Penname: azchickadee [Contact] Real name: Cheryl
Member Since: Nov 28, 2007
Membership status: Member
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The fantasy: one of them choosing one of us

twenty-something, addicted to music, love to write, working on my Master's in psychology, waiting to fall in love...

 


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Corporate drone Serena Willis is living an existence that seems just fine, until she meets a celebrity on a flight to LA. Not just any celebrity, but one she's been dreaming about meeting for a long time. Trapped together as they fly to LA, they begin to talk and sparks fly. Serena takes a chance, and they hit it off. But will this be just a weekend fling, or is this more than they bargained for?



Categories: Completed Het Stories
Characters: JC Chasez
Awards: Season 5, Season 6, Season 8
Genres: Romance

Series: None
Chapters: 70
Wordcount: 557241 - Hits: 396649
Complete?: Yes - Published: Jan 29, 2009 - Last Updated: Feb 22, 2011 -
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Reviewer: azchickadee Signed
Date: Dec 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 44: Ch. 39: Road Trippin' it With JC: Learning a Lesson

Loved it!  I've missed these two.  :)

Author's Response: Thanks for reading it! 

Reviewer: azchickadee Signed
Date: Feb 22, 2011 Title: Chapter 70: Ch 63: By The Light of The Silv'ry Moon (Pt 2)

*standing ovation*  I'm so impressed!  This story has been amazing to read, the characters were so real and in-depth, and the emotions you are able to portray in your writing often leaves me in awe.  Thank you for allowing us all to be a part of this journey!! :)

any chance of a one-shot of Serena and JC's wedding???



Author's Response: Thank you! I've always appreciated your wonderful reviews. :) I didn't have a wedding scene in mind for them but I'll think on it. If it comes to me, I'll write it but the story never got that far in my head. 

Reviewer: azchickadee Signed
Date: Sep 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 34: Road Trippin' it with JC: Bowie, Baby! (pt2)

Okay, so I haven't reviewed yet, but I wanted to let you know that I am really liking this story! I've been frantically trying to read through the chapters and catch up. 

Awesome story!  Can't wait to see what else is in store for these two  :)



Author's Response: Cool, thanks for letting me know you're reading it! That makes me happy! Take your time, I think I need to decompress after this last chapter, so you'll have time to catch up!

Reviewer: azchickadee Signed
Date: Jan 05, 2010 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 40: Road Trippin' it with JC: Simple

loved it!  I loved all their talk about their different family's Christmas traditions and was laughing out loud about the whole blue theme fiasco...that would have been hilarious if it were true!!  They're so cute together :)

Author's Response: I think they're adorable. So close to my heart. :) Thank you! 

Reviewer: azchickadee Signed
Date: Oct 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 36 | In Old New York (Pt2)

okay, they are too stinkin' cute together!  loved it :)

Author's Response: Lol. I try, I try.

Reviewer: azchickadee Signed
Date: Oct 28, 2009 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 38 : Road Trippin' it with JC: A Rumble in Manhattan

so....he's pretty much perfect!  lol...I mean, I know he's not perfect (he is a guy after all and prone to making stupid mistakes) but this whole trip has been perfect!  can't wait to see what happens next :)

Author's Response: LOVE IT!  Even with all his imperfections and worries and such.... weird how that happens. HM! LOL. Thanks for your review! Love when people see it the way I do!

Reviewer: azchickadee Signed
Date: Feb 15, 2010 Title: Chapter 47: Ch 40: Road Trippin' it with JC:Laissez Les Bon Temps Rouler! (pt 2)

I love these two together!  I love how they are such a real couple together.  They are in no way perfect, but they are perfect for each other.  They fight, they piss each other off, they say things that hurt each other's feelings, but at the end of the day you know they love each other. 

Awesome update!  Keep 'em coming :)



Author's Response: Thank you!! 

Reviewer: azchickadee Signed
Date: Mar 14, 2010 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 41: Road Trippin it with JC | Some

gasp!  JC's ready for kids??  lol....that just made me really excited! 

Awesome update :)  I've said it before: JC and Serena are one of my favorite couples!  Bravo!!



Author's Response: Yeah but Serena... that girl... SIGH. I don't know that he's necessarily ready for kids but he seems ready to talk future and she's a scaredy cat. Look for this issue to build in future chapters! 

Reviewer: azchickadee Signed
Date: Apr 11, 2010 Title: Chapter 50: Ch 43: Road Trippin' it with JC| You are the Words, I am the Tune

looooved it!!  the song titles/lyrics game cracked me up!  lol...I'll have to remember that one for my next roadtrip :)  Once again, you've put together an amazing chapter.  I'm curious to see what happens between these two once they get "home" to LA...

Author's Response: Hee hee! I had fun with it. I worried that it would be lame, and it's probably not as good as it could be, but I'm happy with how it turned out. And they didn't fight ONCE! LOL. (I like writing difficult women. it's hard for me to make them sweet. HAHA) 

Reviewer: azchickadee Signed
Date: May 17, 2010 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 45: Enlightened

"Please. And tell no one of my naked dancing."

