oh goodness...dinner at Justins?!  this could be dangerous!  lol...can't wait!! 

Every chapter you suck me in and it's like I'm right there in the middle of all the action.  My heart was racing for Taylor and I was nervous for her while she was racing!  lol...awesome job!  Keep up the great work :)

ooo, Mr. Timberlake you are a smooth one!  lol...that whole hug and kiss on the cheek move?  I would have died! 

He better show up at the race.  He's been in the business long enough he should know how to elude the press....

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LOVED. IT.  Seriously!  I am in love with this story, girl!! 

This line made me laugh out loud: "If it makes you feel any better, you did it with style, Justin."

I love the way you write from Justin's perspective :)  Can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter!!  <3

okay, I know I've said it before but I just have to make sure you know that I love this story!  It is seriously, one of my all time favorites.  I love the fact that the characters are so real and down to earth and normal.  I love that they are slowly building up their friendship instead of automatically falling for each other and jumping into bed.  I love how you switch back and forth between the characters and how each one is so believable.  I love that Taylor is going to LA with Justin (can't wait to see what happens!) and I love how intrigued and captivated Justin is with her...

wow...that's a lot of love!  LOL.  I am insanely interested to see how this story continues to progress.  Keep up the amazing job :)

omg.  best thing ever.  love, love, loved it!!  I am amazed everytime you write a chapter at how you are able to switch between Justin and Taylor so smoothly.  (Actually, truth be told, I'm slightly jealous that you have that much control and are so in tune with your characters!  Teach me your ways, oh wise one.....lol)

okay, specific thoughts:

#1. "I like your lips...don't be too hard on them."  guh! Totally swallowed my gum.  Or I would have if I had been chewing gum!  lol...damn that boy is smoother than butter sometimes and I wonder if he realizes what he's doing or if it just comes out and that's just the way he is.  Sigh...

#2. "I spot Justin in a pair of khaki cargo shorts, a black polo on top, and his natural brown curls tucked underneath a William Rast logo baseball cap."  There are SO many good things in that sentence, where the hell do I begin??  lol...I love that he's got some curls in this story.  Not too many (don't really want the fro to come back) but just enough where there's enough to run my fingers through it...or I mean for Taylor to run her fingers through it....also, that whole outfit he's got on?  Yes please!  Can I order one of him to go?? :)

#3. "Don't you trust me?"  Oh, such a dangerous question coming from that man...

#4. Loved the interview scene but Justin's answers were cracking me up.  Can you say vague much?  He's gotten so good at evading questions about another solo album that none of us are going to believe him when he actually does put one out!  lol

#5. My heart is breaking for him over whatever it is that happened with Jessica but I'm glad that Taylor is there for him :)  and the way you ended the chapter was beautiful: trust is built rather than given.  So true!  And these two are definitely building a good foundation.  Can't wait to see what happens next!!  Eeek!!  :)

awwwww!  He signed her book!!!!  I LOVE IT!  omg...this chapter was so amazing because they both took that first scary step of really opening up to the other one.  That's always the hard part: making yourself vulernable and admitting your fears and secrets to another person. They are definitely stronger together and I love it.  I don't know if anything romantic is going to happen between them (I mean, I would love it to and the chemistry is definitely there between them) but it's just nice knowing that they've now both got a friend to lean on; someone they can trust and who will be there for them.  I'm glad Justin decided to go to Colorado :) 

This may be my favorite chapter so far.  Nicely done, my dear!!  <3

okay and NOW you have me REALLY intrigued!  You said you were veering from your first idea...is this Charlotte?  or is it someone new? 

Author's Response:

*grin* I love that you're so intrigued. Still not quite so sure where I'm going with the fic but I have a general direction. and...yesmaybethat'sCharlotte? ;) Thanks so much for the review! :)

nice mention there of JC cleaning the pool....I'm still waiting for the hot pool boy story you said you were going to write.....  ;D

Author's Response: Hey woman! I gave you your pool boy -- did I not? eh? eh? of course I did! A pool boy and SO MUCH MORE! lol...thanks for the love!