The fantasy: one of them choosing one of us
twenty-something, addicted to music, love to write, working on my Master's in psychology, waiting to fall in love...
Celebrity life is hard. You go through so much, so fast, until one day you forget who you are. Wouldn’t it be nice if someone, not your typical someone, was there to see you through it?
[*Short story brought back to life*]
shit, Shit, SHIT!! OMG. This is NOT going to end well!! lol...uhm, and can you say HOT. whew! Justin is DAN-GER-OUS. holy cow. lol...that whole licking her ear thing? *shudders* I would have melted into a puddle of goo at his feet!! I don't know how she managed to remain standing after that. I need more. Like now! :)
whoo-hoo! an update!! I was holding my breath through the whole chapter cuz I wasn't sure what was going to happen and I can totally feel Caroline's pain and confusion. And sad, heart-broken Justin is the worst thing ever! Guh! Poor baby....he always seems to get the shit end of the stick! lol. Excellent job, my dear :)
once they move in together they will have time to breathe? uhm....yeah right! lol...if anything, having Caroline move in with him while she's there for her job will just end up causing more confusion and pain and misunderstanding between them. I'm actually kind of scared for her to move to LA. lol...hoepfully it will all work out :)
aw, damn it. everything was going so well! lol...these two are HOT! good heavens...what a way to start a Saturday morning. good job. can't wait to see what happens next!!
awe!!! SO cute!! Love it. Seriously. Daddy JC is absolutely the cutest thing ever! :)
Author's Response:
Daddy JC is adorable. I had fun writing it.
Thanks for the review!
Walking through the front door, seeing your black dress hit the floor
Uh honey there sure ain’t nothing,
Like you lovin’ me all night long
And all I can think about is getting you home
Gettin' You Home-Chris Young
wow...that was...HOT! lol, great job :)
Author's Response: Thanks so much! That's what I was hoping for! lol Thanks for reading and reviewing!
"Our lives are made, in these small hours, These little wonders, these twists and turns of fate. Time falls away, but these small hours, these little wonders, still remain."
Justin looks back on different moments in his life, all leading up to the birth of his first child.
seriously?! so cute!! sigh...I want a guy like that in real life! :)
Haha, yes seriously. And girl, don't we all? lol That's why we create them in fictionland!
Everyone has their problems. He just never thought his would be this big.
I love, love, love this story! Even though the storyline is sad and I find myself getting teary as I'm reading every chapter and I want to just give Justin a great big hug cuz he seems like he's about to have a nervous and emotional breakdown, I love this story!!
I love that Lauren is going to be JC's homecare nurse! Yes! I think (at least I hope) this is going to lead to good things!! :)
I love that Chris was the one who came out and talked to Justin. That was unexpected but exactly what needed to happen.
Axiously waiting for the next chapter.....
ok, thoughts and comments...
first off, I am in love with this story (not really a big surprise since I like pretty much any and everything you write) and I think your writing is amazing!
#2: this part here, made me laugh out loud..."Oh, let's start talking about our past, Mr. Sugar Rush. I do recall being smacked in the face, jumped on and given shaving creme on my face with what little sleep I got with you four hellions around."
"I know nothing you are speaking of."
#3. don't tease me, it's just mean: He had to call them.
He wanted the group back.
JC, included.
#4. I wanted to cry at the end and be a part of that family/group hug. He really is going to be okay, right? Right? I don't know if I could handle JC dying...
oh my heck! my heart is breaking and I'm totally hooked! poor JC! he needs a hug...
Author's Response: Thank you! I wish I could give the man a hug, haha!!
eeeee!! an update!! lol...welcome back :) I'm almost so happy about the new chapter that I can forgive the cliff-hanger.
almost.
lol...I'm on the edge of my seat here. What happens next??
"And as sexual as that seems," JC said, finally smiling slightly, "let's go inside before my neighbors think I'm doing a drug deal or something ..."
hahaha!!! I love these two! seriously...SOO glad you're updating/working on this story again! :)
aww! poor Justin! he needs a hug...they BOTH need a hug! lol...great chapter :)
Author's Response: They do! and thank you!!! :)
sigh...this story must be phsycially and emotionally draining for you to write! I'm exhausted just reading the damn thing! lol...
Loved the reference to "Pixie Gate 1996"....lmao!!
Is JC ever going to let his family now what's going on or is he just going to continue to be stubborn? I think they should hire Lauren to be the private nurse! *nudge, nudge* lol...JC needs to find something to live and fight for and what better than love? :D
ack! JC is NOT going to take this very well when his parent's show up, but good for Justin for making that call!!
Author's Response: Yeah, someone had to do it, right?! Hahaha
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