"You kidding? On my way to write a song about it." He snickered,   ahahaha!!!  best line ever!  I loved Serena puting on her "forbidden playlist". 

and break my heart!  "I don't know what it is about me that makes people want to get away from me but I want to fix that. Whatever it is."  I'm glad he's finally talking to someone though.  Talking good (and no I'm not just saying this because I'm a psych major!  lol).

As always, amazing update.  Keep up the good work, my dear :)



Author's Response: Thank you, thank you! I really liked this chapter. Easy to write. 

Reviewer: azchickadee Signed
Date: Jun 08, 2010 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 46: Merry Christmas, Part 1

okay...this section, had my heart melting and me literally laughing out loud.  I LOVE JC!! 

I caught a glimpse of him on the other side of the baggage carousel. I recognized his dark blue hoodie, zipped all the way up, his hands balled up in the pockets. Dark blue jeans. White sneakers. He'd shaved. Casual and unassuming. Beautiful.

I waved, trying to catch his attention but he was daydreaming, staring into space. I walked around the carousel and sidled up alongside him. Stretching up toward his ear I whispered, "Hey, sexy. Need a ride?"

"I'm taken," he said, not missing a beat, and then smiled down at me, a gorgeous smile from his eyes all the way down to his mouth. "Hi. You must have been sitting outside."

"Hi. I was too excited to wait at home. Andrea came with me."

"Oh, good. I haven't had someone staring at me in a long time."

 So excited you updated!  And twice!!  It was well worth the wait.  On to the next chapter......



Author's Response: Haha! I love writing him!

Reviewer: azchickadee Signed
Date: Jun 09, 2010 Title: Chapter 54: Chapter 47: Merry Christmas, Part 2

good grief, what is Serena's hold up?!  lol...I thought Andrea and Kim would be able to make her realize she's throwing away a good thing but she's still holding back.  She's starting to aggrivate me!  lol....I can only imagine how JC feels.

anxiously waiting the next chapter!  :)



Author's Response: Told yall she was fucked up! Lol! And she told JC that, too... Though she is driving him crazy. And she's supposed to drive readers crazy, too but she does have a point--- when did JC ever ask her what SHE wanted?

Reviewer: azchickadee Signed
Date: Jun 17, 2010 Title: Chapter 55: Chapter 48- New and Improved

great chapter!  I loved the stories at the first about Serena!!  lol...and Serena and JC together are always hot!  I love this story and these two together.  More soon please :)



Author's Response: My 200th review! AWESOME! Thanks, I'd been thinking about those stories for a while, wondering how to work them in. I finally found a great place for them I think. I love that she and her little brother fight so much but love each other to death. 

Reviewer: azchickadee Signed
Date: Jun 25, 2010 Title: Chapter 56: Chapter 49 Old Hen

oh my goodness!  so many thoughts!!  where do I start?!  This was a FANTASTIC chapter!  lol....I was cracking up through most of it and "awwing" through the rest. 

First off, I loved how JC was just lounging in bed with no intention whatsoever in getting up when Serena was leaving. Punk!  lol...Second, Serena's day with her mom was perfect.  I was curious, like everyone was I'm sure, about what Regina's request was going to be.  I bet it was hard for Serena to go through those questions and it's going to be hard for her to write that letter but it's going to be SO good for her to do this!!!

JC seriously cracks me up!  His whole demand for McDonalds and then complaining when she only brough back one burger for him had me litterally laughing out loud.  And Serena being all tongue-tied at talking to Joey?  lol...I hadn't thought about it, but she hasn't met any of the other guys, has she?  Heaven knows I would be tongue-tied if I were in her shoes!  I think she handeld it very well!! 

One thing I for sure wanted to comment on was the hug that JC gives to Serena.  Seriously, had me melting.  I've always imagined he would give good hugs....sigh....

The dinner with Serena's dad and his family was...interesting.  lol...Katrina is a piece of work!  Wow!  And again, JC's comment about dealing with screaming teenage girls for half his life made me laugh. I love the way you write him.  He's so funny and real and very close to what I imagine him being like in real life. 

And excuse me?  How can you end the chapter right there?!  lol...the next sweet and sappy chapter you're promising better be coming soon!  :)



Author's Response: *claps* I had fun writing this chapter. JC cracks me up, too. It's important to me for people to see JC as I see him.. sometimes serious but mostly pretty laid back and funny and sometimes a little bit of a sarcastic ass. He and Serena are totally made for each other-- he is almost her opposite, she's so high strung and emotional. And uh about the end? uhm... what had happened was... I ran out of room? Lol. I'll make up for it in the next chapter. *wink*

Reviewer: azchickadee Signed
Date: Jul 11, 2010 Title: Chapter 57: Ch. 50: Brand New Day

loved it!  I was laughing out loud a couple times (at JC...he is so funny and can be such a punk!  I love him!) and was in tears much like Serena was during the end of the concert and then when they went back to the room.  For a split second when she saw the "little white box" I thought he was going to propose!  I was like, omg, this is perfect!  lol...but he didn't.  Which was okay.  The chololate starwberries made up for no ring.  The whole evening was pretty much perfect :)  On to the New Year!  I can't wait to see what's in store for these two!!

Author's Response: Lol he's funniest when he's being a punk. He knows it's not time to propose and she's not ready... so he's backing off. He's impatient, though. It's building. Some things are going to go down in the next few chapters.