a long time. Trapped together as they fly to LA, they begin to talk and sparks fly. Serena takes a chance, and they hit it off. But will this be just a weekend fling, or is this more than they bargained for?



Categories: Completed Het Stories
Characters: JC Chasez
Awards: Season 5, Season 6, Season 8
Genres: Romance

Series: None
Chapters: 70
Wordcount: 557241 - Hits: 396649
Complete?: Yes - Published: Jan 29, 2009 - Last Updated: Feb 22, 2011 -
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Date: Mar 28, 2010 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 42: Road Trippin' It With JC: A Little Less Conversation

great chapter!!!  serioulsy, I think this one was awesome....lots of things going on that were all important and hopefully setting the stage for some big changes coming down the road :)  I'm anxious to see how Serena's move to LA goes! 

Author's Response: Thank you, and yep, setting the stage but they have a ways to go. I think Serena's dream was really telling about what's going on inside of her. What she wants vs what she feels she deserves. 

Reviewer: azchickadee Signed
Date: Sep 22, 2010 Title: Chapter 60: Chapter 53: When the Cat's Away, All Hell Breaks Loose

so much drama!  lol...I'm glad Tyler wasn't hurt anymore than he was, but the way he acted about the party was unacceptable, drunk or not.  I hope JC gives him a stern talking to when he gets home.  Maybe it's time for Tyler to move out? 

Author's Response:

I think so but it may take a life event in order for it to happen. He's a smidge too comfortable and JC isn't QUITE doing enough about it. I was actually excited about this chapter and excited about the chapters to come. Lots of good stuff and poor, poor Serena. Gonna put that girl through the ringer! 

 

Reviewer: azchickadee Signed
Date: May 09, 2010 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 44: Road Trippin' It With JC, The Final Chapter: Going Home

"It would be the last time we'd fall asleep together for awhile."  sounds like things are about to get crazy and busy for our two love birds.  Hope they're strong enough to get through whatever drama's coming up!  :)

Author's Response: These crazy kids can get through anything... I think....................